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I have 280 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1537149 times and 379 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1764 of my 5,447 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1820 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (3)

Part two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-2 Marie’s mother was standing at the front door as the car pulled up...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)

BILLY TUDOR Part one at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-1 Marie Tudor was a single parent who needed to work to...
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Gold cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)

PROLOGUE Night sounds permeate woods, a nocturnal topography spot-lit silver by a diaphanous moon. Cumulus clouds drift silently, pregnant with...
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Cherry

The Fox and the Siamese

Life can be pure magic sometimes. The Fox and the Siamese Another rocket hit a building, a mushroom cloud billowing across my television screen,...
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Cherry

A Move to Bleadon Hill

A Move to Bleadon Hill Bleak factories billowing smoke, steel towers industrial sentinels amid seas of concrete and glass; all of this now salient -...
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1764 of my comments have received 1820 Great Feedback votes

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"Welcome breeze

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

"Welcome breeze
shaking trees.."

I find myself celebrating cloud cover at the moment. The fall of rain comes to the popping of champagne corks just now!

There's a lovely rhythm to this poem, Rhiannon.

Here's to future...

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Posted in Breeze!

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Thanks, insert. I did think

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

Thanks, insert. I did think about that after I'd posted it. The hope is through writing and being a member at a site like ABCTales. I might add the IP as a category to this as I always forget about trying inspiration point. This week's is mine,...

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Posted in A Better World

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This is our story of the week

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2026

This is our story of the week – congratulations!

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Posted in The Way We Heard: Three Coins In The Fountain (1954) (Pt.1)

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The reality of a fateful trip

Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2026

The reality of a fateful trip to the market for the herd.

Sad, endearing and dark beauty in a stark reality that's taken for granted.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

I...

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Posted in The Drove

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That's a deep, philosophical

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2026

That's a deep, philosophical vignette, Penny.

Beautiful in its brevity. 

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Posted in "Lament"

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"..Saville’s trade mark yodel

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2026

"..Saville’s trade mark yodel cuts through the warm air like the mating call of a Loon." That made me shudder a bit. I remember those days when Savile was just another deejay.

I recall MySpace too although it feels like forever ago....

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Posted in The Way We Heard: That's Not My Name - The Ting Tings - 2008

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Eesh...Mabel Gillette

Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2026

Eesh...Mabel Gillette reappearing was a bit of a shock. 

Intrigued as to what comes next. 

Still following...

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Posted in Banished To Earth, Book Two, Dreamscape (30)

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"The joy of a sandy beach

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2026

"The joy of a sandy beach
and warm sea.."

The sense of joy and enjoyment shines through in this poem, Rhiannon. Built on fond memories, I'm sure. There's nothing quite like the wonderment of taking children to the seaside. 

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Posted in Young family’s 3-Day Holiday Adventure!

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I guess the moon is

Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2026

I guess the moon is underrated when you think about it. 

Plenty of sage observations in here with your trademark underlying humour. 

It's a strange one to think the moon is slowly (very slowly) drifting away from its orbit. I did...

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Posted in Letter to the Moon

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“And if it’s a temporal

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2026

“And if it’s a temporal distortion, a threshold opening to instant death?” Cool line. 

Yet another big finish! Disappearing into a Black Hole.

Will be reading more. 

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Posted in Banished To Earth Book Two, Souls Adrift (28)

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