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I have 176 stories published in 22 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 243979 times and 227 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1012 of my 3,494 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1024 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton. I love to write but get distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought. My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

I think that everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have short stories published in a horror anthology by @thealienbuddha, anthology Vol.IV by @LoftPublishing and flash fiction at @paragraphplanet.

Poems of mine have been published by @thealienbuddha.

I have new stories being published in 2023 by @darkwinterlit along with appearing in anthologies by @thealienbuddha and @LoftPublishing (Both the Halloween anthology and ABZ55 at ABP and Anthology Vol V at Loft).

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)

Draft for a 3-part story. The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three) The moon hung low in a blue sky, an intruder on a twilight horizon. The day was...
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Snow White

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/snow-white-mp3 Snow White Fiery, phosphorous sun arced lower, day summoning the arrival of...
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The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)

You can read part one here: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/horses-wooldale-road-part-1-3 You can read part two here: https://www.abctales...
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The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

You can read part one here: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/horses-wooldale-road-part-1-3 The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3) The...
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The Raven Returned

An homage to my favourite poem “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-raven-returned-mp3 The Raven...

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1012 of my comments have received 1024 Great Feedback votes

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"...from the razzamataz

Posted on Thu, 08 Jun 2023

"...from the razzamataz clutches of a hapless

stage magician."

When a previous cage was gilded and ends up being missed. A lovely tale told so poetically.

 

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"...pollen particles sail on

Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2023

"...pollen particles sail on swiftly..."

 

Another enjoyable diary entry. You dovetail with nature on your walks, Jenny. Beautiful pic - it looks like a very lovely place. Paul :) 

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"Imagination writes the tale

Posted on Sun, 04 Jun 2023

"Imagination writes the tale

On a ghost ship we can sail."

 

Definitely more than tendrils of magic in this, Penny. A poem of wonderment. Beautifully done. Paul :) 

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Posted in "A Little Rhyme"

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Yes, some very inventive

Posted on Sat, 03 Jun 2023

Yes, some very inventive sections. Loved the pizza delivery and the discovery of the disc in the dog's collar. Looking forward to the next part :) 

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"Hangliders drifting along

Posted on Fri, 02 Jun 2023

"Hangliders drifting along lazily above the higher ridge"

 

I can visualise the valley, the hawthorn trees and the lambs. This sounds like a stunning walk, Rhiannon. The weather is beautiful at the moment. Gorgeous pics as well....

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Love the title. There's

Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023

Love the title. There's something about the phrase "ladies that do lunch" that makes me smile every time I hear it. This is totally bonkers for sure and plays out like a mini-movie. Based on a true story too? Looking forward to the uncensored...

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Posted in Ladies who lunch at The Entomol

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"Sunshine in a glade once

Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023

"Sunshine in a glade once stillful of winter.."

 

My lodestone is U2 as well. Saw them live at the Odeon in Birmingham before they became stadium big. I can feel the joy in your words. The joy of music, a wonderful thing. Loved this...

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Posted in new song

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Such contrasting images on

Posted on Wed, 05 Aug 2015

Such contrasting images on Obsidian. Showers, beds and all mod cons. You bring across the sense of awe at being somewhere so much more advanced so well. If seems a shame that the children will get reprogrammed and lose their memories of the new...

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Posted in Dwellers of the New World Chapter Nineteen ( Pt 5 ) The Reunion

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"A cock-eyed chef's hat

Posted on Mon, 29 May 2023

"A cock-eyed chef's hat

and a tired apron all askew.."

 

Lends a sense of playfulness to the poem. It sounds like you have had culinary fun with grandchildren who love to pretend cook. Then again, maybe we all do. Enjoyed,,...

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Posted in Little Cook!

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"...ephemeral mayfly once

Posted on Mon, 29 May 2023

"...ephemeral mayfly once

hidden at water's edge.."

 

Another lovely, dreamy reverie and stroll through nature on a beautiful, Bank Holiday Monday. 

 

Enjoyed, of course :) 

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Posted in Nature's Wonders

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