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I have 280 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1553384 times and 379 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1767 of my 5,455 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1823 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (18)

Part 17 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-17 Tanya had grown accustomed to cooking in the caravan but still found...
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Cherry

Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10

Part 9 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/penny4athought/pass-story-chapter-9 Penny’s 'Pass the Parcel’ Part 10 Milton wanted to flick another rolled...
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Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (17)

Part 16 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-16 The stone walls of St Bridget’s stand in silence as though stoical...
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Cherry

Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

Part 5 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/makis/pennys-pass-story-part-five Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 6 Back at the station, Sheriff Milton...
Cherry

Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (16)

Part 15 at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/prophesy-immortal-witch-15 THE GRIMOIRE Nadeem Potter loved nothing more than time spent in the...
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1767 of my comments have received 1823 Great Feedback votes

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Magic all around in this

Posted on Sun, 25 Oct 2026

Magic all around in this chapter. Pirates, too boot. Great stuff, Penny!

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 9

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Character building coming

Posted on Mon, 26 Oct 2026

Character building coming along nicely.

Looking forward to reading more (although I miss Alfred's output)

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Posted in Writers' Island : Chapter 4 : Icebreakers and Introductions : Part 1

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You certainly keep the

Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2026

You certainly keep the tension going throughout.

Breathless stuff.

How's this gonna end?

I'll be reading on...

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Posted in Nobody Floats It This Time of Year - Part One: 2018 (3)

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Poor Simon. That's one

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2026

Poor Simon. That's one insecure individual.

You can see the plot strands forming.

The murky politics of neighbours and frenemies.

Looking forward to reading more. 

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Posted in Old Walls - Part 7

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I do adore your Amandarella

Posted on Sun, 18 Oct 2026

I do adore your Amandarella tales, Eric. They invariably make me smile. The prose is always lilting with an underlying sense of humour.

[Should this be posted as 'Amanderella and the Gooseberry Mystery. Chapter 5'?] 

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Posted in Amanderella and the Gooseberry Mystery. Chapter 5.

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"..when there would be no

Posted on Fri, 16 Oct 2026

"..when there would be no more
trouble, waste and gore.."

That second verse is skilfully written, Rhiannon. It must have taken quite a bit of thought.

Very nicely done.

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Posted in Looking forward to looking back

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I like the transition moving

Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2026

I like the transition moving from traditional Halloween fun to a more ominous world of spirits after midnight.

Wonderful, Penny. 

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Posted in October 31st

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So many song title references

Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2026

So many song title references without naming any of them.

Very original and unique.

Bravo, sir. 

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Posted in Hope Street

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Thanks very much for reading

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2026

Thanks very much for reading it, insert. I haven't written flash fiction in a very long time so it's reassuring to know this works. It's < 400 words.

I hope it's spooky enough to meet the brief. (probably on the borderline..maybe)...

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Posted in Frankenplot: Carny

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This chapter conveys the joys

Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2026

This chapter conveys the joys of writing so well. Looking forward to reading more. 

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Posted in Writers' Island : Chapter 3 : Nick Makes Himself At Home

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