David Kirtley

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I have 202 stories published in 9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 70232 times and 11 of my stories have been cherry picked.
32 of my 416 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 33 votes

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David Kirtley

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The Proud Man Of The Left

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Everything was cut and dried, quite straightforward. He knew what was right, and what was wrong, And what was Racist! Some of his friends were of...

The War (Against The Virus) Is Not Over!

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We were told we were fighting a war, against the virus, from the relative safety of our homes. Only the doctors and nurses, and care staff in the...

Nightmare In Trafalgar Square

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There was noise below. Thousands of people milled in the Square below. That was not entirely abnormal, in his occasional wakeful periods, when the...

Calban Attempts To Experience Life More Fully (Ch.18): Part 3: Section 2

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Calban has journeyed across the City to this dark and less inhabited area, where he hopes to find companionship and solutions to some of his problems. He needs courage to go where he has never been before. This is part of my 'Marta City and Gallanol In The Modern Age' novel, set in a futuristic world quite similar to our own. This is the second section of this part, describing the outcome of his expedition.

Calban Attempts To Experience Life More Fully (Ch.18): Part 3: Section 1

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Calban has journeyed across the City to this dark and less inhabited area, where he hopes to find companionship and solutions to some of his problems. He needs courage to go where he has never been before. This is part of my 'Marta City and Gallanol In The Modern Age' novel, set in a futuristic period, in a world quite similar to our own. Section 2 will follow soon.

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32 of my comments have received 33 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed this and the style

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2019

I enjoyed this and the style in which you write it. The natural debate which goes on in the hearts of modern christians when something like this happens! But maybe the congregation is just too easily pushed over?

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Posted in Two Gods.

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Very funny! You seem to know

Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2019

Very funny! You seem to know exactly what the characters might have said if they were in a comedy slapstick instead of Game of Thrones!

 

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Posted in Game of Moans 6: ‘Hand’

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An amusing way of

Posted on Fri, 19 Apr 2019

An amusing way of interpreting the characters in Game of Thrones! I enjoyed that.

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Posted in A Game of Scones

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The human body, and mind, is

Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019

The human body, and mind, is a miracle of nature. You have expressed it well here.

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Posted in Speedy Connections

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I did enjoy this piece. The

Posted on Tue, 01 Jan 2019

I did enjoy this piece. The difficulties of modern life and the worries of unforeseen health issues were well explained.

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Posted in Help For Hero's.

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Very appropriate I think to

Posted on Sun, 11 Nov 2018

Very appropriate I think to bring these issues together on Remembrance Day. I enjoyed and was interested to read the tales of the lives of your grandfather and father with the subject of homelessness which so often seems to afflict veterans and...

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Posted in Remembering isn't enough ...

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Very funny. I enjoyed that!

Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018

Very funny. I enjoyed that!

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Posted in Britney and Shania

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Thanks for your comment Elsie

Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017

Thanks for your comment Elsie. I agree we seem to have moved forward from the clinical academic marking exercise approach to literary criticism, which has got to be good news. I think we give more of a personal response now on abctales....

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Posted in Have We Written Too Much?

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Good piece, very effective.

Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016

Good piece, very effective.

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Posted in subjected/ subjugated

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I like the simple and direct

Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015

I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.

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Posted in 25/11/2015

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