hilary west
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I have 251 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 609341 times
and 19 of my stories have been cherry picked.
189 of my 1,349 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 191 votes
hilary west
I have been writing for over 25 years and some of my work is on here. In my time I have written novels, short stories, poetry, plays and assorted ephemera. I hope you enjoy your time discovering my site.
Hi,
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Hi,
The narrative is progressing nicely : some wonderful, descriptive writing. Waiting for the final curtain !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six)
Hi,
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
Hi,
I just loved the passage in italics; it was beautiful prose. Look forward to seeing it through !
hilary
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Four of Six)
hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
hi Rhiannon,
I don't think many conkers become trees. I remember hoardes of boys throwing up sticks to try and make them fall much to the consternation of neighbours. Nice poem : rich !
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Shiny treasure
hi.
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
hi.
I liked this poem. Some interesting use of language. It works !
hilary
Read full commentPosted in The Cockerel Crows
hi,
Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022
hi,
I like it too, Sean: short and sweet !
hilary
Read full commentPosted in the magical music of moonlight
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Hi Rhiannon,
I enjoyed the fruitiness of this, some engaging rhymes too. An enjoyable read !
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Herefordshire Harvest
Hi marandina.
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Hi marandina.
I loved the description of the imps, with their red torsos, furry legs and cloven hooves. This shadow king seems sinister; I want to know how it all turns out. Fascinating !
hilary ...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Three of Six)
Hi,
Posted on Fri, 23 Sep 2022
Hi,
I think there's something comforting about the sound of the rain. Your poem had that effect on me too.
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Welcome sound
Hi marandina,
Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022
Hi marandina,
What with Harry Potter and such this sort of stuff is incredibly popular. Enjoying reading, bringing out the kid in me.
hilary
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)
Hi Jenny,
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
Hi Jenny,
Very dreamy and nice olfactories too. I loved the squelchiness underfoot !
hilary
Read full commentPosted in In Lucid Dreams
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