David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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Ch.19 Campaigns : Part 3 The Arts and Vidnet (Marta and Gallanol In The Modern Age)
24/2/99 In group meetings ideas were proposed for the encouragement of the arts and reading. Writers had suffered in the last century or so, and...
Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 5 : At The Mudbath at Dalyan!
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May 2022 Written 17/5/22 (11/7/22) As always Alfred could not just go straight into the mudbath, as many of the boat passenger tourists were doing...
Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 4b : (Journey Upriver To The Tombs From Turtle Beach)
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Alfred was disappointed there was to be no attempt to climb up to the Tombs to inspect them. Perhaps the ghosts of the Carians, Persians, or others...
Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 4 : (Journey Upriver To The Tombs From Turtle Beach)
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May 2022 (Written 31/10/22) The tourists of the multinational human species were only accorded one hour to relax and share the beach with the, hidden...
The Turkish Turtles of Turtle Beach by A.N.Muggins
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(Based on events during the Mudbath excursion near Marmaris in Turkey of May 2022) Written 18/7/22 The Turkish Turtles of Turtle Beach, in the...
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As I was reading I was
Posted on Mon, 24 Oct 2022
As I was reading I was expecting the worst as your threatening disaster occurred! I am glad you survived it, and that you actually managed to get your flu jabs! I thought you would get cancelled at the last minute. That was an exciting read, a...
Read full commentPosted in You Never Know
A heartwarming story! Your
Posted on Tue, 04 Jan 2022
A heartwarming story! Your kindness and care towards the cats is impressive and worthy. Kindness towards animals is, in my opinion, a sign of innate goodness, to be respected!
Read full commentPosted in Priyatelka, Turlough and the House of Cats
There is a nice feeling to
Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021
There is a nice feeling to this poem. It almost makes me wish I had been a bit older in 1970 and could remember it better! But youth can be at any time. All of us experience these moments when we are free, or optimistic, carefree.
Read full commentPosted in Before We Kissed Goodnight
These are good pieces, well
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!
Read full commentPosted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon
Could this be the future? Can
Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2023
Could this be the future? Can we construct a virtual or everlasting heaven? Great writing, characters remembering and re-experiencing life, and maybe going to heaven?
Read full commentPosted in The Edge of Heaven
I do also think this is a
Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023
I do also think this is a great piece, very melancholic, and also very real. A very natural style, with humour and sadness!
Read full commentPosted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?
This really was a good piece.
Posted on Fri, 27 Jan 2023
This really was a good piece. You really manage to show the negative feeling of the funeral and the low mood of the narrator perfectly. You get the feeling that his life and good memories are very much in the past and gone.
Read full commentPosted in end of the pier
Nice poem! It certainly
Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023
Nice poem! It certainly paints the scene. This come from a scene in a romantic film with Tom Hanks in it does it not? It rings a bell, but it is a while since I saw it. I like the idea of repainting a scene from a good film!
Read full commentPosted in A View of the Hudson
You make a very imortant
Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2023
You make a very imortant point here Luigi, that the good guys do not always win, even now in the Post 1945 world. It is important that we all realise that!
Read full commentPosted in 1945
I did enjoy this 'miniature'
Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2022
I did enjoy this 'miniature' satire of Brexit, but then it occurs to me that the Christmas economy may well dwarf the so called national economy in size. I once used to believe that the elves probably had it right, but nowadays we find that they...
Read full commentPosted in In-between Days
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