David Kirtley

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Our Late Queen By Wendy Kirtley (my wife)

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(Departed 8/9/22) The mother of all the nations of the Commonwealth has served us well for 70 years, through thick and thin she was there, sad times...
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180 of my comments have received 186 Great Feedback votes

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A fitting memory of it.

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

A fitting memory of it. Watching a documentary about it again has reminded me of the extreme horror and extreme spectacle of it!

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Posted in Twin Towers

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Great poem, showing the

Posted on Tue, 24 Aug 2021

Great poem, showing the desperation, disappointment, and tragedy of those queueing or jostling outside the airport at Kabul. These are scenes that should not be happening, one way or another, a modern horror story. What went wrong? What could...

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Posted in Kabul Airport

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I did enjoy this! You have

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

I did enjoy this! You have written it well. It shows the feelings of leaving home, moving on, very well!

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Posted in Leaving Home

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The sense of failure and

Posted on Wed, 11 Aug 2021

The sense of failure and misfortune is very well drawn! Very well done!

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Posted in Danger Mouse

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The shaggy blonde Etonian

Posted on Wed, 28 Jul 2021

The shaggy blonde Etonian does have some interesting friends, and he keeps meeting them, but can he trust any of them? I enjoyed the satire and the pantomime Marandina. You have shown the spirit of the times very accurately!

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Posted in Punters

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This did make me laugh. I

Posted on Mon, 02 Aug 2021

This did make me laugh. I enjoyed it. We all have difficulty controlling ourselves and following best laid plans!

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Posted in How Roger Came to Spend Lockdown on the Sofa in His Underpants

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Another poem about another

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

Another poem about another great piece of classical music, (and Russian again!)! Thanks for reminding me about what it was all about. I think you have done a good job of describing it!

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Posted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain

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A very fitting poem for the

Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021

A very fitting poem for the precarious olympic events, and the situation of the pandemic and its risk to Japan and other nations. I personally think they are right to go ahead in this restrained and hopefully safe way, but I like the way you...

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Posted in The Myth of Olympians

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Hilarious! Did this really

Posted on Tue, 13 Jul 2021

Hilarious! Did this really happen? In a school? Very funny, and great characters. Is it based on real memories or characters?

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Posted in Steve Mason and the Music Nazi

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I enjoyed your impression of

Posted on Mon, 21 Jun 2021

I enjoyed your impression of Stonehenge, and its significance. Very fitting!

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Posted in Estival Solstice

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