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I have 266 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1276001 times and 358 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1677 of my 5,207 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1714 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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After the Geese

After the Geese The last of the geese have flown, migratory release, a summer sown, snows due soon, polar winds biting, phases of the moon, new year...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (3)

Part two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-2 Marie’s mother was standing at the front door as the car pulled up...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)

BILLY TUDOR Part one at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-1 Marie Tudor was a single parent who needed to work to...
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Gold cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)

PROLOGUE Night sounds permeate woods, a nocturnal topography spot-lit silver by a diaphanous moon. Cumulus clouds drift silently, pregnant with...
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Cherry

The Fox and the Siamese

Life can be pure magic sometimes. The Fox and the Siamese Another rocket hit a building, a mushroom cloud billowing across my television screen,...
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1677 of my comments have received 1714 Great Feedback votes

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I think the risque aspect is

Posted on Thu, 21 May 2026

I think the risque aspect is done pretty coyly. I like the way the characters are being developed. If an emotional connection can me made that comes across as credible then that adds a lot of depth. You are doing it here.  

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It's a breathless sequence.

Posted on Thu, 21 May 2026

It's a breathless sequence. The pacing is good, the reader engaged and wanting to know what happens next. On to chapter 10..

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Eesh...that's a tense chapter

Posted on Tue, 19 May 2026

Eesh...that's a tense chapter. Again, very imaginative. I need to read on to find out what happens next..

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Congratulations! This is Poem

Posted on Sun, 17 May 2026

Congratulations! This is Poem of the Week!

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I’m a sucker for anything

Posted on Fri, 22 May 2026

I’m a sucker for anything with witches in it and this has seven! It’s also consummately written prose.  

That's why this is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

I have added a pic to...

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I agree with Jenny.

Posted on Mon, 18 May 2026

I agree with Jenny. Imagination in spades here. It's a gripping read. 

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Mable's a ball-breaker. Harsh

Posted on Sun, 17 May 2026

Mable's a ball-breaker. Harsh. Rooting for a way out for Chase. 

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There's some great

Posted on Sun, 17 May 2026

There's some great description in here. Very vivid and quintissential sci-fi. Nicely done, ray.  

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You have set the story up

Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026

You have set the story up well. It reels the reader in. 

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"..far sweeter than the

Posted on Thu, 07 May 2026

"..far sweeter than the rookery’s clamour raucous.."

A poem in simpatico with nature itself. All the sights and sounds of spring along with aspects of life and death.

(not sure I've ever encountered a cuckoo)

Wonderful,...

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