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I have 248 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1133131 times and 336 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1592 of my 4,980 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1618 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube

The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube The Grand Marine Hotel stands imperiously looking out over the Bristol Channel as it has done for many dust-coated...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (7)

Part 6 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-6 Billy watched snake-eyed as a shape ghosted through the fog. Appearing...
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Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

Part 5 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-5 Sunday morning brought with it a thick enveloping mist rolling inland...
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Cherry

Borealis

This is a poem posted this week at a weekly challenge on X/Twitter by the account @TopTweetTuesday. Whilst your first love should always be ABCTales...
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Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (5)

Part 4 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-4 Billy pondered the day ahead. He knew a trip would come down to one of...
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1592 of my comments have received 1618 Great Feedback votes

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Chains of daisies as an

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

Chains of daisies as an analogy of unity, strength yet peace. The world needs more of this thinking. Nicely done and enjoyed your poem. Paul :)

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Posted in Daisy Chain

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It's a difficult one. When

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022

It's a difficult one. When and how to intervene on a military level. Maybe the Russians will finally get the message. Soon, I hope.

https...

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Posted in Listening to the News 2/3/22

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A beautiful view and a

Posted on Wed, 16 Feb 2022

A beautiful view and a wonderful photo. I do enjoy being taken with you on these walks of yours, Rhiannon. Paul :)

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Posted in Wonderful Ludlow View

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All caught up again. You have

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

All caught up again. You have my full admiration for the length of the story so far and the consistently high standard you achieve with each episode. You are on course to have a fully fledged novel. Keep going!

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 18

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Your poetic reminiscences are

Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

Your poetic reminiscences are like no other, Jenny. Another gorgeous poem remembering times gone by. Paul :)

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Posted in Before We Kissed Goodnight

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The internal rhyming is so

Posted on Thu, 05 Mar 2026

The internal rhyming is so well done. Pure nonsense but highly enjoyable. Well...unless it's all true. 

My favourite lines "...made the nurse curse when he shredded
her purse and dismembered her favourite hat.."

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Posted in Teeth Tales: Ernie's Terrible Teething

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Eesh....not sure things like

Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2026

Eesh....not sure things like 'T B and Cancer' should be thrown around before test results are in. Bless you Jenny.  Looking forward to reading more and hoping for a happy ending. 

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Posted in My Time In A & E

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Thanks for reading, T.

Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2026

Thanks for reading, T.

[I try not to think of the footie at the mo. Terrible result last Friday. I watched Leeds last night who did their best but it wasn't enough v The Mancs.] 

I must set a story in my hometown of Brum at some...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (12)

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Still off-kilter and

Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2026

Still off-kilter and intriguing.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Posted in Purple Mountain - Part 3

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Intriguing and off-kilter.

Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2026

Intriguing and off-kilter.

This is today's Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

I have added a pic to promote your work on social media.Please let me know if you prefer to use something else.

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Posted in Purple Mountain - Part 2

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