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I have 239 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 892948 times and 321 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1539 of my 4,833 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1557 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/1603-purgatory-part-one-two The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part Two of Two) With that the monk-like...
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The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two)

The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two) Air shimmered in iridescent layers, desert heat smouldering under a cloudless Arizona sky. A diamondback...
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Cherry

Eclipse

Eclipse Clouds in a dawn sky seen through stoical eyes can sometimes seem like ethereal carriers of innermost angst. Maybe there is a silent...
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Poem of the week

The Moon Maiden

This poem is based on a Japanese folktale about a childless couple – a bamboo cutter and his wife – who are given an infant by the Moon Maiden. It is...
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Falling

Falling I am no one . White walls washed by sodium light was all I could see. There was a certain kind of claustrophobia that went with the room, a...
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1539 of my comments have received 1557 Great Feedback votes

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"...a yearning leaves upon

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025

"...a yearning leaves upon your face
to be out there by weather tossed."

What a beautiful poem and very much written in a classical way.

So skilfully done, Rhiannon. I enjoyed this one, in particular. 

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Posted in Daffodil

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The style of the poem made me

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2025

The style of the poem made me think of Kipling [Echoes of "If" even with the serious subject explored here].

A very skilfully executed piece of work. 

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Posted in Fifty Shades of Death

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Ah...we remember them all.

Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2025

Ah...we remember them all. Quite poignant reading this on the 7th birthday of my beloved ginger toms - Travis & Perkins. A lovely read. Thanks for sharing the memory, Jenny. 

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Posted in Tibbs Out On The Tiles

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Let's hope a better America

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

Let's hope a better America emerges from its current mess. Sadly, his term in office has a way to go yet. Who knows where will all be when the Trumpmeister is finally done. 

Good on Alfred Muggins for contiuing to call out the Orange...

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Posted in Chronicles Of Trumpenstein : The Progress Of The Trumplings by Alfred N.Muggins, Armchair Reporter

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That's a powerful lamentation

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

That's a powerful lamentation and an apt metaphor.

Grieving for an animal is tough. I think it's because they are so vulnerable and dependant on us. There's a feeling of inevitable guilt that comes with everything else. 

A...

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Posted in This Sad Blister

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It reads like an elegy. I

Posted on Sun, 29 Jun 2025

It reads like an elegy. I imagine after living a life like that, time was called sometime in the past.

You bring him to life in a warm, relatable way. Definitely an empathetic account despite his flaws.

[Yes, the Scots of Glasgow do...

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Posted in Those Shameful Blue Pyjamas

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Thanks for reading, T.

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

Thanks for reading, T.

Service stations off motorways are really black holes that people disappear through and return from when it's time to resume their journey.

Would I lie about this? (Well...yes...probably)

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)

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I've tweaked the first couple

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

I've tweaked the first couple of paras so this part now reads from Marie's POV. It does look smoother. Thanks for the suggestion! :)

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)

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This is an earthy, urban tale

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025

This is an earthy, urban tale laced with domestic angst. It's all very credible written with the 'twin syndrome' humming at its heart. Looking forward to reading more. 

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Posted in The Vale - Part Two

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That's a wild adrenaline ride

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025

That's a wild adrenaline ride. Great writing is this, Jane.

Very topical as we get a lot of street racing around here. Off to read the other parts. 

 

[Small typo: Should that be ‘Clue’s in the lyric, Adam.’?]

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Posted in The Vale - Part One (a)

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