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I have 254 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1171403 times and 343 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1607 of my 5,008 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1640 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Body in the Library

Saturday 24th April 1976 The Body in the Library I always was a fan of Sherlock Holmes. Tales of his case-solving are legendary made even more...
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Portal

Portal She calls to him from distant Iron Hills scraping sepia skies, giants’ footsteps echo below. This portrait painting, dreams a thin veneer,...
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The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part Two of Two

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/golden-fleece-ghost-walk-part-o... The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part Two of Two For a split...
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The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part One of Two

Leads on from: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/golden-fleece-part-two-two The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part One of Two I watched as Alice...
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Carols at Midnight

Carols at Midnight Light from a votive candle flickers – candescent, smells of incense permeate the pews. Beyond a prayer book stone floor seems...

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1607 of my comments have received 1640 Great Feedback votes

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A salutary tale and one of

Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2026

A salutary tale and one of optmism and hope.

If only the leaders involved would heed these sentiments.

Well said and nicely done, Rhiannon. 

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Posted in Just imagine …

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"..a mysterious formulated

Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2026

"..a mysterious formulated vision

of Wonderland"

Full of intrigue and wonder. That's what nature is all about. 

Adventure encapsulated in a lovely poem, Jenny. 

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Posted in Let's Make Believe

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Harry Hill plays the nose

Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2026

Harry Hill plays the nose flute. Who knew?

Individualism captured in so few words but with vivid cultural imagery.

Nicely executed, Ewan. 

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Posted in I Go My Own Way

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Ah yes...heady days, I'm sure

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2026

Ah yes...heady days, I'm sure. Any event that distracts from the vagaries of Trump et al must be good. I'm not far from Glasto these days but if I ever attended the festival I would stay at a B&B somewhere. Far too much inconvenience staying...

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Posted in Glastonbury Festival 26 - 29th June 2025 Provokes Memories Of His Own Attendance In 1987 by Alfred N.Muggins

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Wonderfully evocative

Posted on Mon, 02 Feb 2026

Wonderfully evocative bringing another time and place to life.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Keep going and congratulations. 

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Posted in Tom All Alone (11)

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(perhaps even the greatest

Posted on Tue, 03 Feb 2026

(perhaps even the greatest sinner that ever lived?) Possibly harsh.

For all his foibles, I think he pales compared to Hitler, Stalin, Genghis Khan. The latter is allegedly responsible for up to 40 million deaths!

This reads like one...

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Posted in Jesus Returns To Modern Day America! by Alfred N.Muggins

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"Lifting blossom heads

Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2026

"Lifting blossom heads

towards sunlight.."

That's an optimistic uplifting poem, Penny.

Joyous and full of life.

Beautifully done. 

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Posted in "Crimson Morning"

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Some great word play and, as

Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2026

Some great word play and, as ever, all done with your trademark rhythm, Rhiannon.

The poem has a beat all of its own.

Very skilfully done. 

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Posted in Whatever the British weather …

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It's an intriguing idea -

Posted on Fri, 23 Jan 2026

It's an intriguing idea - writing a letter to a younger version of yourself. I enjoyed this exposing yet tender piece. Nicely done, Jenny. 

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Posted in Fleeting Moments Of My Younger Self In A Letter

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You capture the darker and

Posted on Thu, 22 Jan 2026

You capture the darker and danker side of the seasons with such skill, Rhiannon.

A picture painted so adriotly.

I think we are all hankering for spring by now. 

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Posted in Dark and dreary …

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