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I have 259 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1205169 times and 349 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1622 of my 5,056 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1658 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Body in the Library

Saturday 24th April 1976 The Body in the Library I always was a fan of Sherlock Holmes. Tales of his case-solving are legendary made even more...
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Portal

Portal She calls to him from distant Iron Hills scraping sepia skies, giants’ footsteps echo below. This portrait painting, dreams a thin veneer,...
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Cherry

The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part Two of Two

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/golden-fleece-ghost-walk-part-o... The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part Two of Two For a split...
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The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part One of Two

Leads on from: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/golden-fleece-part-two-two The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part One of Two I watched as Alice...
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Carols at Midnight

Carols at Midnight Light from a votive candle flickers – candescent, smells of incense permeate the pews. Beyond a prayer book stone floor seems...

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1622 of my comments have received 1658 Great Feedback votes

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That's a fascinating,

Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2026

That's a fascinating, sweeping summary of post-war PMs. A piece written with a good deal of authority. I guess you could say it's been quite a rollercoaster in terms of policies and personalities. We could be in for yet more radicalism at the...

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Posted in Thanks Clem!...Sorry about The Queue

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All caught up with this one.

Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2026

All caught up with this one. Intriguing and imaginative. My kinda story. More to come?

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Posted in Purple Mountain - Part 2

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"..a lone celandine,

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2026

"..a lone celandine,
banks of snowdrops.."

I was only thinking just the other day that I'm overdue a virtual ramble with you, Rhiannon. 

Wonderfully scenic and perfect for February. You seem very lucky to live where you do....

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Posted in Above Titley again

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The 'New World' could be a

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2026

The 'New World' could be a few different places at the time of writing. I like the refrain underpinning the poem's message. Nicely done. 

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Posted in Welcome to the New World (with musical accompaniment!)

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A worthy pastiche written

Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2026

A worthy pastiche written with authenticy and distinction.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and Bluesky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

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Posted in Courtesy Calls: The Fire Lane (1)

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That's an ominous final line.

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2026

That's an ominous final line. Looking forward to the next part!

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 9

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A salutary tale and one of

Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2026

A salutary tale and one of optmism and hope.

If only the leaders involved would heed these sentiments.

Well said and nicely done, Rhiannon. 

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Posted in Just imagine …

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"..a mysterious formulated

Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2026

"..a mysterious formulated vision

of Wonderland"

Full of intrigue and wonder. That's what nature is all about. 

Adventure encapsulated in a lovely poem, Jenny. 

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Posted in Let's Make Believe

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Harry Hill plays the nose

Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2026

Harry Hill plays the nose flute. Who knew?

Individualism captured in so few words but with vivid cultural imagery.

Nicely executed, Ewan. 

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Posted in I Go My Own Way

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Ah yes...heady days, I'm sure

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2026

Ah yes...heady days, I'm sure. Any event that distracts from the vagaries of Trump et al must be good. I'm not far from Glasto these days but if I ever attended the festival I would stay at a B&B somewhere. Far too much inconvenience staying...

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Posted in Glastonbury Festival 26 - 29th June 2025 Provokes Memories Of His Own Attendance In 1987 by Alfred N.Muggins

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