David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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The Decline of Civilisation (Ch.16e) : Democracy of Managers
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Democracy of Managers : Ch.16e 26/3/00 The modern world had become inseparable from free democracy. Every citizen exercised a vote for public...
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More Reforms by the New National Labour Party
Just a few ideas about a New National Labour Party, which has just won a landslide in an election, based on its 'common sense' and 'no nonsense' policies. It is just a possible future scenario, but an interesting one I think, in this overcomplex and malfunctioning world.
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Tales Of Gallanol : Ch.8 Morith (Part 1)
Jovian is welcomed by the Royal Family of Elladein in Morith, but they are due to flee from the advancing southern army of High King Deneldinhew. They hear his story and encourage him to flee with them.
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Creative Media and Sales : Ch.16d The Decline of Civilisation
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Janus browsed on the vidnet. He was looking for material for another book he was slowly working on. He was in the job adverts section, under Creative Media and Sales. He wondered what was meant by 'creative media' in this world of work. ...
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The Fence (Youth Misbehaviour After The Election)
A Teenager destroys a Fence while showing off, not realising that an election has brought a new, more Left Wing government to power, but one which has brought more traditional punishments back to deal with Youth Misbehaviour and many other crimes.
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These are good pieces, well
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!
Read full commentPosted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon
Great piece! You have created
Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2019
Great piece! You have created your atmosphere of defeat or disenchantment so well.
Read full commentPosted in Friday the thirteenth
You have described the story
Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019
You have described the story in a very effective, easy to understand way, which I like. This story appeals to most of us modern minded people, who perhaps partly due to the teachings of Jesus, feel able to make our own choices and do not wish to...
Read full commentPosted in Let Him Who Is Without Sin Cast The First Stone.
I enjoyed this! Very readable
Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019
I enjoyed this! Very readable, and I can empathise with its humility and sense of not making too much of a difference. I like the way you create the sense of decline in the disappearing city.
Read full commentPosted in When I was a poet (After David Meltzer)
Well really if the land is
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
Well really if the land is holy ground, or church land, the police should have the power to move the travellers off. If the law is not able to be enforced then it will be made a mockery of. Hopefully there are places the travellers are allowed to...
Read full commentPosted in Two Gods.
I doubt there are anything
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
I doubt there are anything like enough policemen and women to police a firework ban. It would be quite ineffective, unless they stop the sale of them?
Read full commentPosted in Pets And Fireworks.
Great piece! The slightly
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019
Great piece! The slightly rambling way you describe events with the unexpected final sign of the cross is very effective!
Read full commentPosted in The Tent Of Meeting.
I enjoyed this and the style
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019
I enjoyed this and the style in which you write it. The natural debate which goes on in the hearts of modern christians when something like this happens! But maybe the congregation is just too easily pushed over?
Read full commentPosted in Two Gods.
Very funny! You seem to know
Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2019
Very funny! You seem to know exactly what the characters might have said if they were in a comedy slapstick instead of Game of Thrones!
Read full commentPosted in Game of Moans 6: ‘Hand’
An amusing way of
Posted on Fri, 19 Apr 2019
An amusing way of interpreting the characters in Game of Thrones! I enjoyed that.
Read full commentPosted in A Game of Scones
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