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My stories have been read 102826 times
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11 of my 317 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 11 votes
Adam Large
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Things I learned by the age of ten
How to eat candyfloss at the fairground while riding the dodgems. How to hold my breath diving for dad’s shaving brush in the bath. How to confirm...
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Ever after
What if he sank to depths unknown, to rise once more until his dulling sight renewed
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Greenfinch
You always knew how to fly...
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I enjoyed this poem. I liked
Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021
I enjoyed this poem. I liked the way it got more frenzied as it went on, unfortunately a bit like the addiction itself.
If the money each week is saved, after ten years you've got yourself over a grand. That's not a bad win!
Read full commentPosted in Being Careful What You Wish For
Really captured the scene
Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2020
Really captured the scene well, like some niftily produced video footage.
I particularly enjoyed verse 3.
Read full commentPosted in Peace In The Forest
This is wonderful. So
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
This is wonderful. So evocative, with some lovely details - too many to pick and highlight.
A real transporter. I completely felt like I was there waiting for the saveloys to arrive, the smell driving me insane after a hard day's graft. I...
Read full commentPosted in The Pub
I enjoyed how this overflowed
Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019
I enjoyed how this overflowed with content despite its brevity. A hard feat to pull off. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in The End of a Brighter November Day
Very well written. You have
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
Very well written. You have captured the moment perfectly. Dialogue and narration has a good balance.
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
Some parts of us are sacred
Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018
Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.
Read full commentPosted in My Dreams are Safe (IP)
I'll be honest with you. My
Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017
I'll be honest with you. My concentration is poor at the best of times and it takes a lot for me to be able to read a story here all in one go, but this one just kept me reading. You have a really great style of writing. I loved the first person...
Read full commentPosted in The agony and the ecstacy
Thanks for the pick, that's
Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017
Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?
Read full commentPosted in Traces
Well deserved. A really
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017
Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity.
Read full commentPosted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.
Beautifully written and
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2014
Beautifully written and really very moving. I totally understand the fact that everything once owned leaves a trace behind, often impossible to let go of, no matter how small or insignificant it may appear on the outside.
Congratulations...
Read full commentPosted in What Remains
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