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I have 253 stories published in 15 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 613745 times and 230 of my stories have been cherry picked.
395 of my 1,605 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 421 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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Roses are Red and Diamonds are Blue CHAPTER 1

The wayward winds Blast through life On a whim Changing everything J ane lifted the lid on the old trunk and the musty smell of trapped time...
Cherry

Twisted Time

“It is time.” Bilal said quietly but his sister shook her head not wanting to believe him. “You can not ignore it Sireal, I am telling you we have to...
Cherry

Trapped in An Episode of SURVIVOR!

Survival, a word I previously associated with a TV show. One I’d never watched because I’m not much of a ‘live or die’ type and didn’t want to see...

Aphrodite's Slipper

She followed the red bird into the forest; it flew high up into the dappled sunlight coming through the canopy of thick branches and well shaped...
Cherry

Awaken the Muse

Imagination sparks Tinder ignites Liquefied sunshine Runs through my veins I am free Free to fly Unseen wings Carry me Past yesterday Through dreams...
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395 of my comments have received 421 Great Feedback votes

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I could feel the forest

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

I could feel the forest around me and it was a peaceful walk along with you. I too love deers though there are none where I live now and I wish we did not hunt these and other animals as we do, though I understand in times of old it was necessary...

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Posted in Nature's Ambiance

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Adorable, the tempo and beat

Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2019

Adorable, the tempo and beat of this sounded like a nursery rhyme. I loved it and could see it with illustrations on a page in a children's book of poems.

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Posted in Colours for Kids 11)

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I love a rainy day when all

Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2019

I love a rainy day when all things are renewed with the drenching. Your poetic descriptions accurately painted a grey, yet still colorful, walk in the rain and I enjoyed walking it with you. I felt the sadness in your words at the memory of lost...

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Posted in Cocktail Of Clouds And Rain

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Away from city lights, on a

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019

Away from city lights, on a dark night, gazing up at the velvet, endless sky, it gives a new persepctive. We are so small, so inconsequential in the scheme of this expansive universe. It humbles and makes me aware of the fragile workings of our...

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Posted in Looking up

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Beautifully written, perfect

Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2019

Beautifully written, perfect descriptions of a rainy day, wind blowing and rain pouring down while you view it cozily from inside and playing a game of scrabble. ( I love scrabble) . It all sounds so inviting... and as you'd wished...I hope the...

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Posted in Periods Of Joy

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Your descriptions made me

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019

Your descriptions made me feel the changes of seasons, the arid air and the cooler rush of spring moving this ever flowing river along - and the quest to be strong, like the river. I felt several different meanings in the words and to each reader...

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Posted in prairie river flowing

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Your story and words felt so

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

Your story and words felt so real. The acceptance of the spirit of the lost child, still ephemerally in their lives, was touching and heartfelt. The notion that The Mother and Child connection is never severed came through beautifully. Katy is ...

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Posted in Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)

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I love the flavor of

Posted on Mon, 20 May 2019

I love the flavor of friendship in this – you’re letting us in on your thoughts as this day unfolds, like we’re best friends and I laughed, commiserated and cheered and it was so much fun spending the day there – I truly enjoyed your wit and...

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Posted in Pad Life 3: Tunnelling Through

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I could not stop reading,

Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019

I could not stop reading, each morsel of this story was more tender than the last. The way you wrote of the beauty of her poetry conjured images both amazing and provoking, winter can be warmly cold and artistically beautiful. This was a great...

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Posted in The Norwegian Poetess

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Thank you airyfairy, it has

Posted on Fri, 03 May 2019

Thank you airyfairy, it has always stayed with me even though I'd never meet this relative, the ending of his life seemed so harsh for one so young (he'd turned 29 the September before that Christmas Eve) and the year 1944 just evoked so many...

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Posted in 1944 (12miles south of Spa Belgium)

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