David Kirtley

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I have 209 stories published in 9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 72474 times and 11 of my stories have been cherry picked.
34 of my 437 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 35 votes

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David Kirtley

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Virus by Wendy Kirtley

Virus Dark skies above us, The virus is there, We’ve been told to stay home, If we dare to go out there. We must stay away from people we love,...

The Six Wives of Mr Alfred Muggins (an idle fantasy)

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Real Wife (Mrs Muggins) Alexa – imagining the woman behind that lovely Amazon woman’s voice! In actual fact his image of her changed with the seasons...

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34 of my comments have received 35 Great Feedback votes

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These are good pieces, well

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!

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Posted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon

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I really enjoyed this short

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2021

I really enjoyed this short story. I thought it was a clever and relevant idea, and well put together, with a bit of fun! So watch out fellow writers. Keep writing or another writer might do this to you in his or her plot! 

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Posted in The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)

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Fascinating! This shows just

Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2021

Fascinating! This shows just how little most of us really know about American history, including many Americans themselves. It is amazing how so few years after the Civil War the settlement of it was still in danger, even in the democratic system...

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Posted in A Bad Idea Minutes Before Insurrection

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I enjoyed reading this! You

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2020

I enjoyed reading this! You make the point very well, that perhaps we should all be more careful, until this virus threat is over!

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Posted in I Was So Close To Taking It Off.......................

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Great piece, relevant and

Posted on Sun, 25 Oct 2020

Great piece, relevant and uplifting!

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Posted in Thanks For the Memory

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Good thoughtful and caring

Posted on Sun, 20 Sep 2020

Good thoughtful and caring poem! I enjoyed reading it.

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Posted in Worlds Apart

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Good poem! You have described

Posted on Thu, 10 Sep 2020

Good poem! You have described so well the pitfalls and shortcomings of envy and jealousy. We should try to follow more positive leads in life!

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Posted in Envy

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An ordinary day turns into

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020

An ordinary day turns into something very dramatic. Darren has so much rage! Very well done!

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Posted in No Eagles Allowed

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What a sad series of events,

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2020

What a sad series of events, but very gripping. I really didn't think it would end so sadly! So much for helping others! Very effective.

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Posted in The Things We Do for Love

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I did enjoy reading this, not

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2020

I did enjoy reading this, not that I am usually too keen on a lot of swearing, but it is often very appropriate and hard hitting in the right place. Here it suits the character perfectly, a very dramatic and extreme character, who nonetheless...

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Posted in Not too Much to Ask

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