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I have 242 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1085505 times and 327 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1571 of my 4,932 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1593 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Ghostbot (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/ghostbot-part-one-two Ghostbot (Part Two of Two) Jake tried hard to demarcate a longing to be...
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Ghostbot (Part One of Two)

“Death is the greatest illusion of all” - Rajneesh Ghostbot (Part One of Two) Cassie was dead to begin with. There was no doubting the fact as...
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Story of the week

Leviathan

Leviathan I had been scrolling for what seemed like hours. Each post scanned seemed darker than the last. Reading wall-to-wall invective wasn’t good...
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Tom Crean

It is said that Ireland is a haunted place full of spirits; a land where the dead are celebrated. Tom Crean The journey to the Emerald Isle had been...
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Poem of the week

Rain at the Forest Cafe

A morning coffee stop at a café in a clearing.. Rain at the Forest Cafe Fairy lights glimmer as I drink coffee at a bustling forest café – Dogs under...
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1571 of my comments have received 1593 Great Feedback votes

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Lots of rain around at the

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

Lots of rain around at the moment.

Life is about moments and they can catch us when we least expect them.

You have an eye for capturing what many would miss, Jenny.

Keep distilling them into poetry for us :)

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Posted in A Moment To Ponder

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Still gripping, still

Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025

Still gripping, still engaging, still classy.

[Teeny typo: Jade opened the door. “Diner is served.” Thomas waved at the table..Should that read 'dinner is served?']

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 5

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"..settling like

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

"..settling like

faerie folk, colours on pallet create

summer blooms.."

A lack of motivation and/or inspiration comes to us all in the end. Writing at sites like this makes such a difference as you encounter people that take...

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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"Turn on the lights – they

Posted on Wed, 27 Aug 2025

"Turn on the lights – they saw
drifting plankton, bioluminescent  creatures glowing.."

I like the way the poem pivots around the lights coming on. It makes it highly visual. I can only imagine the biodiversity at the bottom of the...

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Posted in From the Chinese Bathyscaphe, Striver

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I can see Alfred Muggins as

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

I can see Alfred Muggins as the next President. Why not? Literally anything is possible in the USA!

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Posted in Elected!: Alfred Muggins Considers Entering American Politics!

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That's great. Thank you!

Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2025

That's great. Thank you!

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Posted in A Tale Of Four Stones

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A very charming pen-portrait

Posted on Thu, 21 Aug 2025

A very charming pen-portrait so adriotly done.

Full of empathy I'm sure Mary would approve. 

The story is built so nicely then pivots on: “Hang on a minute. I haven’t got a teapot.”

[That's a fine teapot of your own there, T...

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Posted in Mary's Missing Teapot

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Such a clever story so well

Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025

Such a clever story so well told. There's someone out there for everyone! 

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Posted in On the verge of awakening

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Bloodsucker Vladimir Putinpot

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

Bloodsucker Vladimir Putinpot. Well...yes.

What a pantomime in Alaska. It's staggering to think that Trump is on the cusp of ending sanctions and willing to do business with someone so committed to the destruction of the West and all it...

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Posted in Mrs Muggins Goes On a Mini Tour of Italy, While the Butcher and the Clown Meet in Alaska! by Alfred N.Muggins

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Absorbing dialogue and

Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025

Absorbing dialogue and dynamics between the characters.

All infused with magic.

Keep going, Penny!

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 31

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