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I have 272 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1307987 times and 366 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1695 of my 5,266 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1738 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Ghostbot (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/ghostbot-part-one-two Ghostbot (Part Two of Two) Jake tried hard to demarcate a longing to be...
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Ghostbot (Part One of Two)

“Death is the greatest illusion of all” - Rajneesh Ghostbot (Part One of Two) Cassie was dead to begin with. There was no doubting the fact as...
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Story of the week

Leviathan

Leviathan I had been scrolling for what seemed like hours. Each post scanned seemed darker than the last. Reading wall-to-wall invective wasn’t good...
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Tom Crean

It is said that Ireland is a haunted place full of spirits; a land where the dead are celebrated. Tom Crean The journey to the Emerald Isle had been...
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Poem of the week

Rain at the Forest Cafe

A morning coffee stop at a café in a clearing.. Rain at the Forest Cafe Fairy lights glimmer as I drink coffee at a bustling forest café – Dogs under...
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1695 of my comments have received 1738 Great Feedback votes

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Thanks, insert. It was fun to

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2026

Thanks, insert. It was fun to write albeit there's quite a bit of prep needed for this challenge as you have to be au fait with all the other stuff that's gone before.

Anyway....a big thank you to Penny for her generosity and creating some...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 10

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The pot boiling over. The

Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2026

The pot boiling over. The finale beckons! 

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Posted in "Pass the Story" Chapter 9

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With everything going on in

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2026

With everything going on in the world, it's incredibly grounding reading your monthly updates. There's a philosophical and reassuring feel to events in your part of the world. The seasons turn, people die, people live, we all move on. I like the...

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A wonderfully imaginative

Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2026

A wonderfully imaginative piece, Jane. I always think that Heaven and Hell stories are tricky to pull off but you have done it here with aplomb. Made me think of an Easter theme with the criminals flanking either side at the Crusifixtion. Well,...

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Wonderful imagery in this

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2026

Wonderful imagery in this evocative poem. Lovely photos, as always.

I've been to this part of the world but not to this location. I simply must.

Really nicely done, Rhiannon.

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Thinking of you, dear Jenny.

Posted on Fri, 06 Mar 2026

Thinking of you, dear Jenny. Stay strong. You have many friends who care about you. Paul x

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Posted in My Time In A & E ( PT 2 )

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Thanks, Penny. And thank you

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

Thanks, Penny. And thank you for the challenge and your generosity that goes with it.

I did read the previous chapters several times to ensure continuity and have tried to fan the flames with a few of the subplots - Mossad, following up...

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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Thanks for reading it,

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

Thanks for reading it, GlosKat.

I guess a collaborative writing challenge comes with the risk of creative differences amongst those participating. The narrative can be a bone of contention.

I'm sure subsequent writers will...

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Ah thank you. Glad you liked

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2026

Ah thank you. Glad you liked it. A piece of thread left hanging for whoever's next to pick up. 

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Story Part 6

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Nicely done, Penny.

Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2026

Nicely done, Penny.

Love the diversion!

Looking forward to more...

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