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I have 247 stories published in 14 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 539271 times and 224 of my stories have been cherry picked.
378 of my 1,550 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 400 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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"Willow's Missing Tail" 24

The angle of the sun was approaching its nadir as the guests around Perfidia’s table finished their meals. The uncomfortable silence in the room was...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 23

Perfidia walked down the stairs but stopped when she saw Jon; had he waited for her? “I told you I wouldn’t be long;” she shrugged, continuing down...
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"Silence"

War inside my head explodes with feelings of disbelief and despair, paralyzing me with debilitating sorrow a sorrow painted by my anger at the...
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Endings

In the days that follow, we will fall into a depression and battle stomach wrenching pain at the incomprehensible diagnosis and seeing the ravages of...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 22

There was just over an hour and a half left before sunset when the doorbell played Beethoven’s Für Elise. Perfidia’s eyes widened and she looked at...
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378 of my comments have received 400 Great Feedback votes

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Buon compleanno Luigi!

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025

Buon compleanno Luigi!

You're a young soul and your poetic agility proves mental exercise is as imperative as the physical counterpart in staying young. Your gift of words thankfully posted on this site, have brought smiles to all who read...

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Posted in 1935

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Very well deserved golden

Posted on Wed, 22 Jan 2025

Very well deserved golden cherries Hudsonmoon----This was a gem of a story. Pearls of humor drip from every word of resolution. And as always, the character's and dialogue were pure perfection. Please keep writing these vignettes; they are founts...

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Posted in Making Resolutions at Ned's 1944

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I love the build up in the

Posted on Fri, 10 Jan 2025

I love the build up in the last few chapters and the cliff hanger of an ending in this one- Did Spencer escape out the bathroom window? Is he going to cybermates to fix his head? I cannot wait for the next chapter to post.

You have a gem...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 47

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I agree with insert- you are

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025

I agree with insert- you are very thoughtful neighbours and you took excellent care of your friend's home. This was an enjoyable read; thank you for posting it.

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Posted in The Stone That The Builder Rejected, Has Become The Cornerstone.

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Thank you Di- He was the best

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025

Thank you Di- He was the best part of me. That photo is of course a younger one but his face was much the same, no lines and always smiling that great smile. My sons, although going through a harsh grief too, are helping me stay strong.

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Posted in "Silence"

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A look back over the years

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025

A look back over the years can give us insight into the necessary path we've taken to be where we are and make us thankful for even the trials and errors because it brought us here. I will never regret the years I've had with the person I loved...

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Posted in This Is Where The Story Starts

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Unfortunately, the fight for

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025

Unfortunately, the fight for freedom and our individual rights will never be completely over; it is eternal. We must forever make our voices heard, especially over the din of lies and the wiles of misdirecting foes.

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Posted in Phoenix 2030 (a dream)

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Thank you Di-Hard- I am

Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024

Thank you Di-Hard- I am struggling to understand the why and feeling the guilt we'd missed something sooner, some sign that could have changed this outlook. It's a battle I am desprate for him to win and I'm hoping for a miracle.

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Posted in Endings

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he sounds like a

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024

he sounds like a contradictory character- I enjoyed the flow of your definitions and how the final line defined them, 

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Posted in He Was

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I had a feeling the narrator

Posted on Mon, 28 Oct 2024

I had a feeling the narrator was ethereal but then you added human concerns and I wasn’t so sure. This well plotted tale led the reader deeper and deeper into the morbid awareness of the situation and seeing the events from the vantage point of...

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Posted in Ghost Story

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