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I have 202 stories published in 13 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 180715 times and 161 of my stories have been cherry picked.
309 of my 1,304 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 325 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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"As The Leaves Turn..."

Canvas of yellow and orange Draping the landscape Hint of a chill wind In the air Hot chocolate Simmering on a stovetop Woolens retrieved From...
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Cherry

"The Coffee House Spy" 12

Brent’s heart squeezed with pain seeing his brother’s life resigned to a dozen labeled boxes and his furniture and mementos tossed haphazardly into...
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Gold cherry

"Hug-a-lass"

The amber glow of the setting sun and the crunch of bicycle tires on dead leaves sent shivers down her spine. “Roger, I don’t think I’m going inside...
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Cherry

Willow's Missing Tail" 10

The portal was not closed to Willow. She slunk into the garden and her midnight coat blended into the shadows, but her eyes glittered with magical...
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Cherry

"The Coffee House Spy" 11

Emily stared at the small square drive in her hand; why was it hidden in Sir Harry’s collar? It didn’t look like a chip used for tracking. She...
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309 of my comments have received 325 Great Feedback votes

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The melodic verses are

Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024

The melodic verses are reminiscent of a song; I can almost hear the guitars and drum beat behind the words- But is it a lament to how it was, or homage to youthful arrogance? As in all backward glances there are blurred and sharp images; some...

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Posted in Sic Transit Gloria

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A voice of a molecule,

Posted on Sat, 06 Jan 2024

A voice of a molecule, fascinating poem Rhiannon.smiley

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Posted in Autobiography (but not mine!)

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Autobiography of a water

Posted on Sat, 06 Jan 2024

Autobiography of a water droplet, a brilliant take on the water cycle and a well written poem. I enjoyed the journey and philosophical thoughts from the droplet.

Will that be my end?
Well, if that plant’s eaten
I may be
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Posted in Autobiography (but not mine!)

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Thriller vibe thoughout this

Posted on Fri, 08 Dec 2023

Thriller vibe thoughout this tale was gripping; sorry the bird didnt make it. 

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Posted in Bird Hex Accusation

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I'm so glad there is more to

Posted on Fri, 08 Dec 2023

I'm so glad there is more to this story; it's so unique and I am having so much fun reading it. Cannot wait for the next posting. This could be a Movie or even a TV series; it has a lot of potential. 

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Posted in Parcel for you ......Part 9

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I’m sorry to hear about your

Posted on Sun, 29 Oct 2023

I’m sorry to hear about your trees; I’ve lost a few in storms too so I know how much it changes the landscape, and storms of that magnitude can be frightening. As for your poem, it hits the chord of humanity; picks at those who offer cold,...

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Posted in October 2023

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So well said Luigi and in

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

So well said Luigi and in rhyme too! Very profound ending- wish the leaders on this planet could understand that and abide.

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Posted in One Good Turn

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It drew me in from the first

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

It drew me in from the first line and I had to look up 'afrit', but it was worth it. The dark tone of this tale, for me, felt reminiscent of a Dickens tale. Is this a beginning of a longer story, or was it just a snippet of intrigue? Either way,...

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Posted in Automne Parisien

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Thank you Jacques. Happy

Posted on Sat, 28 Oct 2023

Thank you Jacques. Happy Halloween to you too!smiley

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Posted in "Spirit of Sleepy Hollow on All Hallows Eve" Part 4 of 4

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Conflict eternal with man's

Posted on Sat, 28 Oct 2023

Conflict eternal with man's inability to exist in peace, to leave ego out of the equation, talk as equals and allow for differences and feel the precious connection of humanity we share. Refuse hate and live and let live, that should be simple...

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Posted in open your eyes!

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