Jade wasn’t amused. She was not jumping from this train; she’d rather confront and fight off their pursuers than tumble out of a moving vehicle ever...
Not sure if I followed the directive for the challenge but this is how I viewed the year 1967 in my own youth, and why the choice of song was inspirational to me, and still is.
Penny's Pass the Story challenge begins here- who will be the first to take this snippet of a Who Done It and Why and weave the first chapter? And of course, have fun with it.
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This is a great beginning
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026
This is a great beginning Celticman. You've opened tantalizing paths in this chapter that the next writer might follow. You've offered up a few telling details on the missing Mr. Snodgrass, For me, as I read it, it gave me the feel of a noir film...
Wow! Keansburg, NJ- Your story brought me there too and since I've also been there, it was extra special fun for me to visit it again in your words. If I remember correctly, from the boardwalk you could see the Manhattan skyline and the...
Dear Jenny, It is difficult to know you are going through this medical unknown, waiting for results and a treatment plan you need. Your poem is beautiful, painful and touching, and as it has been said many times before, you are a true poet. Your...
I am sitting with a cup of coffee listening to the morning birds in my backyard and found your poem. It was the best companion to those bird songs and brought the idea of srpingtime to life in my thoughts, walking me through nostalgic,happy...
The boy does see ghosts....or something....in this eerie atmosphere.
A sinister beauty holds the reader spellbound with the description of mist and water crashing off rocks and the sighting of a sepia child, real, imagined, otherworldly?...
I'd worry about signing on for that premium package but...I did wonder if this mishap was the big argument Spencer was setting up? Could he be bluffing; is he able to disconnect his arm and reconnect it at will? Maybe he's testing Vanessa? I'm...
up to date again and still loving this strange world with advanced androids. Now that Spencer has a friend who is like him, I wonder how it will change the dynamics between him and Vanessa; how will it change him? And the introduction of Steve,...
This has become an addictive read for me...I’m on pins and needles waiting for the next, new episode of this unique story. I love that Spencer is turning more human and having more complex thoughts and, science fiction thriller alert, how those...
The wild imagination of childhood is precious; anything-everything-is believable to a child. I so enjoyed reading this with my Saturday morning cup of coffee, both brought a smile to my face.
This is a great beginning
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026
This is a great beginning Celticman. You've opened tantalizing paths in this chapter that the next writer might follow. You've offered up a few telling details on the missing Mr. Snodgrass, For me, as I read it, it gave me the feel of a noir film...
Read full commentPosted in 'Penny’s Pass the Parcel’ Part 2
Wow! Keansburg, NJ- Your
Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2019
Wow! Keansburg, NJ- Your story brought me there too and since I've also been there, it was extra special fun for me to visit it again in your words. If I remember correctly, from the boardwalk you could see the Manhattan skyline and the...
Read full commentPosted in Life and Death Under the Hudson
Dear Jenny, It is difficult
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026
Dear Jenny, It is difficult to know you are going through this medical unknown, waiting for results and a treatment plan you need. Your poem is beautiful, painful and touching, and as it has been said many times before, you are a true poet. Your...
Read full commentPosted in Torment
I am sitting with a cup of
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2026
I am sitting with a cup of coffee listening to the morning birds in my backyard and found your poem. It was the best companion to those bird songs and brought the idea of srpingtime to life in my thoughts, walking me through nostalgic,happy...
Read full commentPosted in Through The Mist Of Time
The boy does see ghosts....or
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
The boy does see ghosts....or something....in this eerie atmosphere.
A sinister beauty holds the reader spellbound with the description of mist and water crashing off rocks and the sighting of a sepia child, real, imagined, otherworldly?...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)
so unexpected and such a
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
so unexpected and such a lovely surprise. Thank you for the POD, and the happy smile.....
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I woould worry about signing
Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2024
I'd worry about signing on for that premium package but...I did wonder if this mishap was the big argument Spencer was setting up? Could he be bluffing; is he able to disconnect his arm and reconnect it at will? Maybe he's testing Vanessa? I'm...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You...Part 37
up to date again and still
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
up to date again and still loving this strange world with advanced androids. Now that Spencer has a friend who is like him, I wonder how it will change the dynamics between him and Vanessa; how will it change him? And the introduction of Steve,...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You.. - Part 34
This has become an addictive
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
This has become an addictive read for me...I’m on pins and needles waiting for the next, new episode of this unique story. I love that Spencer is turning more human and having more complex thoughts and, science fiction thriller alert, how those...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 14
The wild imagination of
Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2023
The wild imagination of childhood is precious; anything-everything-is believable to a child. I so enjoyed reading this with my Saturday morning cup of coffee, both brought a smile to my face.
Read full commentPosted in The Curse of the Thing in the Jungle
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