hilary west

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I have 248 stories published in 21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 480494 times and 19 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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hilary west

I have been writing for over 25 years and some of my work is on here. In my time I have written novels, short stories, poetry, plays and assorted ephemera. I hope you enjoy your time discovering my site.

My stories

Scarlet House

Marie had been here for years; running away from home at sixteen she'd found a home in Scarlet House with all the other disaffected girls. They were...
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The Clockwork Mouse: Part Two

'We are happy here, Sarah, aren't we, just the two of us. I don't know what I'd do without you.' 'Yes, Mum, you mustn't worry about anything.' No,...
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The Clockwork Mouse: Part One

Sarah Mountford was thirty today. What should she do for her birthday? Her mother Anne had suggested she spend it with her. They could maybe go out...

The Garden of Songbird Charm Part Two

Soon the day would come to an end. Tomorrow Ned would visit to do the garden and it was also Robin and Claire's Mum's birthday. She was forty, so it...
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The Garden of Songbird Charm

In the garden of songbird charm Robin and Claire were doing some bird spotting. Robin had recently acquired a pair of folding binoculars, and he had...
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171 of my comments have received 173 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful poem, Rhiannon just

Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021

Beautiful poem, Rhiannon, just made for children, full of colour and imagination with wonderful rhymes and rhythms.

hilary   

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Posted in Big River, Big Life

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Sun, 08 Aug 2021

Hi Jenny,

This is lovely, Jenny. You have certainly captured some of the essence of the man. Have you read 'Fern Hill', one of his poems. It's about a wonderful childhood he had in the country when he wasn't in Swansea, where of course he...

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Posted in Fleeting Observations Of A Poet

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A very good warning, Rhiannon

Posted on Sat, 13 Mar 2021

A very good warning, Rhiannon. This was a nice poem full of rhyme and reason.

Hilary  

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Posted in Burglars beware!

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2016

Hi Rhiannon,

Very apposite offering for Easter, Rhiannon. There may be hope for us all in Christ's resurrection!

Best Wishes, HW  

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Posted in Examine the Evidence

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This is very sad and quite

Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025

This is very sad and quite shocking. Anybody with elderly relatives is going to be concerned. Terrible nothing is done to these monsters. It makes you despair !!!

hilary   

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Posted in John Attard.

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This is very meaningful. It

Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025

This is very meaningful. It makes you stop and think.

hilaryenlightened

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Posted in Assortment #1

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025

Hi Jenny,

This is a dreamy poem redolent of the Greek myths: nicely done !!!

hilary  

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Posted in A Poet's Greek Mythology

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Nice rhyme in the pattern of

Posted on Fri, 18 Jul 2025

Nice rhyme in the pattern of this poem, Rhiannon. I also liked the 'wriggley Wye'.

hilary  

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Posted in What do grown-ups mean by a ‘short’ walk?

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Lovely poem with the usual

Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025

Lovely poem with the usual aplomb. Loved 'naked ice horses', a sensual image !!!

hilary  

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Posted in After the Geese

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Hi,

Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025

Hi,

Lovely poem Jenny dealing with a great myth. It reminds me of the story of Hyacinthus who was hit with a discus I think and hyacinths grew up where he fell. You have made it live and breathe.

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Posted in Hollyhock Tears Or Whispers Of Gods.

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