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Giant Redwoods

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/giant-redwoods-mp3 Shafts of silver light cascade at twilight, a canopy bordering an evening...
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Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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Ballerina Toy Box

The boundary between the real and imagined world can be a thin veil Daylight fades, an ethereal twilight descends, I turn the key, music tinkles like...
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287 of my comments have received 291 Great Feedback votes

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I know nothing at all about

Posted on Wed, 28 Apr 2021

I know nothing at all about Tarkovsky. (I thought he was a right back for Everton) Super poem that makes me wanna look Tarkovsky's work up.

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Posted in Conversations About Tarkovsky in a Copenhagen Restaurant

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Compelling dialogue and

Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021

Compelling dialogue and strong narrative, Sean. In other news, I am onto Chapter 2 of Excavatum and like what I have read so far. You have a very distinctive voice. Paul

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Posted in Our Bones

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Your poetic reminiscences are

Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

Your poetic reminiscences are like no other, Jenny. Another gorgeous poem remembering times gone by. Paul :)

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Posted in Before We Kissed Goodnight

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Beautifully done, Luigi. Paul

Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021

Beautifully done, Luigi. Paul

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Posted in Autumn Leaves

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Tension built nicely and

Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021

Tension built nicely and strong dialogue, of course. Cliffhanger finish!

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Posted in Disenchantment 40

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I think every school had a

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

I think every school had a Jimmy Blue. My school had quite a few of them. Spookily, I wanted to be a journo when I was at school. I failed miserably to get anywhere near the straight As needed to get onto a relevant degree course. Oh well...as I...

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Posted in Move Away, Jimmy Blue

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Carefully crafted and a

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

Carefully crafted and a lovely rhythm. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul :)

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Posted in The Wind in the Willows

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A fascinating family history.

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

A fascinating family history. [Few typos: "...example of anti-Catholism.." "... his wife was brought.." "he was one of the best men..."]

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 5

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There's definitely a fairy

Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021

There's definitely a fairy tale feel to this with a clear, underlying environmental warning. Nicely done. Paul :)

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Posted in Out in the Fields

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Some beautiful imagery in

Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021

Some beautiful imagery in here and a haunting story. As always, some wonderful lines. This also made a great short story in prose form. So many aspects and a touching, intriguing series of events. You could actually add to the story, quite easily...

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Posted in Beneath An Autumn Moon The Poem

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