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Part 2 Daventry had been preparing for the evening’s Big Game, but the Mugginses had already seen Daventry, and had a lovely meal there, in a pub. It...
Part 3 Time was dragging as well. Alfred felt the loss of free time more keenly at the moment as he was in work which was very much full time at the...
i like the grand feel of the poem, a very appropriate portrayal of Putin's current regime as a continuation of the old(?) idea of Empires, now returned with a vengeance, and a tragic waste of life to Europe. It seems very evil still to me that...
C S Lewis did include Dionysian Greek creatures in his Narnia books, such as Fauns, Centaurs, Dryads, Nymphs and Nyads. They seemed to make up quite a large proportion of the population of Narnia, and they were able to go into hiding during the...
They should have labelled it more clearly. However Earl Grey is a pleasant variant from normal tea in my opinion! I am sure it has enabled me to write certain pieces I might not otherwise have written over the years.
An awful tragedy! I think we knew the final figures were going to be a lot higher given that they are just counting the bodies. When we see the pictures and hear the detailed stories it brings the cruelty of this disaster closer to us. The...
Could this be the future? Can we construct a virtual or everlasting heaven? Great writing, characters remembering and re-experiencing life, and maybe going to heaven?
This really was a good piece. You really manage to show the negative feeling of the funeral and the low mood of the narrator perfectly. You get the feeling that his life and good memories are very much in the past and gone.
Nice poem! It certainly paints the scene. This come from a scene in a romantic film with Tom Hanks in it does it not? It rings a bell, but it is a while since I saw it. I like the idea of repainting a scene from a good film!
There is always something
Posted on Thu, 02 Mar 2023
There is always something going on, news replacing yesterday's news! You sum it up very truthfully!
Read full commentPosted in And We Move On
i like the grand feel of the
Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2023
i like the grand feel of the poem, a very appropriate portrayal of Putin's current regime as a continuation of the old(?) idea of Empires, now returned with a vengeance, and a tragic waste of life to Europe. It seems very evil still to me that...
Read full commentPosted in Age of Empires
C S Lewis did include
Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2023
C S Lewis did include Dionysian Greek creatures in his Narnia books, such as Fauns, Centaurs, Dryads, Nymphs and Nyads. They seemed to make up quite a large proportion of the population of Narnia, and they were able to go into hiding during the...
Read full commentPosted in Charms Of Dionysus
Your writing will be a good
Posted on Wed, 22 Feb 2023
Your writing will be a good way to remember this tragedy looking back in future years, and some of the personal tragedies you outline.
Read full commentPosted in Christian Atsu.
They should have labelled it
Posted on Sun, 19 Feb 2023
They should have labelled it more clearly. However Earl Grey is a pleasant variant from normal tea in my opinion! I am sure it has enabled me to write certain pieces I might not otherwise have written over the years.
Read full commentPosted in LOL.
An awful tragedy! I think we
Posted on Fri, 10 Feb 2023
An awful tragedy! I think we knew the final figures were going to be a lot higher given that they are just counting the bodies. When we see the pictures and hear the detailed stories it brings the cruelty of this disaster closer to us. The...
Read full commentPosted in Negative Feedback From eBay.
Could this be the future? Can
Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2023
Could this be the future? Can we construct a virtual or everlasting heaven? Great writing, characters remembering and re-experiencing life, and maybe going to heaven?
Read full commentPosted in The Edge of Heaven
I do also think this is a
Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023
I do also think this is a great piece, very melancholic, and also very real. A very natural style, with humour and sadness!
Read full commentPosted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?
This really was a good piece.
Posted on Fri, 27 Jan 2023
This really was a good piece. You really manage to show the negative feeling of the funeral and the low mood of the narrator perfectly. You get the feeling that his life and good memories are very much in the past and gone.
Read full commentPosted in end of the pier
Nice poem! It certainly
Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023
Nice poem! It certainly paints the scene. This come from a scene in a romantic film with Tom Hanks in it does it not? It rings a bell, but it is a while since I saw it. I like the idea of repainting a scene from a good film!
Read full commentPosted in A View of the Hudson
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