David Kirtley
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Alfred N.Muggins has a Bad Dream : Brinkmanship (Inside the Mind of Vladimir Plutin : Victory For Russia!)
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14/5/22 Ukraine needed rebuilding! His toyships had blasted the coastal cities and the Donbas, as well as taking quite a number of potshots at Lvov...
A Trip to the Supermarket (Tesco’s) After Work! By Mr Alfred N.Muggins Part 3
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Part 3 Time was dragging as well. Alfred felt the loss of free time more keenly at the moment as he was in work which was very much full time at the...
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A Trip to the Supermarket (Tesco’s) After Work! By Mr Alfred N.Muggins Part 2
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Part 2 Monday 16/1/23 (section written 21/2/23) Having found his wife in the non food part of the large shop he desperately tried to encourage her...
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The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.4 by Alfred Muggins (himself) The Real Henry VIII Finds His Feet In 21st Century England! Part 2
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The ‘real’ Henry VIII has come to modern Britain to get healed and ‘fixed’ by the NHS, while intrepid Alfred Muggins takes his place as a ‘caretaker’ King in the 16 th Century. The ‘real’ Henry is learning a lot about the state of society and politics in modern Great Britain, and Europe!
The Coronation Of Charles III, the ‘Green’ King by Alfred N.Muggins Part 3
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Part 3 Charles was now fully King, with his lovely Queen Camilla, in beautiful white dress! He was a full King at last, with the whole weight of the...
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You have made Eunice into a
Posted on Fri, 18 Feb 2022
You have made Eunice into a storm with personality, a moody storm taking centre stage, and creating spectacle in front of us! Good poem!
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I think you have outlined the
Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022
I think you have outlined the dangers of the new law/ rules very well. You have expressed what most of us are probably thinking about thes changes to the rules which seem to have come from nowhere and seem not to have been contributed to by the...
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I enjoyed your story of a
Posted on Thu, 10 Feb 2022
I enjoyed your story of a young man drawn into something he cannot handle by feminine promise (not just once, but twice!). He does certainly seem to pick his ladies doesn't he? Or could it be that he is the one who is inadvertantly selecting them...
Read full commentPosted in The Enchantress of Avalon (Part Two of Two)
Do we mean that Valentine was
Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022
Do we mean that Valentine was not just about love and romance? I have read some suggestions/history about him in the past, but always forget the detail before the next Valentine's Day comes around. Evidently he was an early Christian martyr in...
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An imaginative and amusing
Posted on Thu, 20 Jan 2022
An imaginative and amusing leap ten years into the future! I enjoyed that, but whether it is actually going to turn out like that, I am not sure? Maybe if the Conservatives win all the elections until then it could just be!
Read full commentPosted in BBC TV Listings, Wednesday January 21st 2032.
You are managing to 'sell'
Posted on Wed, 05 Jan 2022
You are managing to 'sell' Bulgaria very well Turlough, the land of everlasting Christmas Trees, which just keep on growing. Alfred wants to know whether the Bulgarians enjoy sprouts, and whether they grow their own or get them imported from...
Read full commentPosted in Offences Against The Christmas Spirit (A list of crimes and offences against the sacred Spirit of Christmas) by Mr Alfred N.Muggins
Good poem Marandina! You
Posted on Wed, 05 Jan 2022
Good poem Marandina! You brought me back to the romantic legends of King Arthur and Avalon etc. which I have always enjoyed. I am, in a sense, surprised that tower hasn't blown away, as it was exceedingly windy when I went there some years ago....
Read full commentPosted in Ynys Wydryn (Glastonbury Tor)
I did enjoy this piece. For a
Posted on Thu, 30 Dec 2021
I did enjoy this piece. For a few minutes I really thought the American Revolution was not going to happen! That was quick thinking! (The Genesis of a new nation!! Wow!)
Read full commentPosted in Philadelphia Freedom and Phil Collins
Your poem is reminding me a
Posted on Fri, 31 Dec 2021
Your poem is reminding me a little of Bruce Springsteen's 'The River'. The new year is like the high expectations at the beginning which turns into the river of life as the year (or life!) passes/flows. I like the imagery you have used! Happy new...
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I like this poem and how it
Posted on Sat, 01 Jan 2022
I like this poem and how it marries optimism with the regressive effects of the pandemic and decline of our health and social systems. You express the mixed feelings of entering the new year at this time! Happy New Year nonetheless!
Read full commentPosted in To Be or Not to Be (an optimist)
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