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A pensive poem of awareness
Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2016
A pensive poem of awareness that asks the questions: Who am I? Why do I exist?
Hope I've got the meaning right, it was just the way I percieved it.
Loved the lines:
Walked naively through the
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Posted in Fear of existence
Wow! Is one of the words I
Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2014
Wow! Is one of the words I would use to describe what I've just read.
An entoxicating, powerful piece, that developed and grew stronger as I read.
Great work...and I really mean that.
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Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2014
I think we all new a Miss Jones when we were at school. We had a teacher called Miss Evans, she was a spinster and always wore glasses hung from a chain, they would sit on the end of her nose and she would look down when...Read full comment
Posted in The Naming of Plants
Posted on Tue, 11 Jul 2017
You've given the reader a momentary glance into the life of this beautiful mysterious creature and its surroundings. Only wish there was more. You've such a flair for writing the poetry of nature.
So glad you share it with...Read full comment
Posted in Seals in the Currents
Life is so fragile, none of
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Life is so fragile, none of us know when it will come. It's strange how I came to read this, because only yesterday I spent the afternoon with my son, something we very rarely do now adays. Perhaps we all need to take more time out with those we...Read full comment
Posted in Fifth of July
Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2017
yes you're right, it's not good to keep things bottled up inside. The truth is that I have moments when I'm okay, then others where I'm scared out of my mind and become teary. Don't think I've been this frightened about anything...Read full comment
Posted in I'm Going Through Changes