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You've given a thorough
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026
You've given a thorough accounting of the affairs of these characters, Turlough. This story has grown legs and it's moving all over the place. I cannot wait to see who the next chapter's author will be, and where they will take it.
Thank you Luigi for participating in the challenge. I enjoyed the transition into a counterfeit ring and counterfeit murder, a criminal turn of events. Now we will have to see what developments the next writer will bring to this story.
You have opened a discussion with your thoughtful posting. I too struggle with the idea of God, though I was raised to believe in God I have lost that childhood innocence and find myself questioning the existence of a supreme being,especially in...
Yes, Frankie was the sweetest dog, kind and with a look of intelligence in his eyes that everyone saw. I miss him and it took me 6 years but I did rescue another dog in January, a three-legged shepherd-husky mix and Kona is the total opposite of...
That was my dog Frankie , a friendly, big as a bear, Labrador - That was how he sat in the backseat of the car, like a person looking out the window at the world. The picture was real, no photo-shop needed and he was the best dog ever....
I read this when first posted but the depth of emotion it elevated in me made it difficult at the time for me to post a comment, to tell you how impressive a story you've created here. I've very much wished for a sign such as the one you wove...
Your reminiscences always take me back to similar days in my life- My first Broadway play was also at the tender age of sixteen, it was 'Jesus Christ Superstar' and the lead actor with his long hair and beautiful face drew on this teenagers...
You've given a thorough
Posted on Mon, 23 Mar 2026
You've given a thorough accounting of the affairs of these characters, Turlough. This story has grown legs and it's moving all over the place. I cannot wait to see who the next chapter's author will be, and where they will take it.
Read full commentPosted in Penny’s Pass the Story - Part Four
Thank you Luigi for
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2026
Thank you Luigi for participating in the challenge. I enjoyed the transition into a counterfeit ring and counterfeit murder, a criminal turn of events. Now we will have to see what developments the next writer will bring to this story.
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass the Parcel Part 3
You have opened a discussion
Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2026
You have opened a discussion with your thoughtful posting. I too struggle with the idea of God, though I was raised to believe in God I have lost that childhood innocence and find myself questioning the existence of a supreme being,especially in...
Read full commentPosted in The Possibility Of Having Lived Other Lives
Yes, Frankie was the sweetest
Posted on Mon, 16 Mar 2026
Yes, Frankie was the sweetest dog, kind and with a look of intelligence in his eyes that everyone saw. I miss him and it took me 6 years but I did rescue another dog in January, a three-legged shepherd-husky mix and Kona is the total opposite of...
Read full commentPosted in "Penny's Pass the Story"
That was my dog Frankie , a
Posted on Mon, 16 Mar 2026
That was my dog Frankie , a friendly, big as a bear, Labrador - That was how he sat in the backseat of the car, like a person looking out the window at the world. The picture was real, no photo-shop needed and he was the best dog ever....
Read full commentPosted in "Penny's Pass the Story"
Beautiful expression of the
Posted on Thu, 04 Dec 2025
Beautiful expression of the process of inspiration and imagination coming together to spark creativity. Well desered POD and POW...
Read full commentPosted in Happiness Of Anticipating Inspiration
Hi Insert- thank you for
Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2025
Hi Insert- thank you for reading this poem-- I'll admit while forming those wintry descriptions, I felt a shiver too.
Read full commentPosted in "Winter Constitutional"
I read this when first posted
Posted on Tue, 21 Oct 2025
I read this when first posted but the depth of emotion it elevated in me made it difficult at the time for me to post a comment, to tell you how impressive a story you've created here. I've very much wished for a sign such as the one you wove...
Read full commentPosted in Why does it always rain in graveyards?
Chilly imagery and a hat tip
Posted on Wed, 26 Nov 2025
Chilly imagery and a hat tip to Jack frost, perfect for the season.
Read full commentPosted in Frosty Artist
Your reminiscences always
Posted on Fri, 21 Nov 2025
Your reminiscences always take me back to similar days in my life- My first Broadway play was also at the tender age of sixteen, it was 'Jesus Christ Superstar' and the lead actor with his long hair and beautiful face drew on this teenagers...
Read full commentPosted in Drama Of Pheromones
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