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I have 262 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1244137 times and 353 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1647 of my 5,140 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1684 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (23)

Part 22 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-22 Sunlight glinted on windows, occasional white flashes flaring on...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (22)

Part 21 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-21 Sea breezes brought the tang of salt and brine, a reticent sun...
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Gold cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (21)

Part 20 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-20 An effusive afternoon sun splashed across library walls like...
Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (20)

Part 19 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-19 The old lady peers into a mirror. It has an ornate frame made of...
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Cherry

Atoms

Atoms Fuselage in shadow, target due east, cargo measured by atoms, lives suspended by the spider-thread of false deities. Image free to use @...
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1647 of my comments have received 1684 Great Feedback votes

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In a tumultuous week in an

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2026

In a tumultuous week in an extended period of global turbulence that is unsettling for so many of us, sometimes it only takes a few words to capture the essence of what’s going on.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of...

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Posted in Tanka

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Cheers, T. I wouldn't want to

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

Cheers, T. I wouldn't want to spoil this for anyone reading all the way through to the end...

....but....just between me and you:

[It was the butler with the candlestick in the billiard room] 

[Just don't tell anyone else]

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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Something that’s bothered me

Posted on Sun, 14 Dec 2025

Something that’s bothered me for years. Ah...a long running mystery finally solved.

This hilarious piece is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

I have added a pic to promote your work on social media. Just let...

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Posted in Taking a Dalek up the stairs

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I know nothing at all about

Posted on Wed, 28 Apr 2021

I know nothing at all about Tarkovsky. (I thought he was a right back for Everton) Super poem that makes me wanna look Tarkovsky's work up.

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Posted in Conversations About Tarkovsky in a Copenhagen Restaurant

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So sorry to hear that, Jenny.

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2026

So sorry to hear that, Jenny. That's awful news and you are being incredibly brave about it.  I hope that you get the very best care from those involved. I don't know what else to say other than I hope you continue posting and keep everyone in...

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Posted in Lung Biopsy Result

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A careful study of the

Posted on Thu, 30 Apr 2026

A careful study of the altruistic nature of friendship.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

I have added a pic to promote your work on social media. Just let me know if you...

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Posted in The Less Miserables Lose a Friend (1)

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It's a difficult one, Jenny.

Posted on Sat, 18 Apr 2026

It's a difficult one, Jenny. Risk v reward. There's risk with most procedures. It just depends whether you can live with it. Logic suggests getting to the bottom of it all as, that way, you have the chance of an effective remedy. Coughing for the...

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Posted in Tomography

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You might be right, T. We're

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

You might be right, Luigi. We're going in circles. Someone needs to take charge. I think the next writer will do just that. Not my genre at all but I can't see why this won't be wound up inside 4 more chapters. There's another 8,000 words...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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Sel Ticman is a force of

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

Sel Ticman is a force of nature that's still blowing around like rampant tumbleweed. Maybe he'll feature in future chapters. I think he was last seen selling copies of his books at a local market in downtown Denver. Funny really...I feel as...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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So much unsaid. Beautifully

Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2026

So much unsaid. Beautifully conceived.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

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Posted in Transcript

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