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Penny's Pass the Story challenge begins here- who will be the first to take this snippet of a Who Done It and Why and weave the first chapter? And of course, have fun with it.
When my father was older he had to get dentures and he hated to wear his lower dentures and never did, unless it was absolutely necessary, like when...
371 of my comments have received 391 Great Feedback votes
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This is a great beginning
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026
This is a great beginning Celticman. You've opened tantalizing paths in this chapter that the next writer might follow. You've offered up a few telling details on the missing Mr. Snodgrass, For me, as I read it, it gave me the feel of a noir film...
Wow! Keansburg, NJ- Your story brought me there too and since I've also been there, it was extra special fun for me to visit it again in your words. If I remember correctly, from the boardwalk you could see the Manhattan skyline and the...
The boy does see ghosts....or something....in this eerie atmosphere.
A sinister beauty holds the reader spellbound with the description of mist and water crashing off rocks and the sighting of a sepia child, real, imagined, otherworldly?...
I'd worry about signing on for that premium package but...I did wonder if this mishap was the big argument Spencer was setting up? Could he be bluffing; is he able to disconnect his arm and reconnect it at will? Maybe he's testing Vanessa? I'm...
up to date again and still loving this strange world with advanced androids. Now that Spencer has a friend who is like him, I wonder how it will change the dynamics between him and Vanessa; how will it change him? And the introduction of Steve,...
This has become an addictive read for me...I’m on pins and needles waiting for the next, new episode of this unique story. I love that Spencer is turning more human and having more complex thoughts and, science fiction thriller alert, how those...
The wild imagination of childhood is precious; anything-everything-is believable to a child. I so enjoyed reading this with my Saturday morning cup of coffee, both brought a smile to my face.
I've just caught up again, and I’m truly enjoying this story. Still can not wait to learn the thoughts of the mother and how this will turn out for the children. You've created great characters, dimensional and believable, and built on their...
The late 60’s and 70’s were formative years for me too.I am there with you Jenny. The music fed our souls. The days of youth were awareness personified and anything was possible, felt possible, and the music was the background to it all. Losing a...
This is a great beginning
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026
This is a great beginning Celticman. You've opened tantalizing paths in this chapter that the next writer might follow. You've offered up a few telling details on the missing Mr. Snodgrass, For me, as I read it, it gave me the feel of a noir film...
Read full commentPosted in 'Penny’s Pass the Parcel’ Part 2
Wow! Keansburg, NJ- Your
Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2019
Wow! Keansburg, NJ- Your story brought me there too and since I've also been there, it was extra special fun for me to visit it again in your words. If I remember correctly, from the boardwalk you could see the Manhattan skyline and the...
Read full commentPosted in Life and Death Under the Hudson
The boy does see ghosts....or
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
The boy does see ghosts....or something....in this eerie atmosphere.
A sinister beauty holds the reader spellbound with the description of mist and water crashing off rocks and the sighting of a sepia child, real, imagined, otherworldly?...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)
so unexpected and such a
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
so unexpected and such a lovely surprise. Thank you for the POD, and the happy smile.....
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 30
I woould worry about signing
Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2024
I'd worry about signing on for that premium package but...I did wonder if this mishap was the big argument Spencer was setting up? Could he be bluffing; is he able to disconnect his arm and reconnect it at will? Maybe he's testing Vanessa? I'm...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You...Part 37
up to date again and still
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
up to date again and still loving this strange world with advanced androids. Now that Spencer has a friend who is like him, I wonder how it will change the dynamics between him and Vanessa; how will it change him? And the introduction of Steve,...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You.. - Part 34
This has become an addictive
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
This has become an addictive read for me...I’m on pins and needles waiting for the next, new episode of this unique story. I love that Spencer is turning more human and having more complex thoughts and, science fiction thriller alert, how those...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 14
The wild imagination of
Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2023
The wild imagination of childhood is precious; anything-everything-is believable to a child. I so enjoyed reading this with my Saturday morning cup of coffee, both brought a smile to my face.
Read full commentPosted in The Curse of the Thing in the Jungle
I've just caught up again,
Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2022
I've just caught up again, and I’m truly enjoying this story. Still can not wait to learn the thoughts of the mother and how this will turn out for the children. You've created great characters, dimensional and believable, and built on their...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 19
The late 60’s and 70’s were
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
The late 60’s and 70’s were formative years for me too.I am there with you Jenny. The music fed our souls. The days of youth were awareness personified and anything was possible, felt possible, and the music was the background to it all. Losing a...
Read full commentPosted in Interesting Times
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