David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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An Easter Message Of Confusion from Alfred N.Muggins
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Easter Saturday 8/4/23 Is this the time of year when we the people take back control from the bureaucrats, sharks, and business machines who have...
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Alfred Muggins’ Easter Dream
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10/4/24 Bob Dylan comes on singing a hymn with keyboards and guitars, a message of peace for all sides and all hearts. Truth is spoken, and felt! The...
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The Year of the Elections by Alfred N.Muggins
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15/6/24 There was to be an election coming up – a General Election! As far as Alfred could make out it might have been an attempt by young smart...
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Alfred Muggins’ Easter Holiday by Alfred N.Muggins Part 2
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(31/3/24 / 6/4/24 / 15/4/24) The Easter weekend this year also coincided with Changing of the Clocks as the hour leapt forward, evaporating a whole...
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Alfred Muggins’ Easter Holiday by Alfred N.Muggins
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31/3/24 (6/4/24) The Easter holidays approached. “What holiday?” asked Alfred Muggins desperately! As it approached his intention of writing about...
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Our world might soon become a
Posted on Thu, 27 Apr 2023
Our world might soon become a kind of museum to the dead if we all invested into these kind of holograms! Would we ever be able to go forward with our real lives? Great ideas and imagining of a future technology!
Read full commentPosted in Hereafter: A Holodog Story (Part Three of Three)
You have packed rich imagery
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2023
You have packed rich imagery into this poem, which describes the place and animals very well. It did remind me of a safari I once went on in Kenya too!
Read full commentPosted in Ranthambore
I started doodling when I was
Posted on Sat, 13 May 2023
I started doodling when I was at school. From there I decided to build up the doodles into proper pieces on separate pieces of paper, which I did for many years, creating many works of my own art which I still enjoy looking at to this day, and...
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Some great descriptions there
Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023
Some great descriptions there: I particularly liked, and felt saddened by 'lost sunsets of Hiroshima'!
Also 'neon dreams of the Orient' , which somehow seems to sum up the present days perfectly!
Read full commentPosted in Geisha
I enjoyed the poem. It paints
Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023
I enjoyed the poem. It paints pictures of Japan for me which means it has worked! I am not sure I will ever fully appreciate what it might be to be Geisha, certainly mysterious like so much about Japan, and also beautiful! But this certainly...
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I appreciated the blunt or
Posted on Sun, 07 May 2023
I appreciated the blunt or realistic angle of your poem. I like the way you said it, even though I don't feel too negative about the monarchy right now.
Read full commentPosted in The King of Certain Subjects
This is a great and rather
Posted on Tue, 02 May 2023
This is a great and rather frightening short story! You have imagined a tidy future with no waste, in which it seems all of us must plan for our demise, one way or another. I haven't quite worked out whether his final unexpected recycling was...
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So sad, and it does and
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
So sad, and it does and should make us angry. He should certainly take responsibility at that age. I suppose he will pay for it in many ways as he goes through life. I do think the community should know who did it, and be aware of the danger that...
Read full commentPosted in It Is About Time The Law Was Changed.
I did appreciate reading this
Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023
I did appreciate reading this this morning, at Easter as well! You really report your experiences in hospital so well and truthfully. It is a real insight for those of us who are not yet needing that level of assistance/medical intervention. It...
Read full commentPosted in Bitty Bsarbie Boob part 3
I am pleased to read your
Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023
I am pleased to read your evidence of animals dreaming too. Dreams are quite fascinating. I just wish I could write mine down, but they are gone before I can get the pen in my hand usually!
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