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I have 109 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 110230 times and 123 of my stories have been cherry picked.
15 of my 537 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 16 votes

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Laurie Avadis

Hello wonderful people - my first novel - Ex was published by UnBound on the 27th August 2015. To buy it go to http://www.amazon.co.uk/Ex-Laurie-Avadis/dp/1783520876/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF...

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And? The polar bear and the rowing boat

‘ Entertaining and genial, the polar bear is vocal and delightful. They have become very popular pets because of their docile temperaments, tendency...
Cherry

Jungle

I am an inveterate liar but you can believe this – you can believe this. In the jungle you live in perpetual fear and motion. Everything you want to...
Cherry

Tiger

This is what morning looks like in the supermarket, from my bed sandwiched between the top shelf and the stuttering neon roof panels. There is a...
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Cherry

A naked boulevardian

This where the fire engineer lives, in an elastic bedsit in the interstices between Beaujolais and Thunderbird the tactical skin wince-flexing around...
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Cherry

Lose the ivory towers - a novel

Lose the ivory towers - a novel Chapter 1 The cake resembled a star cluster which had coalesced into a glutinous supernova and had then been...

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15 of my comments have received 16 Great Feedback votes

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Brilliant writer gets justified accolade

Posted on Mon, 17 Nov 2014

Very well deserved Richard. It ia apparent that you live in the real world with your eyes wide open and write intruitivy and instinctively about what the every day world slams into your field of vision. 

Sheryl thought for a moment. ‘How...

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Posted in Neighbourhood Blues

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Brilliant poem

Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2019

I really enjoyed it 

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Posted in God rest ye merry, gentlemen

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Soundcloud

Posted on Thu, 21 Nov 2019

Thank you very much indeed. I will try to do just that.

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Posted in Mars

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Reading night

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2019

Hi thank you - yes I have just emailed Mark to say I would love to read.

I have a poetry collection coming out next year so it would be good to read some poetry for once!

 

L x

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Posted in American Diaspora

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Done it!

Posted on Sun, 16 Sep 2018

 

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Posted in Tangerine static

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Ok this time it is definitely correct!!

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

 

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Posted in I have an imaginary daughter

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A catechism to the shadow of a man

Posted on Wed, 24 May 2017

Obviously this made me cry many times over. Thank you - there is obvious industry here but the lighter touches make Jean's story take wings. The art was his internet, the gothic architecure he cherished was somehow internal, the music was the...

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Posted in JEAN (From Ribbentrop's Chair)

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This is masterful

Posted on Sun, 20 Dec 2015

This is masterful storytelling. It feels like you have really hit your stride and your love of the subjects shines through. This really feels like a novel now and one which will have popular appeal. There is no longer any conflict with the...

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Posted in BERNARD - Part 1 (from "RIBBENTROP'S CHAIR")

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You won pick of the day in

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

You won pick of the day in your first week Marcia - that is a big deal!!!!

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Posted in in seeking

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Excellent

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

painting with words - superb 

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