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I have 111 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 121757 times and 129 of my stories have been cherry picked.
16 of my 548 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 17 votes

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Laurie Avadis

Hello wonderful people - my first novel - Ex was published by UnBound on the 27th August 2015. To buy it go to http://www.amazon.co.uk/Ex-Laurie-Avadis/dp/1783520876/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF...

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A naked boulevardian

This where the fire engineer lives, in an elastic bedsit in the interstices between Beaujolais and Thunderbird the tactical skin wince-flexing around...
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Lose the ivory towers - a novel

Lose the ivory towers - a novel Chapter 1 The cake resembled a star cluster which had coalesced into a glutinous supernova and had then been...
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The emergency bassoonist

The emergency bassoonist sits in his huddle-flat on the frayed edge of functioning cradling his telephone in his crumpled lap, waiting. With each...
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Poem of the week

Mars

'I am going to live on Mars’ she told me, schoolgirl shoe-scuffing at the planished patina of our marriage ‘I am to become a Cosmonaut describing a...
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Poem of the week

American Diaspora

On the drunken filigree of midnight, some time between 1987 and 1997 (a decade I have disembowelled and entombed) whilst one-shoe shuffling beside a...

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16 of my comments have received 17 Great Feedback votes

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Excellent

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

painting with words - superb 

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Posted in in seeking

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Great first posting

Posted on Mon, 16 Nov 2015

Very evocative - it takes the reader on an incredible journey - looking forward to your next post 

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Posted in first of ever firsts

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Reminded me of Harold Pinter

Posted on Sat, 06 Sep 2014

You write with a lovely free flow, an easy strength. You are using words like weapons.

Brilliant work

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Posted in Time-Lined

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It sounds like you went to a school like mine Lindy

Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014

Discovering that my teachers were amongst the ranks of the undead would not have been a surprise. 

Very well written  - a really fun read!

Laurie

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I very much liked

Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014

I very much liked

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and you fall down

This is heartfelt work

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