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I have 102 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 98623 times and 114 of my stories have been cherry picked.
13 of my 521 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 14 votes

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Laurie Avadis

Hello wonderful people - my first novel - Ex was published by UnBound on the 27th August 2015. To buy it go to

My stories

Gold cherry
Poem of the week

Tangerine static

Butterfly kisses of frost
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Poem of the week

I have an imaginary daughter

I have an imaginary daughter whose age is as malleable as the particulates of frost which freckle the eyelashes of snowshoe hares ‘Don’t stay out too...
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And? - Bedlam

And? Bedlam When Tiberius Drake was 11 years old (36 days after the inopportune flattening of his father under the drum of a disconsolate steamroller...
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The Whale Cafe

This is the cafe in the park where the whales come for breakfast, between the hours of 8 and 9.45am. It is waitresss service only and each whale has...

Her father was a thunderstorm

The years rained down on her like a child's spiteful playground punches. She was brutalised by the time in which she lived, a time, when those who...


13 of my comments have received 14 Great Feedback votes

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It sounds like you went to a school like mine Lindy

Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014

Discovering that my teachers were amongst the ranks of the undead would not have been a surprise. 

Very well written  - a really fun read!


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Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014

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and you fall down

This is heartfelt work

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Posted in Happy life