David Kirtley
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David Kirtley
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Magical Mystery Tour Part 5 : Mission Accomplished (Into the Liverpool Docklands!) by Alfred N.Muggins Section 3
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24/8/22 There was a wonderful plateau of outside cafes and restaurants at the top of some very futuristic steps, after which they descended to a...
Our Late Queen By Wendy Kirtley (my wife)
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(Departed 8/9/22) The mother of all the nations of the Commonwealth has served us well for 70 years, through thick and thin she was there, sad times...
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God Save The King : Charles III Comes Into His Inheritance by Alfred N.Muggins
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9/9/22 / 13/9/22 Alfred was rather pleased when our old Queen Elizabeth’s son, the erstwhile Prince Charles, was announced to have taken his own name...
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The Putin Interpretations : Neil Young Songs by Alfred N. Muggins (a big fan by the way!) Part 1
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Instead of ‘Cortez The Killer’, why not call the song ‘Putin The Killer’ :- Dancing across the Black Sea, What a killer, Bringing death to Mariupol...
Death of Queen Elizabeth II 8/9/22 The Thoughts Of Alfred N.Muggins
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9-11/9/22 Evolution not Revolution! She tried to keep her thoughts secret, To be the Diplomatic Queen, Which she always was! But anecdotes keep...
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Your story is developing well
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
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Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
A promising story, encourages
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...
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