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Eurus owns the Eastern winds And all the autumn colors The Blazing trees Gold and red September’s Artful nature October nights Shortened days Through...
It sounds like you could be a Brick Master with the way you describe your enjoyment. My older son loves lego's too and as a child, at the age of 5, he begged for the Pirate Ship. He was so determined and adamant that he could build it that we...
Your humor is intact in this gripping piece of autobiography and that amazes me; it had to have been harrowing when you woke up and realized you were on the floor, and not being able to reach your daughter had to be frightening. I don't know why...
This was beautifully read on Saturday Paul and it is a beautiful read; I'm so glad you've posted it again here. It is well deserving of those golden cherries!
The concrete jungle and the open green pastures; nice depictions of the issues in both dwellings as the city does need more green space and the countryside could use more amenities; although, “their surroundings are real cool" - Enjoyed this...
A nightmare; that's what this felt like; a never ending dream of horror. Tragic, that she almost tasted freedom but failed in her attempt to flee.The ending is powerful in its looping her back to captivity.
Agree with Marandina; those Victorian dolls gave me a Haunted Mansion vibe, but the dream sequence that moved your sleeping spirit along was woven well throught out your poem. Dreams are like that, mercurial, starting in one place and swiftly...
When I was younger, my older cousin taught me the game of Chess. He quickly became an excellent player and as you’d guess, soon I couldn’t win, but I learned something from losing. I began to watch his moves and learned ways to avoid some of them...
azure perfumed tapestry...
Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023
azure perfumed tapestry....just lovely!
Read full commentPosted in Bluebell Woods
It sounds like you could be a
Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023
It sounds like you could be a Brick Master with the way you describe your enjoyment. My older son loves lego's too and as a child, at the age of 5, he begged for the Pirate Ship. He was so determined and adamant that he could build it that we...
Read full commentPosted in I love Lego!
Your humor is intact in this
Posted on Thu, 06 Apr 2023
Your humor is intact in this gripping piece of autobiography and that amazes me; it had to have been harrowing when you woke up and realized you were on the floor, and not being able to reach your daughter had to be frightening. I don't know why...
Read full commentPosted in BITTY BARBY BOOB, RIP
Cannot imagine living through
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023
Cannot imagine living through those feelings but so glad you came out the other side of that, but sorry you had to go through it at all.
Read full commentPosted in Nothing Concrete
This was beautifully read on
Posted on Mon, 03 Apr 2023
This was beautifully read on Saturday Paul and it is a beautiful read; I'm so glad you've posted it again here. It is well deserving of those golden cherries!
Read full commentPosted in A Requiem for One Man’s Life (Edited and Updated 2023)
The concrete jungle and the
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023
The concrete jungle and the open green pastures; nice depictions of the issues in both dwellings as the city does need more green space and the countryside could use more amenities; although, “their surroundings are real cool" - Enjoyed this...
Read full commentPosted in "15 minute walk to nature for all" aim
A nightmare; that's what this
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023
A nightmare; that's what this felt like; a never ending dream of horror. Tragic, that she almost tasted freedom but failed in her attempt to flee.The ending is powerful in its looping her back to captivity.
Read full commentPosted in Nothing Concrete
The beauty of nature will
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023
The beauty of nature will awaken tired spirits. I loved this poem Jenny; it is so sweet and relaxing a read; perfect for a spring day!
Read full commentPosted in Relaxed Day In Summer
Agree with Marandina; those
Posted on Wed, 29 Mar 2023
Agree with Marandina; those Victorian dolls gave me a Haunted Mansion vibe, but the dream sequence that moved your sleeping spirit along was woven well throught out your poem. Dreams are like that, mercurial, starting in one place and swiftly...
Read full commentPosted in Dreaming
When I was younger, my older
Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2023
When I was younger, my older cousin taught me the game of Chess. He quickly became an excellent player and as you’d guess, soon I couldn’t win, but I learned something from losing. I began to watch his moves and learned ways to avoid some of them...
Read full commentPosted in Scrabble Stalemate
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