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2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 205217 times
and 139 of my stories have been cherry picked.
19 of my 555 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 20 votes
Laurie Avadis
Hello wonderful people - my first novel - Ex was published by UnBound on the 27th August 2015. To buy it go to http://www.amazon.co.uk/Ex-Laurie-Avadis/dp/1783520876/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF...
My stories
Sandcastle
I live in a giant sandcastle which is conveniently positioned for schools, shops and other local amenities There are no other giant sandcastles in my...
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- 631 reads
Iriecat
First garden tremble on kiss soft paddy paws to spine shake yawls I held you, I hold you your father You circle chased a squirrel, roared with joy on...
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All the lost places
I moved the bed last night and found you underneath, reading. ‘Don’t mind me’ you said, making a blissful violence with your mouth ‘I am neither...
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And? The polar bear and the rowing boat
‘ Entertaining and genial, the polar bear is vocal and delightful. They have become very popular pets because of their docile temperaments, tendency...
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Jungle
I am an inveterate liar but you can believe this – you can believe this. In the jungle you live in perpetual fear and motion. Everything you want to...
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You won pick of the day in
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
You won pick of the day in your first week Marcia - that is a big deal!!!!
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Excellent
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
painting with words - superb
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Great first posting
Posted on Mon, 16 Nov 2015
Very evocative - it takes the reader on an incredible journey - looking forward to your next post
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Reminded me of Harold Pinter
Posted on Sat, 06 Sep 2014
You write with a lovely free flow, an easy strength. You are using words like weapons.
Brilliant work
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It sounds like you went to a school like mine Lindy
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014
Discovering that my teachers were amongst the ranks of the undead would not have been a surprise.
Very well written - a really fun read!
Laurie
Read full commentPosted in Unwillingly to school
I very much liked
Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014
I very much liked
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and you fall down
This is heartfelt work
Read full commentPosted in Happy life
great fun - good writing
Posted on Sun, 27 Jan 2013
great fun - good writingRead full commentPosted in Changes
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