David Kirtley

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My stories have been read 417257 times and 20 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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A Bad Deal! By Alfred Muggins

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23/1/23 Will there be anything of me left? Sign up for a proper job! Sell your time for an amount which really isn’t that much higher than the...

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246 of my comments have received 258 Great Feedback votes

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I like the way you have

Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2022

I like the way you have contrasted the Queen's 70 years of kind, understanding and supportive service to Putin's despotic carelessness for human life. At this moment in history that is a very important and stark contrast, between humane service...

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Posted in Appreciated

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I enjoyed your poem relating

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022

I enjoyed your poem relating the old story nicely! It is a great story, which can be used as a moral tale, and as a speculation about what could have happened to the children! I seem to remember reading that quite a few German cities/towns claim...

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Posted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)

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I was able to read this piece

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

I was able to read this piece one day on the holiday I have just been on, but couldn't really use the internet most of the time. I was very relieved to hear your son is okay and is safely home. I found your piece very informative and illuminating...

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Posted in A Final Message From Moscow

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I did enjoy this continuation

Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022

I did enjoy this continuation of your Pointless saga, and Boris's continued lucky escape. It is nice to know that the French Revolution hasn't actually finished yet, but I think Boris has far more than 9 lives! He is a miracle man, who, just when...

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Posted in Pointless Boris (Part Two of two)

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Vladimir Plutinpot must have

Posted on Fri, 22 Apr 2022

Vladimir Plutinpot must have one of the thickest skins known amongst the currently living human race. Most ordinary folks like us would be quite embarassed to be causing so many people so much pain and suffering without good enough reason! To...

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Posted in Vladimir Plutinpot Transforms Into A Tyrantosaurus Rex 500 Years After Henry VIII Did The Same! by Alfred N.Muggins (Thus Proving Once Again That History Repeats Itself!)

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I did enjoy this very funny

Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022

I did enjoy this very funny exagerated satire. It is a good series, and I feel I know the real Boris a lot better now. I am wondering whether Priti could be becoming the real power behind the throne of Boris? (Maybe she can use her charms on Mr...

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Posted in Pointless Boris (Part One of Two)

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Wow! This is very good Di

Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022

Wow! This is very good Di Hard. An allegory which shows the current conflict in Ukraine and the world, in a very intelligent way. I am pretty sure I know who the Clever King is, very topical, but there are a few candidates for who the Richest Man...

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Posted in two men

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I enjoyed your poem. It seems

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

I enjoyed your poem. It seems very appropriate to us writers at abctales, all searching for some degree of recognition or an audience!

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Posted in Daisy Chain

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I enjoyed your poem. Its a

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

I enjoyed your poem. Its a great idea, looking at your life backwards through a prism, and you certainly do that very effectively. Well chosen words!

I would be interested now to see what your earlier version of this poem was, before you...

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Posted in Life Through a Prism

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In the early stages of this

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022

In the early stages of this invasion I wondered whether the Russians would have avoided invasion if they had been offered to keep their 2014 conquests with the neutrality of Ukraine, or might even then make a quick deal. But really the invasion...

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Posted in I Woke Up One Morning To Find The World Had Changed! By Alfred N.Muggins

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