David Kirtley

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My stories have been read 205086 times and 18 of my stories have been cherry picked.
180 of my 1,158 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 186 votes

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Civilians In War

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20/10/23 Of course civilians should be allowed to have the necessities, and the wounded and injured. Those are supposed to be the modern rules of war...

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180 of my comments have received 186 Great Feedback votes

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A great story, with a good

Posted on Wed, 04 Oct 2023

A great story, with a good few twists. I am starting to wonder which order to read it in, as Part 1 is the real conclusion, although it hasn't necessarilly finished. I still think Frank might survive, but how can he in the nuclear Armageddon? The...

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Posted in Devil's Advocate (Part Three of Three)

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I did enjoy your piece, which

Posted on Tue, 22 Aug 2023

I did enjoy your piece, which does remind me plenty of my school days too. I got my A Levels in 1982 so the period was just right for me. I remember the Falklands War and the crazy and incredible Thatcherite unemployment figures in the news, the...

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Posted in Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two of Two)

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You may be right about the AI

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

You may be right about the AI customer service, because at least the customer can access some knowledge that way. You are correct that this job probably was staffed by a lot of 'unhappy humans who only stay for a few months'. Half of our group...

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Posted in Tuesday Morning (How To Leave Your Job!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2

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Your version of Hot Cross Bun

Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2023

Your version of Hot Cross Bun Blues has certainly made me Feel a Whole Lot Better! You Made Me Smile (Again!). If I had a Hot Cross Bun left in our fridge/or larder I would have gone and eaten it straightaway without remorse! Unfortunately we do...

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Posted in Hot Cross Bun Blues

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The ballet dancing job sounds

Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2023

The ballet dancing job sounds very interesting Turlough, but I don't think Alfred would be much good at that either, although he does like a bit of Tchaikovsky from time to time. He will promise to avoid the Leeds area, thanks for the warning! He...

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Posted in Tuesday Morning (How To Leave Your Job!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 1

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Thanks for your comment Di

Posted on Tue, 08 Aug 2023

Thanks for your comment Di Hard. Your partner seems to have had a particularly difficult job as he was being obliged to sell. At least my (Alfred's!) job was aiming to help or answer callers' questions etc, even if doing a satisfactory job might...

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Posted in There’s a new sick line, for calling in sick apparently! By Alfred Muggins, Call Centre Agent!

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This is great science fiction

Posted on Tue, 01 Aug 2023

This is great science fiction and certainly gets us thinking and trying to work out what is real and what is not etc. (What did you say your name was again? Philip K ??) It also reminds me of the 'Total Recall' film and others like that.

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Posted in Second Life

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A rich and strong image

Posted on Wed, 12 Jul 2023

A rich and strong image creating poem about this castle (and would describe other ruins and castles too!)! You take us back into history and conjecture. We missed this one when we went to Pembrokeshire a couple of times in recent years, although...

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Posted in Castell Coch (Red Castle)

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That certainly was a good

Posted on Sat, 22 Jul 2023

That certainly was a good question to ask of the oppressor! That is quite a gripping insight into dictators, a good piece!

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Posted in The machinery of night

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Our world might soon become a

Posted on Thu, 27 Apr 2023

Our world might soon become a kind of museum to the dead if we all invested into these kind of holograms! Would we ever be able to go forward with our real lives? Great ideas and imagining of a future technology!

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Posted in Hereafter: A Holodog Story (Part Three of Three)

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