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Martha ran ahead of Perfidia and Dillon into the garden calling Willow’s name. She was desperate to find her and her heart was beating in triple time...
Thomas was glad his friend Eugene was a night owl because it took only five minutes of sitting on his doorbell to break into his focused, online game...
The banquet table in Perfidia’s massive, living room was laden with an array of tantalizing comfort foods. The mingling aromas drew the men from the...
375 of my comments have received 396 Great Feedback votes
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All the songs you listed
Posted on Wed, 27 May 2026
All the songs you listed played in life back then too. We've so many things in common growing up in the same decades, buying the songs that filled our days was sunshine was one of them. Hope you are doing well, Jenny. Thank you for taking the...
Haven't read all the other titles so I'm not sure if this is a continuing storyline but, as a stand alone, this drew me in. I want to know what happens next to Joe, Liz and Jean. And I love the atmosphere you created: the room, the conversation,...
Thank you for posting a finale to 'Pass the Story' so happy you decided to particiapted. And I was wondering if aliens would show up, and now they have. Great alternate ending, Jane!
The movement in this finale was much like a dance and to have the Sheriff we all presumed was dead come back to life, was very Hitchcock. I loved how you ended it, it was a thrilling read. Thank you for participating in the challenge and adding...
I tried to follow the other chapters, find a connecting suspect but I hope you'll write your final chapter Celticman - switch it up - or shoot somebody- because whichever way you conclude it, I know I will enjoy reading it.
I'm not a fan of Springsteen either, never found much to applaude in his music, but your rendition, and new verses, on the Mamas and the Papas 'California Dreamin' was chilling, and not without truth. I think Dr. Suess's Butter Battle Book might...
Feels like there might be a trip into the twilight zone for Helen. I agree with Insert- an intriguing start to a story, curious to see where it will go.
A humorous way to end it Soulfire77, which proves the conclusion can go any way an author imagines so I do hope soneone will take up the challenge and write the next chapter, and the last.
All the songs you listed
Posted on Wed, 27 May 2026
All the songs you listed played in life back then too. We've so many things in common growing up in the same decades, buying the songs that filled our days was sunshine was one of them. Hope you are doing well, Jenny. Thank you for taking the...
Read full commentPosted in "The Way We Heard" - All you need is Love- 1967
Your poem is music, chords of
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
Your poem is music, chords of words beautifully arranged in poetic harmony. A garden profound with palpable sorrow but your hope a joyous crescendo.
I am broken hearted to read what you are going through my friend. Please stay strong and...
Read full commentPosted in Where Thoughts Take Me
Haven't read all the other
Posted on Sat, 02 May 2026
Haven't read all the other titles so I'm not sure if this is a continuing storyline but, as a stand alone, this drew me in. I want to know what happens next to Joe, Liz and Jean. And I love the atmosphere you created: the room, the conversation,...
Read full commentPosted in "Hey Joe!"
Thank you for posting a
Posted on Wed, 15 Apr 2026
Thank you for posting a finale to 'Pass the Story' so happy you decided to particiapted. And I was wondering if aliens would show up, and now they have. Great alternate ending, Jane!
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass the Story - Part 10
The movement in this finale
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2026
The movement in this finale was much like a dance and to have the Sheriff we all presumed was dead come back to life, was very Hitchcock. I loved how you ended it, it was a thrilling read. Thank you for participating in the challenge and adding...
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 10.
And justice is served. Nicely
Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026
And justice was served. Nicely done Marandina, I imagined this unfolding like a scene in a movie - and it was a thrilling ending....
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10
I tried to follow the other
Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2026
I tried to follow the other chapters, find a connecting suspect but I hope you'll write your final chapter Celticman - switch it up - or shoot somebody- because whichever way you conclude it, I know I will enjoy reading it.
Read full commentPosted in "Pass the Story" Chapter 9
I'm not a fan of Springsteen
Posted on Sat, 04 Apr 2026
I'm not a fan of Springsteen either, never found much to applaude in his music, but your rendition, and new verses, on the Mamas and the Papas 'California Dreamin' was chilling, and not without truth. I think Dr. Suess's Butter Battle Book might...
Read full commentPosted in Is Kerry Katona a Cat Owner?
Feels like there might be a
Posted on Sun, 05 Apr 2026
Feels like there might be a trip into the twilight zone for Helen. I agree with Insert- an intriguing start to a story, curious to see where it will go.
Read full commentPosted in I. Deep Storage - Part One
A humorous way to end it
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2026
A humorous way to end it Soulfire77, which proves the conclusion can go any way an author imagines so I do hope soneone will take up the challenge and write the next chapter, and the last.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 8.
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