David Kirtley

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I have 176 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 59732 times and 10 of my stories have been cherry picked.
26 of my 342 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 27 votes

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David Kirtley

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Meanwhile In America

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Meanwhile In America A Cacophony of Hate A Policeman kills a Black Man in front of the world’s cameras, And they seem slow to bring him to justice...

Here Comes The Sun

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Here Comes The Sun But where are the people? No one’s around! In the garden? Up the stairs? Even the cat’s gone out. Our Labrador is in the shade,...

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26 of my comments have received 27 Great Feedback votes

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These are good pieces, well

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!

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Posted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon

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I did enjoy reading this, not

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2020

I did enjoy reading this, not that I am usually too keen on a lot of swearing, but it is often very appropriate and hard hitting in the right place. Here it suits the character perfectly, a very dramatic and extreme character, who nonetheless...

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Posted in Not too Much to Ask

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I have enjoyed your poem. It

Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2020

I have enjoyed your poem. It is a great poem, expressing our desires to explore all the books and films etc in our rich culture, which we are normally too busy to explore. The sense of our society having spoiled many of its opportunities and...

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Posted in Singing in Lockdown

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Interesting anecdote! You

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2020

Interesting anecdote! You were well rewarded for your caring assistance it seems. Well done!

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Posted in Mary.

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Great poem! You have found a

Posted on Wed, 08 Apr 2020

Great poem! You have found a different angle on the virus crisis. How will this distancing and isolation affect us? You have raised some interesting ideas!

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Posted in Igniting the Ignorant

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Interesting dilemma, well

Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2020

Interesting dilemma, well explained. Policies will vary, but in today's circumstances it does seem safer to wear a mask, for the protection of ourselves, and others. I don't have a mask myself (yet) but it does seem sensible for many situations....

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Posted in Choices.

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In my opinion this is a

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2020

In my opinion this is a really good poem about the issues, particularly the social isolation/distancing and discipline issues, brought up by the coronovirus crisis. You say so much which is really relevant, and have some interesting perspectives...

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Posted in Lockdown

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So they have phones in heaven

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2020

So they have phones in heaven nowadays as well? Entertaining thoughts. Perhaps its not so different!

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Posted in From Jester To King XLII

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Great piece! You have created

Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2019

Great piece! You have created your atmosphere of defeat or disenchantment so well.

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Posted in Friday the thirteenth

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You have described the story

Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019

You have described the story in a very effective, easy to understand way, which I like. This story appeals to most of us modern minded people, who perhaps partly due to the teachings of Jesus, feel able to make our own choices and do not wish to...

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Posted in Let Him Who Is Without Sin Cast The First Stone.

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