David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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New Inventions! (Maybe The Past Was Better?) by Mr A.N.Muggins
New Inventions, New Inventions! Coming out of my hair, Up my nose, And aching in my brain. I long for the good old days, When everything was simple,...
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More Thoughts About Biscuits and History! (An Aid To The History and Geography of Europe (and particularly Scotland and France)) by Mr Alfred N.Muggins
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The Jacobites would actually have been a great name for some biscuits, perhaps made with oats as an ingredient, and placed in tins of packaging with...
Time Travel To The Time Of Good Old King Henry : Auld England Was Green! (Land Of Greensleeves) by A.N.Muggins
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And Auld England was still truly green in those days of Olde. Outlaws of Robin Hood’s ilk probably still roamed the woods and evaded the justice of...
Mr A.N.Muggins Gets Criticized For Thinking Openly About The World's Problems (Without Having A Clear Plan)
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Mr Muggins had once wanted to be a rock star. Now it was the writing bug which had got him, but similarly no avail. He’d make his mark on the world...
Recent Invasions Of Scotland by Alfred.N.Muggins
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Alfred and some of his friends had first invaded Scotland in 1984, armed with maps and guide books, and a car. Thereupon they had taken it upon...
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There is a nice feeling to
Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021
There is a nice feeling to this poem. It almost makes me wish I had been a bit older in 1970 and could remember it better! But youth can be at any time. All of us experience these moments when we are free, or optimistic, carefree.
Read full commentPosted in Before We Kissed Goodnight
These are good pieces, well
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!
Read full commentPosted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon
Another poem about another
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
Another poem about another great piece of classical music, (and Russian again!)! Thanks for reminding me about what it was all about. I think you have done a good job of describing it!
Read full commentPosted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain
A very fitting poem for the
Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021
A very fitting poem for the precarious olympic events, and the situation of the pandemic and its risk to Japan and other nations. I personally think they are right to go ahead in this restrained and hopefully safe way, but I like the way you...
Read full commentPosted in The Myth of Olympians
Hilarious! Did this really
Posted on Tue, 13 Jul 2021
Hilarious! Did this really happen? In a school? Very funny, and great characters. Is it based on real memories or characters?
Read full commentPosted in Steve Mason and the Music Nazi
I enjoyed your impression of
Posted on Mon, 21 Jun 2021
I enjoyed your impression of Stonehenge, and its significance. Very fitting!
Read full commentPosted in Estival Solstice
Great poem summarising a
Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021
Great poem summarising a scene which does seem very moving, after looking at it on your link. I may have seen it before, but had forgotten. This idea of an android with a conscience, and a memory, but nonetheless a job to do, is very powerful! He...
Read full commentPosted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)
I will definitely check the
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
I will definitely check the current self government status of Scotland prior to my next visit to Scotland! and make sure I can still trust my associates. I did enjoy this wild satirical very current political story!
Read full commentPosted in The Sure Yank Redemption
Good poem! You deal with some
Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021
Good poem! You deal with some very profound and difficult issues, and express your feelings very well.
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I enjoyed your poem. It is a
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
I enjoyed your poem. It is a good journey of the imagination, even if it is not, or never becomes real! Well imagined!
Read full commentPosted in Footsteps on Mars
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