David Kirtley
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Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 4 : (Journey Upriver To The Tombs From Turtle Beach)
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May 2022 (Written 31/10/22) The tourists of the multinational human species were only accorded one hour to relax and share the beach with the, hidden...
The Turkish Turtles of Turtle Beach by A.N.Muggins
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(Based on events during the Mudbath excursion near Marmaris in Turkey of May 2022) Written 18/7/22 The Turkish Turtles of Turtle Beach, in the...
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Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 3
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(The events and feelings described here actually occurred in May 2022) 16/7/22 Winding through the streets of Marmaris in the minibus, a couple of...
Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 2
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May 2022 (Written 11/7/22) They had been picked up on that fateful morning at the allotted time, about 8.15 if he recalled correctly. This would be...
Mudbath! (The Ultimate Day Trip Of All Possible Day Trips!) by Alfred N. Muggins (from his recent holiday in Marmaris, Turkey!) Part 1
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16/5/22 They were told this would be the tour of tours! They would wash in the sacred mud, and presumably, Alfred assumed, they would be rejuvenated...
The sense of failure and
Posted on Wed, 11 Aug 2021
The sense of failure and misfortune is very well drawn! Very well done!
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The shaggy blonde Etonian
Posted on Wed, 28 Jul 2021
The shaggy blonde Etonian does have some interesting friends, and he keeps meeting them, but can he trust any of them? I enjoyed the satire and the pantomime Marandina. You have shown the spirit of the times very accurately!
Read full commentPosted in Punters
This did make me laugh. I
Posted on Mon, 02 Aug 2021
This did make me laugh. I enjoyed it. We all have difficulty controlling ourselves and following best laid plans!
Read full commentPosted in How Roger Came to Spend Lockdown on the Sofa in His Underpants
Another poem about another
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
Another poem about another great piece of classical music, (and Russian again!)! Thanks for reminding me about what it was all about. I think you have done a good job of describing it!
Read full commentPosted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain
A very fitting poem for the
Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021
A very fitting poem for the precarious olympic events, and the situation of the pandemic and its risk to Japan and other nations. I personally think they are right to go ahead in this restrained and hopefully safe way, but I like the way you...
Read full commentPosted in The Myth of Olympians
Hilarious! Did this really
Posted on Tue, 13 Jul 2021
Hilarious! Did this really happen? In a school? Very funny, and great characters. Is it based on real memories or characters?
Read full commentPosted in Steve Mason and the Music Nazi
I enjoyed your impression of
Posted on Mon, 21 Jun 2021
I enjoyed your impression of Stonehenge, and its significance. Very fitting!
Read full commentPosted in Estival Solstice
Great poem summarising a
Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021
Great poem summarising a scene which does seem very moving, after looking at it on your link. I may have seen it before, but had forgotten. This idea of an android with a conscience, and a memory, but nonetheless a job to do, is very powerful! He...
Read full commentPosted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)
I will definitely check the
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
I will definitely check the current self government status of Scotland prior to my next visit to Scotland! and make sure I can still trust my associates. I did enjoy this wild satirical very current political story!
Read full commentPosted in The Sure Yank Redemption
Good poem! You deal with some
Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021
Good poem! You deal with some very profound and difficult issues, and express your feelings very well.
Read full commentPosted in The Last Elephant
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