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I have 226 stories published in
27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 697410 times
and 303 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1457 of my 4,612 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1471 votes

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.
My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .
I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.
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Devils food cake sounds
Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023
Devils food cake sounds outstanding. Another enjoyable reverie, Jenny. And a yummy one too. Nicely done. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Shadowy Visions Of The Past
"...lilting and lifting
Posted on Fri, 14 Jul 2023
"...lilting and lifting
song and refrain."
Definitely music through words. A catchy vignette, nicely done Rhiannon. Enjoyed. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Word-music
The relocation of demons
Posted on Wed, 12 Jul 2023
The relocation of demons elsewhere made me think of the refugee crisis.. And the Dark Materials trilogy. It feels like there's a few metaphors circling in this particular story. Enjoyed and it made think. Which is good.
Read full commentPosted in Cleanser of Demons
Thanks for reading, Ewan. I
Posted on Wed, 12 Jul 2023
Thanks for reading, Ewan. I didn't know that about the Red Sea. The historian finished the tour with all the different theories about why it was the "Red" Castle. I think it came down to the stones turning that colour due to reacting with the...
Read full commentPosted in Castell Coch (Red Castle)
"...my imagination submits to
Posted on Tue, 11 Jul 2023
"...my imagination submits to
interchanging domains;"
Isn't it wonderful to have imagination sparked in nature like that. Another enjoyable diary entry. Nicely done, Jenny. Paul
Lovely photo
Read full commentPosted in Every Picture Tells A Story
Good to see you back, bhi.
Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023
Good to see you back, bhi. This one is dense, absorbing and in an original format for a poem. A worthy continuation of the "This Life" theme. Paul
Read full commentPosted in (This Life) Part 10 – Chapter 1: The Dream Catcher’s Tale
"...in faded, bloodied
Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023
"...in faded, bloodied parchment
and scarcely discernible runes."
Love this poem. An evocative journey through a dark forest with such descriptive language.
Posted in We
"...whose whims must be
Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023
"...whose whims must be obeyed."
The reality for many. There's a great rhythm and rhyme to this, Rhiannon. It bounces along and is a lovely read. Nicely done. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Escape into dream jobs
Those English stag parties
Posted on Wed, 05 Jul 2023
Those English stag parties get everywhere even if they fizzle out by mid-afternoon. As entertaining as ever and heaving with interesting details nestled amongst the humour. You should write travelogies for a living. Adriotly done. Paul
Read full commentPosted in The Bratislava Pálava - Part Two of Two
"Mistaken mind
Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2023
"Mistaken mind
disaster brought."
A cautionary tale and a profound message. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul
Posted in The Rebel’s Regrets
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