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I have 240 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1007669 times and 323 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1551 of my 4,873 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1570 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Falling

Falling I am no one . White walls washed by sodium light was all I could see. There was a certain kind of claustrophobia that went with the room, a...
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Cherry

The Golden Fleece (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/golden-fleece-part-one-two The Golden Fleece (Part Two of Two) Feeling slightly restless, I...
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The Golden Fleece (Part One of Two)

The Golden Fleece (Part One of Two) She who must be obeyed - that’s the phrase that sprang to mind as we meandered through Primark’s burnt offerings...
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Cherry

After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow)

Previous messages from Moscow: https://www.abctales.com/collection/messages-moscow After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow) It was on May 9 th...
Cherry

After the Snow

After the Snow Sun sets over a sylvan skyline, birdsong fades on bare boughs, vulpine tracks of hunting paths, life crawls post Yuletide sprawl...
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1551 of my comments have received 1570 Great Feedback votes

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I'll have a look, Di.

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

I'll have a look, Di.

"It was fine mum.." is a reply to "How was the trip?"

I've now italicised semi-wilderness as a signpost so the reference is clearer. 

The cottage is based on a real property on Brean Beach which...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (3)

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"Can you die inside a dream?

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025

"Can you die inside a dream?

And will you be found

inside the layers of a tiger’s bite?"

Supposedly you can. Best not to test the theory.

That's a miasma of thoughts and feelings captured within the lines of this poem...

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Posted in I Dreamt of Tigers

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It's best not to let

Posted on Fri, 11 Jul 2025

It's best not to let Trumpenstein get to you/Alfred. He's a clown masqerading as the US President. He's now threatening Putin with tariffs if no peace deal is reached with Ukraine within 50 days. Of course, the Ruskies just laugh at DT's rhetoric...

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Posted in The Queen of Canada Takes Alfred Muggins’ Mind Away From Trumpenstein’s Coup by Alfred Muggins

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"...a yearning leaves upon

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2025

"...a yearning leaves upon your face
to be out there by weather tossed."

What a beautiful poem and very much written in a classical way.

So skilfully done, Rhiannon. I enjoyed this one, in particular. 

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Posted in Daffodil

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The style of the poem made me

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2025

The style of the poem made me think of Kipling [Echoes of "If" even with the serious subject explored here].

A very skilfully executed piece of work. 

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Posted in Fifty Shades of Death

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Ah...we remember them all.

Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2025

Ah...we remember them all. Quite poignant reading this on the 7th birthday of my beloved ginger toms - Travis & Perkins. A lovely read. Thanks for sharing the memory, Jenny. 

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Posted in Tibbs Out On The Tiles

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Let's hope a better America

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

Let's hope a better America emerges from its current mess. Sadly, his term in office has a way to go yet. Who knows where will all be when the Trumpmeister is finally done. 

Good on Alfred Muggins for contiuing to call out the Orange...

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Posted in Chronicles Of Trumpenstein : The Progress Of The Trumplings by Alfred N.Muggins, Armchair Reporter

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That's a powerful lamentation

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

That's a powerful lamentation and an apt metaphor.

Grieving for an animal is tough. I think it's because they are so vulnerable and dependant on us. There's a feeling of inevitable guilt that comes with everything else. 

A...

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Posted in This Sad Blister

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It reads like an elegy. I

Posted on Sun, 29 Jun 2025

It reads like an elegy. I imagine after living a life like that, time was called sometime in the past.

You bring him to life in a warm, relatable way. Definitely an empathetic account despite his flaws.

[Yes, the Scots of Glasgow do...

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Posted in Those Shameful Blue Pyjamas

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Thanks for reading, T.

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

Thanks for reading, T.

Service stations off motorways are really black holes that people disappear through and return from when it's time to resume their journey.

Would I lie about this? (Well...yes...probably)

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)

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