David Kirtley

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I have 442 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 419610 times and 20 of my stories have been cherry picked.
246 of my 1,374 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 258 votes

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246 of my comments have received 258 Great Feedback votes

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As always you have told a

Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022

As always you have told a tale which describes normal behaviour well, but leads into a gripping drama of cliffhangers and possibilities, the fear of the unknown and uncertainty!  It reminds me in many ways of your 'Enchantress Of Avalon' story...

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Posted in Charmed (Part Two of Two)

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I thought the ghost of Mrs

Posted on Mon, 22 Aug 2022

I thought the ghost of Mrs Thatcher was dead, and that we might be safe from callous economic negligence! Sadly it seems she is back with a vengeance to make us all work harder, and she even has influence on the Labour Party? Great satire,...

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Posted in Statler and Thatcher (deceased) - the energy crisis

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I enjoyed this, as always. I

Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022

I enjoyed this, as always. I read it before I went away on holiday last week. You have managed to keep very up to date with the parliamentary and cabinet pantomimes which are currently occurring, and manage to make Brexit sound positively...

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Posted in Boris and the Curious Case of Brexit

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I enjoyed this. You have

Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2022

I enjoyed this. You have created a meaningful story of life passing by in stages, and reaching its natural conclusion! It is easy to read, which is good, leading the reader to the final twist. It has a magical quality, which makes it very...

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Posted in The Artist of Swanage Downs

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An exciting read! Gripping!

Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2022

An exciting read! Gripping!

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Posted in Information highway

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Rediscovering something we

Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2022

Rediscovering something we wrote or drew in the past can give great pleasure and satisfaction. We should never throw them away!

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Posted in from 1978 a old school book

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i have enjoyed reading this

Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2022

i have enjoyed reading this one Marandina. It definitely kept me guessing until the end, and the ending did have some good twists. I feel maybe that a bit more explanation or description of how the kids were kept and looked after during their '...

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Three of Three)

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A very thought provoking and

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

A very thought provoking and quite sad poem. You deal with some very real issues here. Capitalism is like a machine that does not stop, for good or ill. We need to control it and its effects ideally. Let us hope we do not all become surplus to...

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Posted in rage, rage against the Dying of your Rights

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I do like the way you updated

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

I do like the way you updated the story of the horses into a future where the artificial intelligences are proving far more reliable and useful than the real humans, who have managed to score a massive own goal by creating a future in which they...

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

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I like what you have done

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

I like what you have done with the imagery of 'Wizard Of Oz'. It's a great story/fantasy, but like all the best such tales it can be used to symbolise so much of the problems, hopes and dreams of our real world! I like the way you have updated...

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Posted in Back In Kansas

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