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I have 119 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 41957 times and 45 of my stories have been cherry picked.
6 of my 247 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 6 votes

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Sshhh

No one had the guts to tell the children that their life could be a misery. (Creative commons image)
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Cherry

You

Your light licked the corners of my locked rooms (Creative commons image)
Cherry

Ten feet small

You know when you pick up the recycling bag and the bottom falls out of it halfway across the kitchen? Well that’s how my life used to feel every day...

Waves

I threw you a life jacket
Gold cherry

Traces

I looked for you (Creative commons image contribution - share alike 2.0 Generic.)

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6 of my comments have received 6 Great Feedback votes

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 I really enjoyed this on so

Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017

 I really enjoyed this on so many levels. I enjoyed the train journey idea and how travel is about being in between places, something comforting in that I've always thought. Maybe a chance to reflect on what was, might have been. It was sharp,...

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Posted in A Philanderer on the Night Train

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Thanks for the pick, that's

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?

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Posted in Traces

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Well deserved. A really

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity. 

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Posted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.

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Beautifully written and

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2014

Beautifully written and really very moving. I totally understand the fact that everything once owned leaves a trace behind, often impossible to let go of, no matter how small or insignificant it may appear on the outside.

Congratulations...

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Posted in What Remains

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This is a truly magical piece

Posted on Wed, 27 Nov 2013

This is a truly magical piece of writing. The imagery is so apt and carries me right there. What a talent you have! So many lines made me sit up and choosing my favourite would be almost impossible, although I particularly enjoyed:

'yet...

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Posted in A Study in Pysanky

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This really hits the spot -

Posted on Wed, 27 Nov 2013

This really hits the spot - poignant and candid and the absorbing identification with nature. A great piece of writing keeps you wide-eyed to the end and mine were just so. Well done on the Cherries!

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Posted in When you've Stopped the Clocks, Cut off the Phone, Placated the Dog...