David Kirtley

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My stories have been read 545173 times and 20 of my stories have been cherry picked.
252 of my 1,401 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 264 votes

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The Man Who Almost Saved The World by Alfred N.Muggins

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18/7/24 And the Pied Piper leads his adherents and the whole nation into the jaws of transatlantic capitalism, On both sides of the pond! The Buffoon...

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252 of my comments have received 264 Great Feedback votes

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Could this be the future? Can

Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2023

Could this be the future? Can we construct a virtual or everlasting heaven? Great writing, characters remembering and re-experiencing life, and maybe going to heaven?

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Posted in The Edge of Heaven

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I do also think this is a

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

I do also think this is a great piece, very melancholic, and also very real. A very natural style, with humour and sadness!

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Posted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

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Nice poem! It certainly

Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023

Nice poem! It certainly paints the scene. This come from a scene in a romantic film with Tom Hanks in it does it not? It rings a bell, but it is a while since I saw it. I like the idea of repainting a scene from a good film!

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Posted in A View of the Hudson

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You make a very imortant

Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2023

You make a very imortant point here Luigi, that the good guys do not always win, even now in the Post 1945 world. It is important that we all realise that!

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Posted in 1945

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I did enjoy this 'miniature'

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2022

I did enjoy this 'miniature' satire of Brexit, but then it occurs to me that the Christmas economy may well dwarf the so called national economy in size. I once used to believe that the elves probably had it right, but nowadays we find that they...

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Posted in In-between Days

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I enjoyed this realistic

Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2022

I enjoyed this realistic story. In this all too real Christmas Tale it seems too much damage has been done to the relationship, and Mick's late reversal of attitude seems to come too late to save his marriage! Not all Christmas tales can end well...

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part Two of Two)

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Good so far! An alternative

Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2022

Good so far! An alternative Christmas tale, infused with reality!

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part One of Two)

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A lovely story! It did bring

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022

A lovely story! It did bring a tear to my eyes at the recognition and acceptance of his place in the new family at the end! 

We have a little dog who has occasionally escaped from the garden to chase the foxes, which gets me worried...

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Posted in The Last Wish of Christmas

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I enjoyed this poem, as I do

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

I enjoyed this poem, as I do feel the issues you describe. I could never be described as a go getter so it seems to relate to me. It is not that I would wish to stop go getters from doing or being what they are or want to be. Perhaps I do feel...

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Posted in Life is for the Go Getters

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I enjoyed this moral tale,

Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022

I enjoyed this moral tale, and thought it was very effective. It did remind me of the scrooge story too, and another one which my wife and I read a few years ago, about a fairground repair man killed in an accident on a ride in New Jersey, in...

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Posted in The Last Door

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