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I have 150 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 71376 times and 76 of my stories have been cherry picked.
10 of my 291 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 10 votes

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Gold cherry

the in-between places

Leaving little behind with little to lose...
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Cherry

these mist-covered mountains

I can smell her. It's all over your clothes. I think it's the one I used to wear, the one you used to like before all this began. We sit there...

View from my window

I watched the trees from my window, leaves trampolined on kind winds, their honey smiles

Night-shift

Bed. Late You arrived before me football matches in your ears all irate lights were out stumbling to get in Your back a wall almost touching mine our...
Cherry

The Everything

In my head I'd packed everything I needed for the rest of my life.

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10 of my comments have received 10 Great Feedback votes

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This is wonderful. So

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020

This is wonderful. So evocative, with some lovely details - too many to pick and highlight.

A real transporter. I completely felt like I was there waiting for the saveloys to arrive, the smell driving me insane after a hard day's graft. I...

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Posted in The Pub

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I enjoyed how this overflowed

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019

I enjoyed how this overflowed with content despite its brevity. A hard feat to pull off. Well done.

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Posted in The End of a Brighter November Day

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Very well written. You have

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

Very well written. You have captured the moment perfectly. Dialogue and narration has a good balance.

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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Some parts of us are sacred

Posted on Sat, 21 Apr 2018

Some parts of us are sacred and remain safe and untouched; they can be seen by us in nature. A lovely read.

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Posted in My Dreams are Safe (IP)

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I'll be honest with you. My

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

I'll be honest with you. My concentration is poor at the best of times and it takes a lot for me to be able to read a story here all in one go, but this one just kept me reading. You have a really great style of writing. I loved the first person...

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Posted in The agony and the ecstacy

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 I really enjoyed this on so

Posted on Thu, 20 Jul 2017

 I really enjoyed this on so many levels. I enjoyed the train journey idea and how travel is about being in between places, something comforting in that I've always thought. Maybe a chance to reflect on what was, might have been. It was sharp,...

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Posted in A Philanderer on the Night Train

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Thanks for the pick, that's

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Thanks for the pick, that's great. I hope I have added the contribution correctly?

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Posted in Traces

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Well deserved. A really

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

Well deserved. A really strong voice threads through this, with great integrity. 

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Posted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.

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Beautifully written and

Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2014

Beautifully written and really very moving. I totally understand the fact that everything once owned leaves a trace behind, often impossible to let go of, no matter how small or insignificant it may appear on the outside.

Congratulations...

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Posted in What Remains

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This really hits the spot -

Posted on Wed, 27 Nov 2013

This really hits the spot - poignant and candid and the absorbing identification with nature. A great piece of writing keeps you wide-eyed to the end and mine were just so. Well done on the Cherries!

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Posted in When you've Stopped the Clocks, Cut off the Phone, Placated the Dog...