Blackbird

Gold cherry

By hoalarg1

Mon, 19 May 2025
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12 comments
 

 

blackbird guides the light
ceaseless song, resounding heart
nests in us at dawn

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by Jessiibear on

This is so serene and soulful. I love how the blackbird becomes a kind of inner compass—guiding the light, the heart, even the dawn. It lingers.

Jessheart

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Love the idea of guiding in the light, as if hearing the beauty of this song persuades Day to visit Earth and look around

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thank you Di_Hard, appreciate the feedback and the time taken to comment.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Gorgeous poem that said so much in so few words.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thank you, Jenny. I really do find pleasure in describing something so great in so few words.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

A very beautiful poem from Hoalarg is Pick of the day! Please do share if you can

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thanks very much. A lovely surprise.

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Brilliant pick - congratulations Hoalarg for this essence of a blackbird. Mine's singing his heart out as I type this

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thank you - much appreciated.

 

Submitted by D G Moody on

A lovely Haiku, and it brings the Blackbirds essence to life.

Dougie Moody

Submitted by onemorething on

Gorgeous!