David Kirtley

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I have 225 stories published in 9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 78416 times and 11 of my stories have been cherry picked.
39 of my 488 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 41 votes

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David Kirtley

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Mr Alfred Muggins' Small Melodrama In The Kitchen

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Muggins came into the kitchen. Chaos!! He could see at least two tops off things (and that was just at first glance!) The milk was still out on the...

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39 of my comments have received 41 Great Feedback votes

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There is a nice feeling to

Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

There is a nice feeling to this poem. It almost makes me wish I had been a bit older in 1970 and could remember it better! But youth can be at any time. All of us experience these moments when we are free, or optimistic, carefree.

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Posted in Before We Kissed Goodnight

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These are good pieces, well

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!

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Posted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon

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I enjoyed your poem. It is a

Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021

I enjoyed your poem. It is a good journey of the imagination, even if it is not, or never becomes real! Well imagined!

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Posted in Footsteps on Mars

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I did enjoy this one

Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021

I did enjoy this one Marandina. Your comic satire is very up to date, and very funny. Ursula would like to be nice but has to use the methods at her disposal. Boris seems to ride through every crisis intact, but how many lives has he got left?...

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Posted in Most Vial

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A fitting description of the

Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021

A fitting description of the piece and of the event. I like Stravinsky, and I always thought the Russians created a lot of the best 'classical' music! Now I have read this I must listen to the famous piece again!

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Posted in The Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913)

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Most of us don't expect

Posted on Wed, 24 Mar 2021

Most of us don't expect employers to be perfect, in living up to legislations and commitments, but the kind of employers that put blame on their staff for there own shortcomings are pretty despicable. They should be publicised and their behaviour...

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Posted in Pad Life: Princess and the Crone

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I really enjoyed this short

Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2021

I really enjoyed this short story. I thought it was a clever and relevant idea, and well put together, with a bit of fun! So watch out fellow writers. Keep writing or another writer might do this to you in his or her plot! 

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Posted in The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)

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Fascinating! This shows just

Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2021

Fascinating! This shows just how little most of us really know about American history, including many Americans themselves. It is amazing how so few years after the Civil War the settlement of it was still in danger, even in the democratic system...

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Posted in A Bad Idea Minutes Before Insurrection

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I enjoyed reading this! You

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2020

I enjoyed reading this! You make the point very well, that perhaps we should all be more careful, until this virus threat is over!

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Posted in I Was So Close To Taking It Off.......................

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Great piece, relevant and

Posted on Sun, 25 Oct 2020

Great piece, relevant and uplifting!

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Posted in Thanks For the Memory

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