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"Willow's Missing Tail" 29
Martha stood by the tray of tea and scones shocked by what had just transpired. “Are you okay?” Dillon touched her arm and she turned to him with a...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 28
Dillon stood in the kitchen doorway watching Martha blend tea with efficient movements. When she looked up he pushed away from the doorjamb and...
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"Willow's Missing Tail" 27
Jon entered the study and all eyes swung to him, all except Perfidia’s. She was standing across the room and pretending he wasnt there. Her recent...
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"Music takes me there again..."
The first chords stopped time Senses engaged Memory touchable sunshine lit tableau Billboard top ten Once upon a time Danced in the soul Raced along...
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'Willow's Missing Tail" 26
Perfidia opened the door and stared at the two unexpected callers on her doorstep. “Percival? Miriam? What a…surprise.” “Good evening Perfidia,”...
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Loved how it moved in seasons
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025
Loved how it moved in seasons, words creating images of heat and frost and defined the shortness of life. The final line about flowers as life's consort, for me, brought the thought of flowers on a grave, Beautifully written Marandina,.
Read full commentPosted in After the Geese
I agree with Jupitermoon,
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
I agree with Jupitermoon, your poem is powerful and heartfelt. The vivid word play, the mercurial pace of each line drives the message, and the message is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Read full commentPosted in Wired Differently
Loved the quick tempo, much
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
Loved the quick tempo, much like the frantic pull to scroll,and the ending’s warning of consequence - brilliantly stated. Our brains are shrinking by the unnatural light of our mobiles as are our lives. We are losing the need for tangible...
Read full commentPosted in 3 oz of Insanity
Great beginning...just the
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
Great beginning...just the right amount of spooky intrigue and I love the title. Your depth of surroundings draws the reader in, it dimensional and your characters fill the space creating the reality of the tale. I'm not sure I like the idea of...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (3)
What an honor your comment
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025
What an honor your comment was to read. Thank you Di-hard for letting me know how much you enjoyed this poem. It made my day.
Read full commentPosted in Float Downstream.....
Where do I begin -- so much
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2025
Where do I begin -- so much here to unpack and soooo much fun - to poke at the state of our union here....or lack of it -- having J.C. being interrogated - I laughed and it was sheer joy - I'm so glad you are continuing this..... it is making me...
Read full commentPosted in J. C. Jones V - Let us Eat
I have just read all of these
Posted on Fri, 23 May 2025
I have just read all of these and they are sooo funny. And as a good..uhh...not exactly practicing.....uhh...let's go with, had a Catholic upbrining, person...I loved your take on J.C. and I think, since he was stuck in human form and had to deal...
Read full commentPosted in J. C. Jones IV - Take Me Out of the Ball Game
Thank you Turlough - I'm not
Posted on Mon, 14 Apr 2025
Thank you Turlough - I'm not so sure where it will go either. This beginning of a story came from one of those mind spinning mornings, mindless musing while I dressed, but it got lost during the work day and I'm not sure exactly what it is I've ...
Read full commentPosted in "Where to Diner"
Such a fun read. I love the
Posted on Fri, 11 Apr 2025
Such a fun read. I love the.characters. I started late in the story and will have to find the start and read through but I've enjoyed all of your tales, especially the undertakers. I agree with Jenny- very well deserved POD.
Read full commentPosted in Stiffed (Episode 5 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
So happy to see this next
Posted on Fri, 11 Apr 2025
So happy to see this next chapter.
Cedric is a conniving robot and stilll creepy. I hope Vanessa won't be taken in by his gourmet talent or Spencer will have to show his friend the door, and soon. I enjoyed getting Spencer's perspective....
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