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I have 226 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 696559 times and 303 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1457 of my 4,612 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1471 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1457 of my comments have received 1471 Great Feedback votes

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Nicely done. How to unpick an

Posted on Sat, 22 Jul 2023

Nicely done. How to unpick an ideology with a single question. Civilisations have begun and ended with rampant conjecture. The last few lines said it all :) 

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Posted in The machinery of night

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"Rivulets stream

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2023

"Rivulets stream

thinly 

down landscapes 

sheerness.."

 

An evocative, picturesque portrait of the path of rain. Enjoyed, Richard. Paul 

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Posted in Through Our Country Window

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I was in Banbury only the

Posted on Sat, 22 Jul 2023

I was in Banbury only the other day. Nice to read of an Alfred Muggins tour across the Midlands. Seems so longer now that final v Italy. What might have been.. 

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Posted in Ride a White Horse to Banbury Cross! By Alfred N.Muggins Part 1

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Oh that's wonderful. Thank

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023

Oh that's wonderful. Thank you! Paul :) 

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Posted in Dragon Gate

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A couple of lovely pen

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023

A couple of lovely pen pictures, Rhiannon. You say so much in so few words. "Warm and friendly.." and "Hard- working MP.."  stand out. I imagine those are special pics too.  Nicely done, of course. Paul 

 

 

 

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Posted in Nana and Grampa (c 1950-1960)

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A Satnav with the voice of

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023

A Satnav with the voice of Jacob Rees-Mogg's butler. Eesh. Preston v Sunderland and the Simpsons in Serbian. Another thoroughly enjoyable travelogue with a suitably mysterious ending. I mean, what *was* that on the pillow?! 

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Posted in Our Man in Golubac

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"...tiny wings like questions

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023

"...tiny wings like questions flicker always.."

 

"That they came to be

is proof of miracles."

 

A Di poem is a symbiotic meeting with nature. Yes, delicate and nuanced. Just lovely [Some of the sentences are...

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Posted in agriphila straminella

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"Will leaves in Autumn

Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2023

"Will leaves in Autumn descend.."

 

Dreamy reverie, lovely photo. Your forest dreams are a pleasure to read :) 

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Posted in In A Place Of Respite

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"I'm a chocolate teapot

Posted on Tue, 18 Jul 2023

"I'm a chocolate teapot

looking swell.."

 

I had the "I'm a little teapot" rhythm swirling through my head as I read this. "As useful as a chocolate teapot.." is a saying that always makes me smile. Nicely done, of course,...

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Posted in ‘As useful as a chocolate teapot!'

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Thanks for reading it, insert

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023

Thanks for reading it, insert. And the feedback much appreciated. Yes, I have just sent Rachel a note to say I can read if people still want to listen to my stuff. Looking forward to the event. Paul :) 

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Posted in Dragon Gate

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