“Martha…Are you reading this?” Perfidia’s voice was low and vibrating with anger. “I’m right next you Perfidia and yes, I am,” Martha responded in a...
The Mom and Dad peddled the tandem bike over the bridge, pulling the wagon behind them with their son, Joey, and the magical dog inside it. Once they...
Perfidia looked at the large tome on Martha’s bookshelf. “This thing is going to follow me around? For how long?” “Until it decides you’re a capable...
Thies and Brent shared a look that telegraphed they were at an impasse with the non-agent, fake, fat guy. Thies narrowed his eyes on the smug captive...
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I love how this opened a
Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024
I love how this opened a flood of comments and I read every one, all kinds of opinions and facts to be shared here. And that is what good writing needs to do or in this case a commentary. It opened up a discussion, created a marketplace of ideas...
Like Jenny your story hit me in a familiar way. In 2005 both of my parents became sick with life ending illnesses, we didn’t know about my mom’s until a week before she passed away. My dad lingered on for two months past her. It was life altering...
I think I took a different walk through this poem. One that was only in the mind, imagined. Where all things spark, light and dark.That forest was haunting; its ability to spring forth optimism and its penchant for snubbing it out were well...
Intriguing start, can't wait to see where this leads and what that thing is...have a feeling it might be magic, but not sure if its good. Hope there is more.
Oh Jenny I hope you are better soon; I'm so sorry to hear you have pneumonia. Please take care of yourself. -- I am happy to see you're writing and I much enjoyed this 'dear diary' post. I was taken in by the vivid imagination stirred by an out...
I agree with all comments above; this is interesting in the extreme...a soul train to purgatory and now on platform 2?...All is unknown. I can't wait for the next part to see where this will lead.
Beautiful poetic rendering of the quiet beauty of nature; if that all could see its worth as you do and work to preserve it; the world would be better for it; and so would we. Lovely poem Jenny; thank you for posting it.
Enjoyed reading this and I understood that part about trying to put yourself to sleep, when your mind just fills with mundane stuff, and won't keep quiet no matter how much you try to shut it down. You’ve a good attitude about the day not going...
I love how this opened a
Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024
I love how this opened a flood of comments and I read every one, all kinds of opinions and facts to be shared here. And that is what good writing needs to do or in this case a commentary. It opened up a discussion, created a marketplace of ideas...
Read full commentPosted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)
Like Jenny your story hit me
Posted on Sat, 31 Aug 2024
Like Jenny your story hit me in a familiar way. In 2005 both of my parents became sick with life ending illnesses, we didn’t know about my mom’s until a week before she passed away. My dad lingered on for two months past her. It was life altering...
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (extract) - Facing up
I think I took a different
Posted on Fri, 30 Aug 2024
I think I took a different walk through this poem. One that was only in the mind, imagined. Where all things spark, light and dark.That forest was haunting; its ability to spring forth optimism and its penchant for snubbing it out were well...
Read full commentPosted in Forest in the Brain
Empathy and innocent logic of
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Empathy and innocent logic of a child mixed with the ability to believe magic is possible; a lovely poem that touches the child in all of us.
Read full commentPosted in Making Potions
Intriguing start, can't wait
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Intriguing start, can't wait to see where this leads and what that thing is...have a feeling it might be magic, but not sure if its good. Hope there is more.
Read full commentPosted in Tom's Secret
Oh Jenny I hope you are
Posted on Mon, 24 Jun 2024
Oh Jenny I hope you are better soon; I'm so sorry to hear you have pneumonia. Please take care of yourself. -- I am happy to see you're writing and I much enjoyed this 'dear diary' post. I was taken in by the vivid imagination stirred by an out...
Read full commentPosted in His Flight
An honor and a true surprise-
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024
An honor and a true surprise- Thank you so much
Read full commentPosted in "Book of All Answers"
I agree with all comments
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024
I agree with all comments above; this is interesting in the extreme...a soul train to purgatory and now on platform 2?...All is unknown. I can't wait for the next part to see where this will lead.
Read full commentPosted in The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two)
Beautiful poetic rendering of
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024
Beautiful poetic rendering of the quiet beauty of nature; if that all could see its worth as you do and work to preserve it; the world would be better for it; and so would we. Lovely poem Jenny; thank you for posting it.
Read full commentPosted in State Of Bliss
Enjoyed reading this and I
Posted on Mon, 20 May 2024
Enjoyed reading this and I understood that part about trying to put yourself to sleep, when your mind just fills with mundane stuff, and won't keep quiet no matter how much you try to shut it down. You’ve a good attitude about the day not going...
Read full commentPosted in The Car Boot Today.
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