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The Speech Writer Pt. 5

Mara was Pearl's best friend. That was how it had been since basically forever. They met in grade two because of Manyo. He was being mean to Pearl...

How can I have more feeling in this scene without making this more cringy?

It's supposed to be KIND OF emotional, for it's one that marks the start of a change in one of my characters. (Keep expectations low lol) I provide a little bit of context, and then the scene itself. How can I accomplish the goal in the title, or make it better in other ways?
Cherry

A River Dies Of Thirst

I stepped out into the downpour and felt the touch of rain, always so gently brutal. What will she inflict upon my weary body today? I bow my head...
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The Freedom Of Flying

Taking a break from my usual stories of 'The Speech Writer' to Write a poem. I'm feeling inspired today I've always wanted to fly. To lift my feet...
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The Speech Writer Pt. 4

Pearl stared blankly at the dark screen before her. In red text demanding for attention at the very top of the screen was the word ERROR! blinking in...
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The Speech Writer Pt. 3

Pearl had lied. She had lied to herself for over 5 years. Or maybe she hadn't, graduation was a long time ago, she could be grabbing at air. When...

The Speech Writer Pt. 2

Pearl was chosen to be a speech writer for the queen's brodcasts. This was an honourable job, but nobody from her class was jealous of Pearl. This...

Jason and Angel Meet

It's not an actual story. Moreso just a relatively brief introduction to the characters of the "story" in my head. Starts lighthearted, and then get's SLIGHTLY serious at the end. If it wasn't obvious, I am only really starting to get into writing. Any thoughts would be helpful.

The Speech Writer

Everyday Pearl would walk past the statue in town's square glistning a dark obsidian with crystal clear water elegantly pouring out. Pearl hated that...

A River Dies Of Thirst

I stepped out into the downpour and felt the touch of rain, always so gently brutal. What will she inflict on my weary body today? I bow my head...