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I have 265 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1263663 times and 357 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1666 of my 5,181 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1703 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

The Theory of Everything (take 2)

I originally posted this piece a few days ago. I had this half-arsed notion that I needed to put something up on my birthday and a rare foray to...
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Gold cherry

A Secret Forest

We landed at Marco Polo, Azzurri gateway to the North, clutching passports we passed bleary-eyed through mundane border checks, as luggage rolled...
Cherry

Wootton Village

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/wootton-village-mp3 Slate-coloured, sombre skies cast vacuous, apocryphal runes. Carrion crows...
Cherry

The Existential Fate of Original Thought

Every day had been the same for so long now. Epicurus sat in his leather backed chair, cradling a glass of scotch, ruminating about life and the arts...
Gold cherry

The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/the-haunted-fort-of-bhangahr The Haunted Fort of Bhangahr I stare out of the tinted window for...
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1666 of my comments have received 1703 Great Feedback votes

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"I sink in wild Rodopi tea

Posted on Wed, 12 Jun 2024

"I sink in wild Rodopi tea

As Zeus strikes nature’s timpani.."

That's a moody, brooding piece. Ominous photo too. Enjoyed!

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Posted in A Midsummer Night’s Apocalypse

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Another enjoyable ramble with

Posted on Sat, 08 Jun 2024

Another enjoyable ramble with you, Rhiannon. I have never been to Offa's Dyke. Lovely photos too :)

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Posted in More Offa’s Dyke views and Nosey young cattle @ Knighton

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"..perfect MUGGINS, servant

Posted on Mon, 10 Jun 2024

"..perfect MUGGINS, servant and provider extraordinaire!" Well yes although he has missed a closed bracket in that paragraph which shows how distracted he must be. The resumption of Alfred's roving reports will suggest all is well with the world...

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Posted in Alfred Muggins’ Easter Holiday by Alfred N.Muggins Part 2

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"Velvety, soft petal, sepal,

Posted on Wed, 05 Jun 2024

"Velvety, soft petal, sepal, tepal.."

 

You bring the colour to life so vividly in your poem and photos, Rhiannon. Just gorgeous.

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Posted in Breathatking Beauty and design

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Sounds like Alfred is overrun

Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2024

Sounds like Alfred is overrun. I hope he finds time for his roving reports. The world needs to hear what he has to say!

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Posted in Alfred Muggins’ Easter Holiday by Alfred N.Muggins

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This intriguing instalment is

Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2024

This intriguing instalment is today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations, Ewan!

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Posted in 6 "You'll Hear My Voice, On the Wind, 'Cross the Sand"

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"The cruel busybody of a

Posted on Wed, 05 Jun 2024

"The cruel busybody of a neighbour thought it a great joke to say she’d been a victim of shelling.. " Dark, yet funny.

I remember those boil-in-the-bag curries. They tasted alright.

Dear old Joan certainly had a meandering mind. So...

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Posted in The Spice of Life

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This rueful reminiscense is a

Posted on Thu, 30 May 2024

This rueful reminiscense is a case of no Marley no cry and is our Facebook and Twitter/X Pick of the Day.

Congratulations!

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Posted in Bill or Bob?

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"Along to the incongruous

Posted on Tue, 28 May 2024

"Along to the incongruous
plantation of nine monkey puzzle trees.."

Another sumptuous hike. Enjoyed as always, Rhiannon. Beautiful photos too.

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Posted in On top of the world again!

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"The girl with the softest

Posted on Mon, 27 May 2024

"The girl with the softest edges

Who summons the stars.."

The personification of "dusk".

So many inspired, beautiful lines in this like:

"Her sermon is always of endings"

Just gorgeous.

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Posted in Dusk

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