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I have 150 stories published in
one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 71376 times
and 76 of my stories have been cherry picked.
10 of my 291 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 10 votes
Adam Large
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the in-between places
Leaving little behind with little to lose...
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these mist-covered mountains
I can smell her. It's all over your clothes. I think it's the one I used to wear, the one you used to like before all this began. We sit there...
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View from my window
I watched the trees from my window, leaves trampolined on kind winds, their honey smiles
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Night-shift
Bed. Late You arrived before me football matches in your ears all irate lights were out stumbling to get in Your back a wall almost touching mine our...
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The Everything
In my head I'd packed everything I needed for the rest of my life.
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This is wonderful. So
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
This is wonderful. So evocative, with some lovely details - too many to pick and highlight.
A real transporter. I completely felt like I was there waiting for the saveloys to arrive, the smell driving me insane after a hard day's graft. I...
Read full commentPosted in The Pub
I enjoyed how this overflowed
Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019
I enjoyed how this overflowed with content despite its brevity. A hard feat to pull off. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in The End of a Brighter November Day
Very well written. You have
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
Very well written. You have captured the moment perfectly. Dialogue and narration has a good balance.
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
Some parts of us are sacred
Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018
Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.
Read full commentPosted in My Dreams are Safe (IP)
I'll be honest with you. My
Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017
I'll be honest with you. My concentration is poor at the best of times and it takes a lot for me to be able to read a story here all in one go, but this one just kept me reading. You have a really great style of writing. I loved the first person...
Read full commentPosted in The agony and the ecstacy
I really enjoyed this on so
Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017
I really enjoyed this on so many levels. I enjoyed the train journey idea and how travel is about being in between places, something comforting in that I've always thought. Maybe a chance to reflect on what was, might have been. It was sharp,...
Read full commentPosted in A Philanderer on the Night Train
Thanks for the pick, that's
Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017
Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?
Read full commentPosted in Traces
Well deserved. A really
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017
Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity.
Read full commentPosted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.
Beautifully written and
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2014
Beautifully written and really very moving. I totally understand the fact that everything once owned leaves a trace behind, often impossible to let go of, no matter how small or insignificant it may appear on the outside.
Congratulations...
Read full commentPosted in What Remains
This really hits the spot -
Posted on Wed, 27 Nov 2013
This really hits the spot - poignant and candid and the absorbing identification with nature. A great piece of writing keeps you wide-eyed to the end and mine were just so. Well done on the Cherries!
Read full commentPosted in When you've Stopped the Clocks, Cut off the Phone, Placated the Dog...