David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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The Neo Creadds Are Born (Ch.14g) : Discussion Group (Part 1)
Calban is persuaded by Vera to attend the Neo Creadd discussion group for the first time. Can he overcome his shyness and his work oppressed social insecurities? Set in the alternative futuristic world of Marta and Gallanol In The Modern Age.
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Tales of Gallanol : Ch.6 The Party (Part 1)
A Party is held to reconcile the victors from the south with the people of Elladein, in the Palace at Caerella. Jovian finds the High King's Companions attempting to ruin his reputation.
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Tales of Gallanol : Ch.5 Caerella (Part 2)
Jovian manages to gain acceptance from Prince Trahearn of Elladein for negotiation. The parties negotiate a surrender for the peace of Elladein, but not all are content.
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Tales of Gallanol : Ch.5 Caerella (Part 1)
Jovian is sent into the beautiful and historic city of Caerella to gain agreement for surrender or compromise negotiations from the Royal Family of Elladein. He finds he is not among strangers.
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Teachers : The Neo Creadds Are Born (Ch.14f)
The Neo Creadds go out onto the Vidnet and into lecture halls to get their messages across and stimulate debate about the grey society which has developed. Avoiding comedy they begin to enter politics. Set in the alternative futuristic world of Marta and Gallanol In The Modern Age.
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These are good pieces, well
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!
Read full commentPosted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon
Very funny. I enjoyed that!
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
Very funny. I enjoyed that!
Read full commentPosted in Britney and Shania
Thanks for your comment Elsie
Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017
Thanks for your comment Elsie. I agree we seem to have moved forward from the clinical academic marking exercise approach to literary criticism, which has got to be good news. I think we give more of a personal response now on abctales....
Read full commentPosted in Have We Written Too Much?
Good piece, very effective.
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016
Good piece, very effective.
Read full commentPosted in subjected/ subjugated
I like the simple and direct
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.
Read full commentPosted in 25/11/2015
Your story is developing well
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
Read full commentAlso I think it...
Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
A promising story, encourages
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...
Read full commentPosted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine