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I have 273 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1323145 times and 369 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1709 of my 5,299 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1753 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (24)

Part 23 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-23 THE PROPHESY Avian sounds echoed from a pallid sky, geese in...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (23)

Part 22 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-22 Sunlight glinted on windows, occasional white flashes flaring on...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (22)

Part 21 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-21 Sea breezes brought the tang of salt and brine, a reticent sun...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (21)

Part 20 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-20 An effusive afternoon sun splashed across library walls like...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (20)

Part 19 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-19 The old lady peers into a mirror. It has an ornate frame made of...
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1709 of my comments have received 1753 Great Feedback votes

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With Remembrance Day on the

Posted on Wed, 05 Nov 2025

With Remembrance Day on the horizon, this layered poem is poignant and very relevant.

 

It is today’s Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

 

Congratulations, Ewan.

 

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Posted in Put The Sword Down

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This is definitely 'quite

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

This is definitely 'quite bonkers and entertaining'.

There's so much creativity in this piece and it's a genre I adore.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

I have added a pic to promote your work...

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Posted in The UFO Bible 1

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I remember reading seashore's

Posted on Mon, 11 Aug 2025

I remember reading seashore's stuff when I returned to the site in 2020. It was visceral, honest and striking. It certainly made me sit up and take notice. I imagine she was a one-off. Coral made quite a mark during her lifetime. 

A moving...

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Posted in Our Old Girl… Remembering Coral

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This charming tale of

Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2025

This charming tale of childhood imagination is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

 

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Posted in Dobe Island; My Place in the Sun

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Most of us have been there

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2024

Most of us have been there but how many have made it back intact?

This wonderful piece is today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

I've added an image to promote your work on social media. Just let me know if you prefer to...

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Posted in Linkedin Island

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"Contentment is precious, at

Posted on Tue, 27 Aug 2024

"Contentment is precious, at peace, with ‘enough’"

We live in a capitalist society where advertisments everywhere are designed to make you feel inadequate. It takes a long time to work out what's important. 'Having enough' is a great place...

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Posted in Never Enough?

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I was wondering where you

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

"We say, smugly, the Younger generation, our children, they will fix it."

For sure, all that will be left is stones but I would question the JSO shenanigans at Stonehenge. Of all the places to protest, the spiritual capital of the country...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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"...an acknowledged war hero

Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024

"...an acknowledged war hero and a humble witness all over the world, to the Saviour..."

A fine tribute to somebody I wasn't familiar with it until I read your poem. I looked up her details via the power of Google. It made very interesting...

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Posted in Remembering Corrie ten Boom

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"A billion trillion raindrops

Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024

"A billion trillion raindrops cling, shimmering to dark grey tracery of beech twigs, each tipped in a fine fawn point, holding the plans for a furl of zingy  green to emerge in April and set the woods afizz."

I was right there with you in...

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Posted in Two kinds of crying : 15th February 2024

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That's another evocative read

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2024

That's another evocative read. You capture the splendor and history of the sites you visited adroitly. I would say it's unusual for a group to bond so well like that. The tour I went on in India with about 30 or so other people was marred by many...

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Posted in The Gaddafi Effect

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