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I have 275 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1354266 times and 372 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1726 of my 5,341 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1774 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Why does it always rain in graveyards?

Why does it always rain in graveyards? The procession of gravestones is staring at me. That’s how it seems with not a soul about. I scan the horizon...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (8)

Part 7 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-7 The transition from routine ramble in familiar settings to alien...
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The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube

The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube The Grand Marine Hotel stands imperiously looking out over the Bristol Channel as it has done for many dust-coated...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (7)

Part 6 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-6 Billy watched snake-eyed as a shape ghosted through the fog. Appearing...
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Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

Part 5 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-5 Sunday morning brought with it a thick enveloping mist rolling inland...
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1726 of my comments have received 1774 Great Feedback votes

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"The joy of a sandy beach

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2026

"The joy of a sandy beach
and warm sea.."

The sense of joy and enjoyment shines through in this poem, Rhiannon. Built on fond memories, I'm sure. There's nothing quite like the wonderment of taking children to the seaside. 

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Posted in Young family’s 3-Day Holiday Adventure!

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I guess the moon is

Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2026

I guess the moon is underrated when you think about it. 

Plenty of sage observations in here with your trademark underlying humour. 

It's a strange one to think the moon is slowly (very slowly) drifting away from its orbit. I did...

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Posted in Letter to the Moon

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“And if it’s a temporal

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2026

“And if it’s a temporal distortion, a threshold opening to instant death?” Cool line. 

Yet another big finish! Disappearing into a Black Hole.

Will be reading more. 

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book Two, Souls Adrift (28)

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I really like that. You could

Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2026

I really like that. You could record an audio version and add it to this. I'd definitely listen to it.

I can picture a blues bar in downtown, Memphis, a 3-piece playing as folks drinking on bar stools tap their feet and swig their Jack...

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Posted in Twelve Bar Blues

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Who knew snail racing was so

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2026

Who knew snail racing was so competitive?!

Your knowledge of gardening puts me to shame, T.

A wonderful tale soaked in the traditions of your adopted country. 

 

 

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Posted in The Way We Heard - Rein Me In

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Thanks for reading, T.

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2026

Thanks for reading, T.

Sorry to hear that. Those final days are tough on everyone. 

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Posted in Dog Days

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“Oh, you mean Stayner, Chase

Posted on Tue, 30 Jun 2026

“Oh, you mean Stayner, Chase and Mable, mice in the walls of the world, gnawing their way out.” That's a cool line.

Stayner still lurking in the storyline. 

Will be reading on..

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book Two Souls Adrift (26)

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"He had yet to decide. Any

Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2026

"He had yet to decide. Any mistake or miscalculation would not only cost him his life but also put Pry and the others in terrible danger…"

Another cliffhanger finish. Draws the reader in.

Will read on...

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book Two Souls Adrift, Revision (25)

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Thanks for reading, Ray.

Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2026

Thanks for reading, Ray. Really appreciate the detailed comment.

This stuff comes alive when folks gets invested in it.

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"Beth wiped Thorn from her

Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2026

"Beth wiped Thorn from her hand on her jeans. The fairy-stained jeans would soon meet their end in Trudy’s fireplace." Oof. 

Another drama filled chapter. 

Will be reading more. 

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book Two, Souls Adrift, (23)

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