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I have 208 stories published in 26 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 415774 times and 276 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1269 of my 4,168 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1283 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Devil's Advocate (Part Three of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate Part Two at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate-part-two-...
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Cherry

Devil's Advocate (Part Two of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate Devil’s Advocate (Part Two of Three) It had been a long day and nurse Abbott...
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Devil's Advocate

Devil's Advocate (Part One of Three) At the top of the world, most things look tiny although a diaphanous moon might look like a large silver coin to...
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Gold cherry

Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/steve-mason-and-last-day-school-part-one-two Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two...
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Cherry

Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part One of Two)

This is the fourth entry in the series of stories at: https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve Mason and the Last Day of...
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1269 of my comments have received 1283 Great Feedback votes

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This intriguing instalment is

Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2024

This intriguing instalment is today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations, Ewan!

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Posted in 6 "You'll Hear My Voice, On the Wind, 'Cross the Sand"

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"The cruel busybody of a

Posted on Wed, 05 Jun 2024

"The cruel busybody of a neighbour thought it a great joke to say she’d been a victim of shelling.. " Dark, yet funny.

I remember those boil-in-the-bag curries. They tasted alright.

Dear old Joan certainly had a meandering mind. So...

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Posted in The Spice of Life

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This rueful reminiscense is a

Posted on Thu, 30 May 2024

This rueful reminiscense is a case of no Marley no cry and is our Facebook and Twitter/X Pick of the Day.

Congratulations!

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Posted in Bill or Bob?

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"Along to the incongruous

Posted on Tue, 28 May 2024

"Along to the incongruous
plantation of nine monkey puzzle trees.."

Another sumptuous hike. Enjoyed as always, Rhiannon. Beautiful photos too.

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Posted in On top of the world again!

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"The girl with the softest

Posted on Mon, 27 May 2024

"The girl with the softest edges

Who summons the stars.."

The personification of "dusk".

So many inspired, beautiful lines in this like:

"Her sermon is always of endings"

Just gorgeous.

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Posted in Dusk

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"Sea mist over the sea and

Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024

"Sea mist over the sea and distant cliffs,
walk the cliff path awhile.
Down into a cove, see a couple of oyster catchers with their red legs
near the surf.."

That sounds like an amazing walk full of wonderful sights. I...

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Posted in East from Cwm-yr-Eglwys

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I coiuld hear you reading

Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024

I could hear you reading this in my head, Ewan. Definitely one for audio. Seems so extraordinary and ridiculous calling an election in July when there's such a gulf in the polls. It's almost like giving up. Who knows? Count Binface is running...

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Posted in Empty M_______o

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"Let each pretty leafy glade

Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024

"Let each pretty leafy glade and

flowing brook give sparkling

eyes a sense of genuine wonder.."

Lovely photo, wonderful sentiments.

I was right there with you on that path, Jenny :)

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Posted in State Of Bliss

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"For fourteen years I endured

Posted on Sun, 19 May 2024

"For fourteen years I endured schools, but not nuns." Just finished watching Bodkin on Netflix set in Ireland. As ever, nuns gets a strange portrayal. They rarely get a good write-up taken even further by the likes of Father Ted.

Living in...

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Posted in This Sort of Thing - The Childhood Stage

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That's a clever premise. It

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024

That's a clever premise. It works standalone and can be continued. Nicely done, Penny :)

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Posted in "Book of All Answers"

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