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I have 142 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 67671 times and 71 of my stories have been cherry picked.
9 of my 278 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 9 votes

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My collections

Rainbow World

My stories

Daddy, come home

By hoalarg1 on Fri, 27 Mar 2020

The mirror you gave me one childhood
Love
Poem
Certificate U

Close to home

By hoalarg1 on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

I wasn't expecting to find you, not stuck to the muck and the grime
Spiritual
Poem
Certificate U
Cherry

forever young

By hoalarg1 on Tue, 10 Mar 2020

ode to summer fun
Children's
Nature
Poem
Certificate U
1 likes

Winter Trees

By hoalarg1 on Wed, 04 Mar 2020

A short poem
Nature
Poem
Certificate U
1 likes

One more time

By hoalarg1 on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

His name was Martin...
Autobiography
Non-fiction
Certificate 12
1 likes

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9 of my comments have received 9 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed how this overflowed

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

I enjoyed how this overflowed with content despite its brevity. A hard feat to pull off. Well done.

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Posted in The End of a Brighter November Day

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Very well written. You have

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

Very well written. You have captured the moment perfectly. Dialogue and narration has a good balance.

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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Some parts of us are sacred

Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018

Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.

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Posted in My Dreams are Safe (IP)

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I'll be honest with you. My

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

I'll be honest with you. My concentration is poor at the best of times and it takes a lot for me to be able to read a story here all in one go, but this one just kept me reading. You have a really great style of writing. I loved the first person...

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Posted in The agony and the ecstacy

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 I really enjoyed this on so

Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017

 I really enjoyed this on so many levels. I enjoyed the train journey idea and how travel is about being in between places, something comforting in that I've always thought. Maybe a chance to reflect on what was, might have been. It was sharp,...

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Posted in A Philanderer on the Night Train

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Thanks for the pick, that's

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?

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Posted in Traces

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Well deserved. A really

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity. 

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Posted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.

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Beautifully written and

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2014

Beautifully written and really very moving. I totally understand the fact that everything once owned leaves a trace behind, often impossible to let go of, no matter how small or insignificant it may appear on the outside.

Congratulations...

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Posted in What Remains

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This really hits the spot -

Posted on Wed, 27 Nov 2013

This really hits the spot - poignant and candid and the absorbing identification with nature. A great piece of writing keeps you wide-eyed to the end and mine were just so. Well done on the Cherries!

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Posted in When you've Stopped the Clocks, Cut off the Phone, Placated the Dog...