David Kirtley

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My stories have been read 204030 times and 18 of my stories have been cherry picked.
180 of my 1,158 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 186 votes

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i have enjoyed reading this

Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2022

i have enjoyed reading this one Marandina. It definitely kept me guessing until the end, and the ending did have some good twists. I feel maybe that a bit more explanation or description of how the kids were kept and looked after during their '...

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Three of Three)

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A very thought provoking and

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

A very thought provoking and quite sad poem. You deal with some very real issues here. Capitalism is like a machine that does not stop, for good or ill. We need to control it and its effects ideally. Let us hope we do not all become surplus to...

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Posted in rage, rage against the Dying of your Rights

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I do like the way you updated

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

I do like the way you updated the story of the horses into a future where the artificial intelligences are proving far more reliable and useful than the real humans, who have managed to score a massive own goal by creating a future in which they...

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

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I like what you have done

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

I like what you have done with the imagery of 'Wizard Of Oz'. It's a great story/fantasy, but like all the best such tales it can be used to symbolise so much of the problems, hopes and dreams of our real world! I like the way you have updated...

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Posted in Back In Kansas

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I like the way you have

Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2022

I like the way you have contrasted the Queen's 70 years of kind, understanding and supportive service to Putin's despotic carelessness for human life. At this moment in history that is a very important and stark contrast, between humane service...

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Posted in Appreciated

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I enjoyed your poem relating

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022

I enjoyed your poem relating the old story nicely! It is a great story, which can be used as a moral tale, and as a speculation about what could have happened to the children! I seem to remember reading that quite a few German cities/towns claim...

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Posted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)

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I was able to read this piece

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

I was able to read this piece one day on the holiday I have just been on, but couldn't really use the internet most of the time. I was very relieved to hear your son is okay and is safely home. I found your piece very informative and illuminating...

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Posted in A Final Message From Moscow

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I did enjoy this continuation

Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022

I did enjoy this continuation of your Pointless saga, and Boris's continued lucky escape. It is nice to know that the French Revolution hasn't actually finished yet, but I think Boris has far more than 9 lives! He is a miracle man, who, just when...

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Posted in Pointless Boris (Part Two of two)

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Vladimir Plutinpot must have

Posted on Fri, 22 Apr 2022

Vladimir Plutinpot must have one of the thickest skins known amongst the currently living human race. Most ordinary folks like us would be quite embarassed to be causing so many people so much pain and suffering without good enough reason! To...

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Posted in Vladimir Plutinpot Transforms Into A Tyrantosaurus Rex 500 Years After Henry VIII Did The Same! by Alfred N.Muggins (Thus Proving Once Again That History Repeats Itself!)

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I did enjoy this very funny

Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022

I did enjoy this very funny exagerated satire. It is a good series, and I feel I know the real Boris a lot better now. I am wondering whether Priti could be becoming the real power behind the throne of Boris? (Maybe she can use her charms on Mr...

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Posted in Pointless Boris (Part One of Two)

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