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A pensive poem of awareness
Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2016
A pensive poem of awareness that asks the questions: Who am I? Why do I exist?
Hope I've got the meaning right, it was just the way I percieved it.
Loved the lines:
Walked naively through the
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Posted in Fear of existence
Wow! Is one of the words I
Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2014
Wow! Is one of the words I would use to describe what I've just read.
An entoxicating, powerful piece, that developed and grew stronger as I read.
Great work...and I really mean that.
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Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2014
I think we all new a Miss Jones when we were at school. We had a teacher called Miss Evans, she was a spinster and always wore glasses hung from a chain, they would sit on the end of her nose and she would look down when...Read full comment
Posted in The Naming of Plants
Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2018
you know I think you were born in the wrong era. Your words are so magical and give me a sense of Pre-Raphaelite which I so adore. Also the love you convey in this poem is so beautifully told.
Engaging, passionate...Read full comment
Posted in Lancelot's Lament.
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2018
I loved your impression of my poem. Sunsets are all different as you so rightly pointed out. To have a hospital window facing directly where the sun rises is a unique experience in itself, especially when it looks out over the...Read full comment
Posted in Undying Beauty