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I have 275 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1352406 times and 372 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1725 of my 5,338 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1773 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (10)

Part 9 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-9 Billy was fairly certain that the wolves were gone; as certain as he...
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Gold cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (9)

Part 8 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-8 With the revelation, a chill ran through them. This was BIG. Thoughts...
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Cherry

Dust

Dust A breeze blows moving dust, sepia-stained monochrome rain, through empty rooms. Ethereal melodies, wind chimes for lost souls, songs audible...
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Poem of the week

Uphill, January 29th 2026

Uphill, January 29th 2026 St Nicholas church has stood here for centuries staring out over the sea, standing high on a hill, liminal limestone walls...
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Cherry

The Devil’s Bridge

I remember fragments. Vague to start with then detail emerging like a cobalt ink blot spreading across my sepia-stained mind. A night of falling snow...
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1725 of my comments have received 1773 Great Feedback votes

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"Fail and forfeit all.

Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2026

"Fail and forfeit all. Succeed we leave the Earth in you and your Mother’s care.”

The mission is clear. Eesh..that chapter was tense and lucid. Onwards we go!

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Posted in Banished To Earth, Book Two, Dreamscape (31)

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I was right there reading

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

I was right there reading this. You have weddings and respective receptions down to a tee (funny thing is, as joyous an occasion they are, I really hate going to them).

Ascerbic and very funny with it. It makes you wonder why people get...

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Posted in The Way We Heard - All Time Low

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"Welcome breeze

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

"Welcome breeze
shaking trees.."

I find myself celebrating cloud cover at the moment. The fall of rain comes to the popping of champagne corks just now!

There's a lovely rhythm to this poem, Rhiannon.

Here's to future...

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Posted in Breeze!

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Thanks, insert. I did think

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2026

Thanks, insert. I did think about that after I'd posted it. The hope is through writing and being a member at a site like ABCTales. I might add the IP as a category to this as I always forget about trying inspiration point. This week's is mine,...

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Posted in A Better World

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This is our story of the week

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2026

This is our story of the week – congratulations!

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Posted in The Way We Heard: Three Coins In The Fountain (1954) (Pt.1)

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The reality of a fateful trip

Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2026

The reality of a fateful trip to the market for the herd.

Sad, endearing and dark beauty in a stark reality that's taken for granted.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

I...

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Posted in The Drove

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That's a deep, philosophical

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2026

That's a deep, philosophical vignette, Penny.

Beautiful in its brevity. 

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Posted in "Lament"

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"..Saville’s trade mark yodel

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2026

"..Saville’s trade mark yodel cuts through the warm air like the mating call of a Loon." That made me shudder a bit. I remember those days when Savile was just another deejay.

I recall MySpace too although it feels like forever ago....

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Posted in The Way We Heard: That's Not My Name - The Ting Tings - 2008

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Eesh...Mabel Gillette

Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2026

Eesh...Mabel Gillette reappearing was a bit of a shock. 

Intrigued as to what comes next. 

Still following...

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Posted in Banished To Earth, Book Two, Dreamscape (30)

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"The joy of a sandy beach

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2026

"The joy of a sandy beach
and warm sea.."

The sense of joy and enjoyment shines through in this poem, Rhiannon. Built on fond memories, I'm sure. There's nothing quite like the wonderment of taking children to the seaside. 

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Posted in Young family’s 3-Day Holiday Adventure!

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