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Persephone's first day
I came from darkness into darkness from walls of Earth, veined halls seeping mesh of fresh water down, along, down sought and silent-supped by...
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two paths (may be distressing)
lithe russet, fox flickers through trees' lichened blue haze black, in black of branches raven calls, excited somewhere high buzzards too know woods...
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at bay
you've gone to the moon we know only as light, a white finger from Heaven whose pulse pulls Earth's sheathing waves noise clings to us, we cannot out...
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to a pear
on the top shelf of our Co Op's reduced to clear section alone an economy bag of pears knobbly green and slightly bruised as a Martian footballer's...
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part 15
It was like a monster Mary couldn't see, wanting to rip her to bits like tissue paper, and squash her all at the same time. It screamed in her ears...
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Don't want to interfere with
Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2023
Don't want to interfere with a brilliant writer, but incase it is helpful, my son and other children here, the overwhelming feeling about social work was anger? I don't know if it is only here, where we live, but the problem is that they say...
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It does! I have been thinking
Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2023
It does! I have been thinking about it more, I loved how he is not full of despair, at all - he is the rubber ball bouncing in the concrete, isn't he?
Read full commentThe Care thing (I think about this a LOT sorry, having been tangled with it because of...
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This reminded me of similar
Posted on Tue, 22 Nov 2022
This reminded me of similar journeys, powered by Spangles, but it's also fascinating for describing a time of change in how people lived, the coming of plumbing and electricity, which now we take for granted. These wonderful memories of...
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yes! can see her making her
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
yes! can see her making her own homemade organic soup to throw at a painting :0)
She might even make it into a home schooling project, studying which kinds of soup are stickiest and getting the most effective chunk size. Can imagine her...
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Hullo, did you know M&S do
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2022
Hullo, did you know M&S do online measurements, or even ones on the phone? If you type into google "UK how to measure for bra" M&S website is at the top, so lots of people must need this? If you go to the page, there is also an opton to...
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" sea delivers selfless peace
Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022
" sea delivers selfless peace." It does. I liked this very much.
Was a bit confused by this,, is it a crowd of crows?
"A black crowd straddles the sand....
Later the rogue tangles with another crow,"
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Great to read Ugly Puggly
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
Great to read Ugly Puggly again, this bit is genius
"Well, if we’re gonnae go up tae the crematorium, a council van will blend in like a tombstone. And if anybody spots us, they’ll hink we’re council workers. No expect us tae move, or dae...
Read full commentPosted in Ugly Puggly 42
This is great! I read so many
Posted on Tue, 24 May 2022
This is great! I read so many historical fiction books as a child, they were my favourite, along with fantasy. And this should be published, if they still want historical fiction? You are describing the war so well! I have got a real feeling of...
Read full commentPosted in The Castle (4)
Phew, I thought now Ewan was
Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022
Phew, I thought now Ewan was being eaten up by the mysterious monster. It is like a detective story in its own right. Write
Read full commentPosted in Sticky Wullie
I don't want you to change a
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022
I don't want you to change a speckle of Ugly Puggly,he is perfect, an absolutely brilliant creation.I wish so much he existed. Even though he isn't real, I feel a bit better about all the things worrying me all the time, just imagining he is on...
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