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I have 268 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1291304 times and 361 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1684 of my 5,235 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1722 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Christmas Skies

An homage to John Betjeman and inspired by his poem written in 1954 called ‘Christmas’ Christmas Skies Chiming church-bells peal from afar, summoning...
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Where Maps End

Where Maps End Rays of maple light shimmer at sunrise, Dawn’s horizon cast on a glass sea below. Enveloping nascence, A quiet overture of birdsong...
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Who Wants to Live Forever?

For Halloween 2024 Who Wants to Live Forever? Fritz Erlinger was a name that came to haunt me, torture me as my life unfolded. Yet, in the beginning...
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Ghost Story

Ghost Story I don’t believe in ghosts. At least that’s what I’ve always said. Memories can be fragile. I should be lucid and know exactly what I’m...
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Unleashed

This is the fourteenth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Unleashed The planet looked as...
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1684 of my comments have received 1722 Great Feedback votes

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Oh thanks very much, Ewan. A

Posted on Mon, 20 Apr 2026

Oh thanks very much, Ewan. A surprise and a very welcome one.

I know you don't do X/Twitter these days. There is an offshoot of #TopTweetTuesday called #fragmentsfriday. It's a weekly poetry platform for poems of no more than 18 words. You...

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Posted in The Expanse

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"War shatters peace;

Posted on Wed, 15 Apr 2026

"War shatters peace;
but sometimes rescues peace and ends injustice.."

Another highly enjoyable ramble with some philosophical thoughts.

Gorgeous photos.

Nicely done, Rhiannon.

 

[Should that read "......

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Posted in Mytten Dingle, north Stiperstones

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Well what a turn up even for

Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2026

Well what a turn up even for the Orange One's book. A subsequent public spat....with a Pope! Would Leo have seen that one coming? Probably not. None of us did!

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Posted in Easter 2026 by Alfred N. Muggins (Part 2)

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There's a lot going on here,

Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2026

There's a lot going on here, even for Alfred Muggins. It's all a bit 'Home Alone' with a cast of thousands. Well....a cast of tens, then...

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Posted in Easter 2026 by Alfred N. Muggins (Part 1)

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Neatly done, Luigi.

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

Neatly done, Luigi.

The twists and turns of a mystery exposing the dark underbelly of a suburban town/hamlet in Middle America.

Now I know. Now we all know.

Well done in penning a great finale. 

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Posted in Penny Pass the Story - Part 10

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'Sunlight glinting on the 

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

'Sunlight glinting on the  water,
and the tumbling, bubbling sound of ripples.
Primroses here, a violet there,
bright white stitchwort here'

What a wonderful ramble and personalised through some personal updates weaved in...

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Posted in Delighted to get out!

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Ah just noticed it's 'Pass

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Ah just noticed it's 'Pass the Story' not 'Pass the Parcel'. We see what we want to see sometimes, don't we?

Thanks, Penny. This probably is a hash of numerous detective series and movies I have seen over the years. Maybe even a bit...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10

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Thanks Rhiannon. Yes, I kept

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Thanks Rhiannon. Yes, I kept looking at that. I don't usually use 'leggit' in my stuff. I will edit so thanks for picking that up.

I wasn't sure how quickly these part 10s were expected. I could have spent longer on this but we are where...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10

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Cheers, CM.

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Cheers, CM.

In future episodes, Sel Ticman goes on to be a best selling author, bigger than Agatha Christie and Jeffrey Archer combined.

Marandina was always too soft. Far too honest to get by in the States.

The Orange Menace...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10

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Thanks, insert. It was fun to

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Thanks, insert. It was fun to write albeit there's quite a bit of prep needed for this challenge as you have to be au fait with all the other stuff that's gone before.

Anyway....a big thank you to Penny for her generosity and creating some...

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