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I have 276 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1368310 times and 373 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1732 of my 5,356 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1780 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

New Amsterdam

Our electric train glided to a stop, humanity spilled onto waiting platforms, worn stairs signposted sidewalk Heaven, steam rose from polluted Subway...
Cherry

Forgotten Souls

I see you late at night, as daylight’s candle flickers out, empyrean canvas painted black, stars of alabaster speak in hushed tones. Moonlight beams...
Cherry

Corinne of the School Disco

Steve “Stevo” Mason looked at his watch. He was always checking the time like it might go faster through the power of his gaze. He knew the bell was...

The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)

I live in a mansion in the country. This is no ordinary mansion; it’s an M&S mansion. Well, it’s not actually but it does house a library of...

Happy Valentines

I always did love Sadie. We were your typical childhood sweethearts who grew up and eventually got married. It was aged 12 when we shared a naive...

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1732 of my comments have received 1780 Great Feedback votes

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All we are left with in the

Posted on Fri, 09 Aug 2024

All we are left with in the end is memories. I imagine that is amplified when related to someone in these circumstances. These victims, people, stories, recollections stand the test of time and stand as an important reminder of where...

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Posted in Esther

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"..like the skilled

Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2024

"..like the skilled

artistry of writers with their nimble

fingers.."

One of my great pleasures in life is watching bees doing their dance of pollination especially amongst the lavender bushes in my front and back gardens. I...

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Posted in Bee Muse

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"He felt like an honourary

Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2024

"He felt like an honourary Frenchman, having eaten two Croissants for breakfast with jam and marmalade respectively, and a banana."

I haven't watched much of the Olympics but Alfred had brought the opening ceremony to life with his vivid...

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Posted in Alfred N.Muggins Becomes An Honourary Frenchman After Watching The Opening Ceremony Of The Olympics!

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"With a book in my hand and

Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2024

"With a book in my hand and demonic android device in my bin, that’ll be the day that I die" Amen to that.

"..dancing ourselves dizzy in vests and pants whilst calling each other ‘you crazy ho’." Good Lord..

"But Crado didn’t come...

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Posted in Crado Come Home

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"Hang a budding branch

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2024

"Hang a budding branch

watch it slowly turn to gold.."

Only we can reflect its light. Maybe so.

A poem with a lining of philosophical musing running all the way through it. Enjoyed.

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Posted in The World as it Might Have Been

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Ludogorets v Dinamo Batumi -

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2024

Ludogorets v Dinamo Batumi - damn...I missed that one.

And Archie Gray to Spurs. I still remember Eddie Gray playing for the lillywhites.

I like the sound of the July Morning. It sounds quite a festival.

That intro "Afternoon...

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Posted in All the President’s Biscuits

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"Whiter than white’ – “look

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024

"Whiter than white’ – “look at me” insolent
silent shriek.."

Such drama in your vignette, Rhiannon.

The ever evolving struggle between flora.

We intervene where we can, of course.

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Posted in Garden bindweed, again

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"..like echoes that

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024

"..like echoes that

reach through time give

sweet new beginnings to

future minds..."

 

An elegant moving poem for such an awful incident.

Crimes committed that take the lives of young ones are amongst the...

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Posted in Hold fast To Love

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"Tonight –  the full moon, is

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2024

"Tonight –  the full moon, is the Uposatha, 
when we will meditate until the dawn..."

That's a wonderfully, evocative poem.

Another philosophical journey through life.

Adriotly done, Dougie.

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Posted in Memento Mori

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Great story.

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2024

Great story.

Not sure if you are looking to continue or if it's standalone but it does lend itself to more.

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Posted in P.O.D

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