David Kirtley

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A Bad Deal! By Alfred Muggins

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23/1/23 Will there be anything of me left? Sign up for a proper job! Sell your time for an amount which really isn’t that much higher than the...

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252 of my comments have received 264 Great Feedback votes

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It could so easily be any of

Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022

It could so easily be any of us, and we don't know where the whole war will end up for all of us. our fragile modern peace has been shattered. Your poem expresses what so many of us are feeling and what we need to feel, so that we can all...

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Posted in 502 Kilometres

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Great Poem Marandina! You

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022

Great Poem Marandina! You perfectly describe the mood and the uncertainty in 'untouched' Moscow. I do hope your son will be able to complete his 3 months, but it may be wise to return. War could get nastier and Ukraine still end up occupied, but...

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Posted in Messages from Moscow

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Thanks for commenting Di Hard

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022

Thanks for commenting Di Hard. I am thinking that maybe the European nations and Ukraine should have given Putin the guarantee he seems to want so badly that Ukraine cannot join NATO or the EU, and probably recognised Russia's annexation of...

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Posted in Propaganda!

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Maybe if western nations had

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022

Maybe if western nations had agreed that Ukraine would be restricted from ever joining NATO or the EU the invasion could have been avoided? That might well have been a better solution than the current situation where Putin can sit on parts of the...

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Posted in Listening to the News 2/3/22

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Good poem. You aptly sum up

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022

Good poem. You aptly sum up the inevitable hypocrisy of our 'support' when western nations don't feel it wise to join their defence and trigger a wider war.

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Posted in Listening to the News 2/3/22

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You have made Eunice into a

Posted on Fri, 18 Feb 2022

You have made Eunice into a storm with personality, a moody storm taking centre stage, and creating spectacle in front of us! Good poem!

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Posted in Drama Of Storm Eunice

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I think you have outlined the

Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022

I think you have outlined the dangers of the new law/ rules very well. You have expressed what most of us are probably thinking about thes changes to the rules which seem to have come from nowhere and seem not to have been contributed to by the...

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Posted in Seriously?

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I enjoyed your story of a

Posted on Thu, 10 Feb 2022

I enjoyed your story of a young man drawn into something he cannot handle by feminine promise (not just once, but twice!). He does certainly seem to pick his ladies doesn't he? Or could it be that he is the one who is inadvertantly selecting them...

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Posted in The Enchantress of Avalon (Part Two of Two)

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Do we mean that Valentine was

Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022

Do we mean that Valentine was not just about love and romance? I have read some suggestions/history about him in the past, but always forget the detail before the next Valentine's Day comes around. Evidently he was an early Christian martyr in...

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Posted in Saint Valentine

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An imaginative and amusing

Posted on Thu, 20 Jan 2022

An imaginative and amusing leap ten years into the future! I enjoyed that, but whether it is actually going to turn out like that, I am not sure? Maybe if the Conservatives win all the elections until then it could just be! 

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Posted in BBC TV Listings, Wednesday January 21st 2032.

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