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I have 229 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 776721 times and 307 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1479 of my 4,659 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1495 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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By the Candelight of Saints

By the Candlelight of Saints The chill of church pews where St George is a martyr, silence staid by solemnity, ambient flames flicker cobalt; moments...
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'Twas the Night Before Christmas

‘Twas the Night before Christmas The last rays of apricot-hued sunshine fade to dusk over Abington Street, an urban thoroughfare where disparate...
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Colours of Christmas

It’s December 1 st ….I’m declaring it Christmas… Colours of Christmas Dreams made of cinnamon, nights of ice, tree-light dancing on frosted panes...
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Cherry

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence)

A Murder of Crows (Transcendence) Clouds billow like gathering coal dust, telegraph-wire lined, feathers and bone watch dusk descend. Monochrome...
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Those We Leave Behind

Those We Leave Behind It feels like I have been standing in this field all my life. From here I can see the edge of town where trees and rivers...
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1479 of my comments have received 1495 Great Feedback votes

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Great final line, Jane! 

Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2025

Great final line, Jane! 

I like the inner thoughts of Vanessa that drives the narration. Her ennui is well done and now replaced by a whole new scenario. Spencer's back....I'm guessing with quite a story to tell.

Keep going :)

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 52

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Great poem, Ed. Wonderful

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025

Great poem, Ed. Wonderful imagery in a tightly bound universe you have created here.

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Posted in Snow

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"..Dreams like driftwood

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025

"..Dreams like driftwood washed ashore

From the pelagic cumulonimbus realm.."

Some great lines in this. My kinda poem. One to get lost in (probably both writing and reading)

Imagery and enigma.

[Really enjoyed both of...

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Posted in Fathoms Above

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Ha..I haven't thought about

Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025

Ha..I haven't thought about it in years but I burned all my school books too. In my back garden after the final day. 

School days were bittersweet for most of us with good times and bad. I'm glad you were candid in your account as it makes...

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Posted in School Reunion

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That's a poignant vignette

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2025

That's a poignant vignette and, I imagine, of particular significance just now. Yes, hope springs eternal and in places you least expect :)

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Posted in "Fragile"

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You can sense the tension

Posted on Fri, 31 Jan 2025

You can sense the tension which is a testimony to how this is written. The combination of racing thoughts and constant seeking. 

Spencer's wandered off without his tablets....like we all do sometimes. Well I do, anyway :)

Looking...

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 50

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I can feel the gusts of fresh

Posted on Tue, 04 Feb 2025

I can feel the gusts of fresh breeze in my lungs. 

Another wonderful ramble with you, Rhiannon. More gorgeous pics, too!

[Think there's a typo in that final line? "...as drawr back to the carpark.]

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Posted in Bringsty Common, again

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Another high octane piece. 

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025

Another high octane piece. 

You write at such a breathless pace. If that's how you work then you must be exhauasted after a tour of duty. 

Definitely an urban poetry feel to it and I can absolutely picture this as performance poetry...

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Posted in Alive N‘ 25*

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"...yet still I'm

Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2025

"...yet still I'm
haunted by past voices that
consume.."

That's a reflective piece, Jenny. I sometimes think it's easier to look forward than backwards. There's no ghosts to deal with when you look ahead. Of course, they are...

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Posted in Like Autumn Leaves Scatter In The Breeze

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It's a busy agenda isn't it?

Posted on Mon, 03 Feb 2025

It's a busy agenda isn't it? So many lands to conquer. MAGA MEGA etc 

Alfred asks the questions and we ponder the answers. Thought provoking, of course.

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Posted in Trump’s Inauguration Hot Air Balloon! By Alfred N.Muggins

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