David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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Somehow We Are All Equal On Holiday
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Somehow we are all equal on holiday. We could be a lowly carer or the Mayor of London, a bank manager or a bus driver; We’re all Brits, together on...
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First Impressions
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First Impressions Greece, land of the early dusk, before our plane arrives in Corfu. Coming from Britain, clocks two hours forwards; It seems an...
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The Neo Creadds Are Born (Ch.14g): Discussion Group (Part 2 -Section 2)
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Shy Calban attends his first Neo Creadd discussion group and hears theories of how society can be changed for the better. Could the people regain the freedom of leisure time? Set in the alternative futuristic world of Marta and Gallanol In The Modern Age. Please read Section 1 first. This Section 2 of Part 2 is to finish.
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The Neo Creadds Are Born (Ch.14g): Discussion Group (Part 2 - Section 1)
Shy Calban attends his first Neo Creadd discussion group and hears theories of how society can be changed for the better. Could the people regain the freedom of leisure time? Set in the alternative futuristic world of Marta and Gallanol In The Modern Age. Please read Section 2 to finish this Part 2 to follow.
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Cacophony On Holiday
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Cacophony On Holiday Grandchildren all with Ipads, Adults with mobile phones or Ipads, All going at once. Kids’ TV, nursery rhymes, Wrestlemania, You...
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These are good pieces, well
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
These are good pieces, well written and intelligent visions of the future!
Read full commentPosted in UV (Part 3) - Dillon
Very funny. I enjoyed that!
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
Very funny. I enjoyed that!
Read full commentPosted in Britney and Shania
Thanks for your comment Elsie
Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017
Thanks for your comment Elsie. I agree we seem to have moved forward from the clinical academic marking exercise approach to literary criticism, which has got to be good news. I think we give more of a personal response now on abctales....
Read full commentPosted in Have We Written Too Much?
Good piece, very effective.
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016
Good piece, very effective.
Read full commentPosted in subjected/ subjugated
I like the simple and direct
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.
Read full commentPosted in 25/11/2015
Your story is developing well
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
Read full commentAlso I think it...
Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
A promising story, encourages
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...
Read full commentPosted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine