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I have 243 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1091708 times and 328 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1574 of my 4,937 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1598 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1574 of my comments have received 1598 Great Feedback votes

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Spencer's fear of mum made me

Posted on Fri, 08 Dec 2023

Spencer's fear of mum made me laugh. All internal threat indicators going off. (That used to happen to me with my mother-in-law. Escape was impossible)

Keep going with this Jane. It's building into something special :)

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Posted in Parcel for you ......Part 9

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"I’m not sure now, where you

Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2023

"I’m not sure now, where you begin and end"

That's a philosophical introspection full of poetic musings. Certainly evocative conjuring interesting images. Maybe our home isn't always a metaphorical castle when you wonder what's going on...

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Posted in In Your House

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A dreamy sequence in touch

Posted on Tue, 05 Dec 2023

A dreamy sequence in touch with nature and a delicately told tale in poem. Just lovely, Jenny. Paul :) 

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Posted in Hope Of The Skylark

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"... gingery bracken slopes..

Posted on Sat, 02 Dec 2023

"... gingery bracken slopes.."

Another enjoyable walk with you, Rhiannon. You bring the whole thing to life with your words. Very lovely. Paul :) 

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Posted in Up to the Hoar Frost

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"Give me three goats for my

Posted on Thu, 30 Nov 2023

"Give me three goats for my sister

How can you resist her?"

Well, yes.

Croatians aren't to be trusted.

I may try tripe soup one day.

As imaginitive as ever. Those treadmills of your mind are whirring in the...

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Posted in Reasons to Be Bulgarian… Naz-dra-vee!

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That's a tough one, Jean. I

Posted on Thu, 30 Nov 2023

That's a tough one, Jean. I guess for every treatment there's a consquence and, not always a good one. As ever, brave of you to commit to writing it down. Your resilience is inspirational. Thinking of you. Paul x

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Posted in Friendly Fire

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I guess that's the rub. Where

Posted on Thu, 30 Nov 2023

I guess that's the rub. Where does Hamas end and Palestine begin? Does the ordinary man in the street share Hamas goals? It's a mess with tragic consequences.

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Posted in Thoughts on Hamas and Palestinian Resistance, and Western and Arab Government Reactions

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That's another evocative

Posted on Wed, 29 Nov 2023

That's another evocative diary entry. I can't imagine committing to something involving such endurance but well done to you for doing just that. Nicely done, Jenny.

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Posted in Crazy! Crazy Days and Nights

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Well done on articulating

Posted on Tue, 28 Nov 2023

Well done on articulating such a gripping tale. I am all for rescuing animals so good on you both for running the gauntlet with those cats. Yes, I can only imagine the emotions if it was people involved. It's a crazy world we live in. 

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Posted in The Targovishte Quandary - Part 3 of 3

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... far pink coast 

Posted on Tue, 28 Nov 2023

... far pink coast 

recalls sunset.. "

 

Evocative imagery, Di. Very beautiful :) 

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Posted in at dusk today

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