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I have 180 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 743751 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2120 of my 6,217 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2186 votes

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Cherry

tall storey

Once upon a time, a family was looking for somewhere to settle, came upon a piece of land and decided to build where the sun always shone and the...
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point of no return

Billionaires lobbying to avoid tax increase, while number of middle income taxpayers decreases Government can't pay education, social care, and...
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Poem of the week

October robin

cold air's become a glitter ball with falling leaves its swirling lights as trees dance round their disco hall in fearful thrill of frosty nights now...
Cherry

part 10

Mary jumped back from the hole and went to Wong, always keeping that hole in the web in sight, as if the Monster would burst through any time. "Wake...
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Cherry

part 9

Wong moved quickly over the fallen leaves, and Mary had to keep doing little runs to keep up. She was doing one of these when Wong stopped! Mary...
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2120 of my comments have received 2186 Great Feedback votes

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Enjoyed this, too

Posted on Sat, 06 Sep 2025

Enjoyed this, too

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Posted in Listen to the mad man

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that must be the Perfect

Posted on Wed, 03 Sep 2025

that must be the Perfect Freshers' Week :0)

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Posted in Leaving home Inspiration point ( IP )

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I really liked the tornado,

Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2025

I really liked the tornado, too! And Danielle's practicality after he had been imagining cannibals, as she wonders which local island :0) Also the description of them going across the rocks is great

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (7)

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Love :

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

Love :

tranquil distant hills

keeping their ancient secrets.

Spry and pure spirit of torrent,

fly across blessings bestowed

I am happy you have rain at last, and hope your garden has some soon, too, so you can...

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Posted in A Moment To Ponder

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Agree with Claudine and Drew,

Posted on Fri, 22 Aug 2025

Agree with Claudine and Drew, found this very well thought out and described, really convincing

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Posted in The Patrolman - 37 (1/2)

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I think of writer's block

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

I think of writer's block being like a desert peopled with shadows, but your words here are like rain, enabling millions of flowers to spring up from dry sand

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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Agree with Jenny, I really

Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025

Agree with Jenny, I really like how you are developing Constable John's character in this part

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Posted in Denied (Episode 22 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))

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You are keeping up the pace

Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025

You are keeping up the pace really well! I like how Jade is thinking of possibilities that had not occurred to Thomas as perhaps he has the potential to be a bit frustrating, always used to being in control. However maybe he will be good for Jade...

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 5

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Love both the word-sound and

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

Love both the word-sound and meaning of

"be more than beckoned to

by an Ice-cream van tinkle

or a sprinkle of glitter"

there must be so many, many questioning "why do we do, what we do?" these terrible days

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Posted in Lit

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I love "Clustering in clouds

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

I love "Clustering in clouds that shade" and "welcome showers"

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Posted in That all-important molecule!

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