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I have 174 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 115006 times and 106 of my stories have been cherry picked.
12 of my 324 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 12 votes

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Gold cherry
Poem of the week

Forever

Forever, we met one childhood...
Cherry

Trees

Some trees stand like they just know their roots run through them (Wikimedia image copyright)
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Gold cherry

The mayfly

You are anything but transient...
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Gold cherry

Hope

A three line poem
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mountains

A four line poem
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12 of my comments have received 12 Great Feedback votes

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Just sublime. I can reach out

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022

Just sublime. I can reach out and feel the delicacy of every word, fragile yet strong. 

'soft as forgetting' - wonderful! 

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Posted in butterfly moment

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I enjoyed this poem. I liked

Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021

I enjoyed this poem. I liked the way it got more frenzied as it went on, unfortunately a bit like the addiction itself.

If the money each week is saved, after ten years you've got yourself over a grand. That's not a bad win!

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Posted in Being Careful What You Wish For

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Really captured the scene

Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2020

Really captured the scene well, like some niftily produced video footage.

I particularly enjoyed verse 3.

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Posted in Peace In The Forest

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This is wonderful. So

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020

This is wonderful. So evocative, with some lovely details - too many to pick and highlight.

A real transporter. I completely felt like I was there waiting for the saveloys to arrive, the smell driving me insane after a hard day's graft. I...

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Posted in The Pub

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I enjoyed how this overflowed

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

I enjoyed how this overflowed with content despite its brevity. A hard feat to pull off. Well done.

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Posted in The End of a Brighter November Day

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Very well written. You have

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

Very well written. You have captured the moment perfectly. Dialogue and narration has a good balance.

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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Some parts of us are sacred

Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018

Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.

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Posted in My Dreams are Safe (IP)

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I'll be honest with you. My

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

I'll be honest with you. My concentration is poor at the best of times and it takes a lot for me to be able to read a story here all in one go, but this one just kept me reading. You have a really great style of writing. I loved the first person...

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Posted in The agony and the ecstacy

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Thanks for the pick, that's

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?

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Posted in Traces

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Well deserved. A really

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity. 

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Posted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.

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