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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 345225 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1217 of my 4,046 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1231 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Story of the week

A Cat, A Leaf and Fresh Fish

Rewritten story A Cat, A Leaf and Fresh Fish The early hours are invariably punctuated by nocturnal sounds; rodent-like scurrying amongst bins,...
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Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/song-siren-titan-story-part-one... Part Two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/song-...
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Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/song-siren-titan-story-part-one... Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three) “No...
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Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three)

Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three) Crows perch in a line along a telegraph poll. They seem to be either staring at me or peering...
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Pick of the Month

Ranthambore

Ranthambore Morning humidity with rising haze, sub-continental sun, indigo skies, arcane land-ship of silent voyeurs, clicking cameras and stoical...
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1217 of my comments have received 1231 Great Feedback votes

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"‘Hey, I did get the red

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

"‘Hey, I did get the red flags though, despite all my fatigue. I’m interested in what you meant by a couple of words.’

 

‘Dick, wanker, knob…’"

The naivity of Spencer is so well done and creates the canvass for the fish-out-...

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Posted in Parcel for you..Part 17

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"Haggling over the price of

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

"Haggling over the price of the vase.." Made me think of that scene from Monty Python's "Life of Brian" where Brian haggles over a gourd (my favourite comedy movie of all time).

My lad lived in Luton for 3 years where he attended...

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Posted in Tea with the Coppersmith

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"...beautiful tracery

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

"...beautiful tracery
of skeletal branches on clear skies.."

A lovely vigneette with gorgeous photos, Rhiannon. Paul

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Posted in January Skies

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I don't know the answer to

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

I don't know the answer to those questions other than that number 3 is a resounding 'no'. Good to see rogue reporter Alfred Muggins back and asking the questions where others fear to tread.

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Posted in The Big Questions of the early 21st Century (or 2023/24 to be more exact!) by Alfred N.Muggins, Reporter, Distant Observer, and Civilian Adjudicator!

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Another dramatic episode.

Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2024

Another dramatic episode. Looking forward to reading the next chapter already :)

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 12

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Up to date again with this

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

Up to date again with this ongoing travelogue.

Seven words of Farsi. Well, that's seven more words than I know.

"Kaseef Leeds" = "Dirty Leeds" I *knew it*

Yes, tours are great but time on your own is equally valuable. Another...

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Posted in The Man in the Iran Mosque

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"...not very high above the

Posted on Sat, 27 Jan 2024

"...not very high above the village but see far
and the steeple peeps to keep our orientation."

A very visual and pleasurable virtual ramble with you, Rhiannon. Lovely pics too :)

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Posted in Above Weobley

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As ever, thanks for reading,

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024

As ever, thanks for reading, Jacques. Always great to hear from you. Hoping you are both well in South Africa. 

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Posted in After the Snow

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All caught up again. Yes, I

Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024

All caught up again. Yes, I was captivated by the image of all those Hillman Hunters running around Iran. And the reputation of dirty Leeds stretches far and wide!

 

Your memory for detail is staggering. It shines through in these...

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Posted in Just Deserts

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Cheers, T. If anyone else

Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024

Cheers, T. If anyone else talked about reading it at 3am I wouldn't take them seriously. With you, on the other hand.. 

 

Appreciate the read and comment. Will catch up with your Iran story soon. 

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Posted in Silent Mystic

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