David Kirtley

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I have 138 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 46361 times and 8 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Pontius (Ch.15) : Part 3 Flycars

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Pontius, the Supreme Director of MIOST, has left his HQ to enjoy well deserved relaxation. He surveys the huge complex of MIOST from above, and considers his privilege to be driving his Flycar, long after they were banned for ordinary citizens. Set in the alternative futuristic world of Marta and Gallanol in the Modern Age.

Powerlessness

Events are happening, but do we have much power to influence them through social media? Can we stop the President of Brazil from destroying the rainforests?

Tales Of Gallanol : Ch.7 The Battle For Morith (Part 3)

After battle the dead are disposed of, and fewer prisoners are being kept than Gallanolian tradition would have expected. The brutality of the Border War is now affecting the new Civil War.

Commemoration For D Day

Commemoration For D Day Thousands of soldiers flung onto the North Coast of France. Normandy here we come! Young and malleable, dutiful and primed,...

Pied Piper

Pied Piper Pied Piper, Nigel Farage, Mirage Man – now you see him, now you don’t! Where will we see him next? Will he really be there? Or is he just...

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12 of my comments have received 13 Great Feedback votes

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These are good pieces, well

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!

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Posted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon

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Very funny! You seem to know

Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2019

Very funny! You seem to know exactly what the characters might have said if they were in a comedy slapstick instead of Game of Thrones!

 

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Posted in Game of Moans 6: ‘Hand’

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An amusing way of

Posted on Fri, 19 Apr 2019

An amusing way of interpreting the characters in Game of Thrones! I enjoyed that.

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Posted in A Game of Scones

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The human body, and mind, is

Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019

The human body, and mind, is a miracle of nature. You have expressed it well here.

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Posted in Speedy Connections

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I did enjoy this piece. The

Posted on Tue, 01 Jan 2019

I did enjoy this piece. The difficulties of modern life and the worries of unforeseen health issues were well explained.

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Posted in Help For Hero's.

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Very appropriate I think to

Posted on Sun, 11 Nov 2018

Very appropriate I think to bring these issues together on Remembrance Day. I enjoyed and was interested to read the tales of the lives of your grandfather and father with the subject of homelessness which so often seems to afflict veterans and...

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Posted in Remembering isn't enough ...

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Very funny. I enjoyed that!

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

Very funny. I enjoyed that!

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Posted in Britney and Shania

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Thanks for your comment Elsie

Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017

Thanks for your comment Elsie. I agree we seem to have moved forward from the clinical academic marking exercise approach to literary criticism, which has got to be good news. I think we give more of a personal response now on abctales....

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Posted in Have We Written Too Much?

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Good piece, very effective.

Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016

Good piece, very effective.

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Posted in subjected/ subjugated

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I like the simple and direct

Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015

I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.

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Posted in 25/11/2015

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