David Kirtley

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I have 202 stories published in 9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 70210 times and 11 of my stories have been cherry picked.
32 of my 416 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 33 votes

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David Kirtley

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The Eleventh Hour

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New outbreaks occur, In Leicester and Oldham. Manchester and Glasgow return towards lockdown, Now Leeds is at risk, and Birmingham again! Is there...

Calban Attempts To Experience Life More Fully (Ch.18): Part 2

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Calban journeys across the City to a semi dark area, in need of economic regeneration. Unable to find female companionship he has come here searching for other ways forward. This is part of my 'Marta City and Gallanol In The Modern Age' novel, set in a futuristic period, in a world quite similar to our own.

Calban Attempts To Experience Life More Fully (Ch.18) Part 1

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Calban feels desperation about his inability to find female companionship. Membership of the Neo Creadd group does present opportunitiy to meet women at least, but he feels resentment towards women in his workplace. This is the continuation of my 'Marta and Gallanol In The Modern Age' novel, set in a futuristic period, in a world quite similar to our own.

Democracy 2020

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Democracy comes, through history and struggle, And it goes, in Hong Kong and Sinkiang, Just like Tianamen Square. The leaders of Communism know what...

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32 of my comments have received 33 Great Feedback votes

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Your story is developing well

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014

Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
Also I think it...

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Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine

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A promising story, encourages

Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014

A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...

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Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine

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