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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 340856 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1211 of my 4,036 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1225 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Devil's Advocate (Part Two of Three)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/devils-advocate Devil’s Advocate (Part Two of Three) It had been a long day and nurse Abbott...
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Gold cherry

Devil's Advocate

Devil's Advocate (Part One of Three) At the top of the world, most things look tiny although a diaphanous moon might look like a large silver coin to...
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Gold cherry

Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/steve-mason-and-last-day-school-part-one-two Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two...
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Cherry

Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part One of Two)

This is the fourth entry in the series of stories at: https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve Mason and the Last Day of...
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Cherry

North of Taiga

North of Taiga At sunrise over bleak horizons, breath frozen in an arctic tundra, winds skitter in scattered trees, seasons dream of warmer days...

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1211 of my comments have received 1225 Great Feedback votes

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Not sure I ever had to endure

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2024

Not sure I ever had to endure an appraisal by Zoom (thankfully). I imagine they are de rigeur these days. Made me shudder hearing/reading the corporate stuff, though. I imagine you are drawing from first hand experience to get it so accurate/...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 19

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Plutin, Putinpot and Putin -

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024

Plutin, Putinpot and Putin - all names for the Russian horned devil. Always good to read another Muggins take on Mother Russia. I am sure that, when the time comes, Saint Peter will turn the despot away and have him duly arrested. The whole...

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 1

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Catharsis is a common reason

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024

Catharsis is a common reason for writing. It's what brought me back to creative writing a few years ago. Maybe the gun is a metaphor, maybe it's real. Some pain never goes away and it becomes a question of finding an outlet for it along with...

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Posted in Killing the killers

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"..rivulets flowed down from

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2024

"..rivulets flowed down from high,
thrill of an early primrose,
daffodil leaves
and seas of snowdrops on banks.."

I love the way you take everything in when on your walks, Rhiannon. You have an eye for nature and beauty...

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Posted in Up on the Mortimer Trail

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"A billion trillion raindrops

Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024

"A billion trillion raindrops cling, shimmering to dark grey tracery of beech twigs, each tipped in a fine fawn point, holding the plans for a furl of zingy  green to emerge in April and set the woods afizz."

I was right there with you in...

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Posted in Two kinds of crying : 15th February 2024

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Oh yes - nicely done. The

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

Oh yes - nicely done. The note disappearing works really well. 

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Posted in "Life is but a Dream"

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Well written and conceived,

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

Well written and conceived, Penny. Just a thought but how would a hologram leave a handwritten note? I'm sure there's a coherent explanation in this twilight world of sci fi you have conjured.

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Posted in "Life is but a Dream"

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We use plastic heat pads that

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

We use plastic heat pads that get warmed in the microwave. When they fall out of bed they make a banging noise as they hit the floor. There's nothing more comfy than taking a hot water bottle or something similar with you at night. I could relate...

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Posted in Feeling to find it

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Thanks for reading, Jacques.

Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024

Thanks for reading, Jacques. '1984' is my favourite book. Everyone should read it. 

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Posted in After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow)

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Thanks a nice thing to say,

Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024

Thanks a nice thing to say, Di. I am very proud of both of my kids. James has a wandering soul. I can picture him living abroad again soon. 

Yes, my Russian and Italian are both shocking. Then again so is my English. Well... I am a Brummie...

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Posted in After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow)

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