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I have 279 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1533653 times and 378 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1763 of my 5,434 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1819 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (28)

Part 27 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-27 Billy had no idea what to do. High above was a witch’s giant face...
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Rhapsody in G Minor

Rhapsody in G Minor Air on the G string, tintinnabulation in bluebell woods, dragonfly songs - fire and ice, rhapsodies to live for. Also posted on X...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (27)

Part 26 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-26 Billy felt an overwhelming sense of déjà vu. He had outrun the...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (26)

Part 25 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-25 Night closed in like a phantom wrapping its ebony cape around an...
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Cherry

A Cat-Proof Fence

A Cat-Proof Fence Clouds drifting, Atlantic squalls, each one a metaphor of sorts, daydreams dissipate like rain falling on warm sands. There’s a...
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1763 of my comments have received 1819 Great Feedback votes

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It's a difficult one, Jenny.

Posted on Sat, 18 Apr 2026

It's a difficult one, Jenny. Risk v reward. There's risk with most procedures. It just depends whether you can live with it. Logic suggests getting to the bottom of it all as, that way, you have the chance of an effective remedy. Coughing for the...

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Posted in Tomography

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You might be right, T. We're

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

You might be right, Luigi. We're going in circles. Someone needs to take charge. I think the next writer will do just that. Not my genre at all but I can't see why this won't be wound up inside 4 more chapters. There's another 8,000 words...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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Sel Ticman is a force of

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

Sel Ticman is a force of nature that's still blowing around like rampant tumbleweed. Maybe he'll feature in future chapters. I think he was last seen selling copies of his books at a local market in downtown Denver. Funny really...I feel as...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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So much unsaid. Beautifully

Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2026

So much unsaid. Beautifully conceived.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations. 

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Posted in Transcript

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"Echoes of jigs and reels

Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2026

"Echoes of jigs and reels linger still

On the salty breath of Atlantic winds.."

I might describe a vast, sprawling poem like this one as an epic.

Many lines to admire and written with authority and skill.

My kinda poem...

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Posted in On Achill Island

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I prefer first person myself

Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2026

I prefer first person myself but don't always write using that format. It's invariably introspective and I always think a little claustrophobic but I like the inner monologues that come with it. 

'Falling Down' is a seminal movie that...

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Posted in Courtesy Calls: The Fire Lane (2)

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Atmospheric and pensive.

Posted on Thu, 05 Feb 2026

Atmospheric and pensive. Bristol's not far from me these days. 

You build reflection into your poetry so naturally, Jenny. It makes it so accessible. 

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Posted in Long ago Thoughts

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"I hear dollars clink with

Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2026

"I hear dollars clink with roubles in the push to weaponise"

An eloquent invective, Turlough.

The identity of the murderous regime is less clear now than it ever was. 

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Posted in They Can Only Do Harm

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With Remembrance Day on the

Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025

With Remembrance Day on the horizon, this layered poem is poignant and very relevant.

 

It is today’s Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

 

Congratulations, Ewan.

 

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Posted in Put The Sword Down

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This is definitely 'quite

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

This is definitely 'quite bonkers and entertaining'.

There's so much creativity in this piece and it's a genre I adore.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

I have added a pic to promote your work...

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Posted in The UFO Bible 1

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