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I have 240 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 983283 times and 323 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1550 of my 4,867 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1569 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1550 of my comments have received 1569 Great Feedback votes

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It's a horrible situation but

Posted on Mon, 20 Nov 2023

It's a horrible situation but I read that negotiations re a ceasefire are happening between Hamas and Isreal. Common sense has to prevail soon. Surely?

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Posted in Does Suella Braverman know what a Democracy is, and how it works, or should work?

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"... ambiguous billowing

Posted on Fri, 17 Nov 2023

"... ambiguous billowing silhouettes."

 

An evocative reverie wrapped up in a fine poem. A beautiful pic as well :) 

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Posted in Analogy Of Adventure

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A belated happy birthday,

Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023

A belated happy birthday, Jean. Another interesting, well-structured account of your treatment. Nicely done and wishing you all kinds of well with the next stage. Take care of yourself. Paul x 

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Posted in Chemo2 - session 3

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"Pragmatic Palestinian"

Posted on Mon, 13 Nov 2023

"Pragmatic Palestinian" sounds like "puppet". It's a difficult one, Di.

As ever, it's about as complicated as it gets in Gaza. The Isrealis want "indefinite security responsibilty" in Gaza, the Americans are advocating a "Two-State...

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Posted in Eastern Sky

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Therapy pets! Yes...this is

Posted on Wed, 15 Nov 2023

Therapy pets! Yes...this is becoming more and more popular. It's said to make a huge difference to patients in hospital amongst other places and expedites recoveries. Just lovely :)

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Posted in A pigmy goat, 3 guinea pigs and some husky puppies visit …

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I like the tension in wanting

Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023

I like the tension in wanting to get rid of mum. And her old-fashioned values translating into comedy. The comment about multi-culturalism made me laugh.

Poor old Spencer - one second enjoying a programme about the domestication of water...

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 8

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"....no ‘door to Grandap’s’

Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023

"....no ‘door to Grandap’s’ to knock
when they want to share!"

An important event captured in verse. Family moments are what life is all about. Yes, that is so lovely that you are all so close geographically.

[My daughter...

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Posted in 13/11/23

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"I am all the tales you told

Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023

"I am all the tales you told about me.."

Wonderfully evocative. I like the format. It adds an enigmatic feel :)

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Posted in Blackthorn

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"Like Leeds United thrashing

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023

"Like Leeds United thrashing Villa.."

I can't recall this event. Just how far are we going back?!

I thought this was going to be your diary entry from your blog post for some reason. Anyway, I enjoyed this too (13 league wins at...

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Posted in My Verbal Diary Here

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"...swollen storage-leaves in

Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2023

"...swollen storage-leaves in cosy house
hibernating like the tiny dormouse..."

Adriotly done with some lovely pics to boot, Rhiannon. That's an interesting analogy as well - winter refugees. Well, yes. Just lovely :)

 

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Posted in Winter Refuges

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