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I have 226 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 697698 times and 303 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1457 of my 4,609 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1471 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1457 of my comments have received 1471 Great Feedback votes

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"At sea, I weave voices from

Posted on Tue, 20 Jun 2023

"At sea, I weave voices from the wind.." 

A mesmerising poem :) 

 

 

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Posted in The Seafarer

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A reunion,to look forward to,

Posted on Tue, 20 Jun 2023

A reunion,to look forward to, Ewan. Can't say that I have been to the Rock. A place with a complicated history. Enjoyed your reminiscence including Fat Albert's antics. Paul 

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Posted in Round The Rugged Rock

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An entertaining road trip

Posted on Tue, 20 Jun 2023

An entertaining road trip story. You make the places visited sound so wonderful. Hercule Poirot would have solved the case and Ian Dury would approve, I'm sure. If only you had made the ballet.. 

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Posted in Trans Europe Express

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There's nothing worse than

Posted on Mon, 19 Jun 2023

There's nothing worse than misplacing keys. You have captured the anguish here with a lovely rhythm. Tension built than release with a happy ending. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul 

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Posted in They aren’t there!

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"... blackbird will trill a

Posted on Mon, 19 Jun 2023

"... blackbird will trill a greeting

to guide me on my way."

 

Another enjoyable diary entry, Jenny. The Summer Solstice is a time of magic and peace. You capture that in your poem. Just lovely. Paul :) 

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Posted in Window Of Light

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That sounds like quite an

Posted on Mon, 19 Jun 2023

That sounds like quite an escapade, Luigi. Glad all was well in the end. You must have been worried for a while. Enjoyed your true-life tale [Should that read "..knocked me down with a feather.."? ] Best wishes. Paul 

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Posted in Lost

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Phew - such drama in a

Posted on Sun, 18 Jun 2023

Phew - such drama in a shopping expedition. I hope Alfred's foot is OK and his bank account after paying for everything. I do wonder what Henry VIII would make of all this.. 

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Posted in A Trip to the Supermarket (Tesco’s) After Work! By Mr Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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Glad the steroids had some

Posted on Wed, 14 Jun 2023

Glad the steroids had some effect, Jean. Hoping the blood clots in your lungs are benign. Keep us posted re the rest of the scan results. As always, your strength of character and humour shine through (more dangerous with the walking stick)....

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Posted in Cancer Log 3

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"I muse on how easy it is to

Posted on Wed, 14 Jun 2023

"I muse on how easy it is to blunder.."

That's an interesting and thoughtful pen picture you draw, Rhiannon. I think it is important not to make assumptions as you allude to. We often think we know someone and, as it turns out, we often...

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Posted in Do I know you?

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"This moment revealed; in

Posted on Tue, 13 Jun 2023

"This moment revealed; in transient stillness..."

 

Another beautiful reverie, Jenny. Enjoyed, of course. And you are nailing these photos. Paul :) 

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Posted in Splendour Of The Woods

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