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"The Coffee House Spy"

By Penny4athought on Sat, 23 Jul 2022

Her favorite coffee shop was crowded with the morning rush of fellow caffeine addicts and Emily wasn’t in the mood to wait in the twenty person deep...

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"Willow's Tail" 32 ( Conclusions Part 2-- the ending)

By Penny4athought on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

So, we drink your potion and tell the truth?” “Exactly,” Perfidia stated placing the two potion laced tea cups on the table. Jon picked up one cup...

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"Willow's Tail" 31 ( Conclusions Part 1 of 2)

By Penny4athought on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

Willow strolled over to Perfidia but couldn’t contain her cat laugh. “Yeah, I know my plan backfired and you think its funny but I need you to fix...

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"Willow's Tail" 30 ( narrowing down the suspects)

By Penny4athought on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

“I’m glad you’re willing to talk to me,” Jon said as he placed the teacups on the table. “I wouldn’t say willing; it’s more like compelled,” Perfidia...

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Moving story, showing the

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

Moving story, showing the plight of the children in an unstable marriage; you've highlighted it. How the oldest child had to become the parent and sort out the troubled marriage by forcing her father to admit his choice; very sad and all too true...

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You may say you're a liar but

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

You may say you're a liar but you are convincing- you made me google: "JASPER AI" and was I shocked to see it got a hit…I cannot believe there is such a thing; what are we coming to? Will we eventually just let someone live our lives for us, drag...

Posted in 2023 A Trustworthy Liar

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This is an exceptional piece

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

This is an exceptional piece of writing Paul and I want to do it justice in my comments. First off, it drew me in from the first line; I didn’t feel it was fictional; it felt like I was reading a journal entry because of the realistic flow of...

Posted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

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Human entitlement knows no

Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022

Human entitlement knows no bounds. Your poetic words poignantly highlight the tragedies caused by man. Your depiction of the dolphin’s plight is terrifying and painful to read in its truth, and makes me wish there was some magic in the world that...

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I have to tell you I'm truly

Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2022

I have to tell you I'm truly enjoying this story and I love it when I see another chapter posted. The characters are likable and believable, I am curious to know what the mother's reasons for leaving her children could be so I'm impatiently...

Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 6

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So now we have the

Posted on Sun, 30 Oct 2022

So now we have the perspective from the older brother, adding layers to your story. I am curious to know where the mother has gone to and why she left her children to fend for them self. And how could she leave a four year old? That begs so many...

Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 2

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Great start; it's a well

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

Great start; it's a well structured and believable story, sad and realistic. Now I want to read the next chapter and see how they manage to keep the secret, and make ends meet.

Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 1

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What an imagination you have

Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022

What an imagination you have Di-hard; this reads like Alice in wonderland. Strange goings on for Mary, Wong and a Quartermaster. I loved the surreal quality of the world you've created; it's like a Picasso in words.

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A dark and shivering poem; I

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2022

A dark and shivering poem; I loved it!...all things spooky and otherwordly, perfect for Halloween. I love this holiday; thoughts of the unknown and hope those we love are not lost to us, plus all the decorations and spooky good fun. And now I'm...

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A spectral and morose walk

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022

A spectral and morose walk through a graveyard; you’ve captured the essence of Samhain Jenny. The thin veil between life and afterlife is threaded throughout your Poe like poem ; and so apropos to the Season; well done.