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Those feelings of emotional torcher, that menacing danger. One day you would grow up to be a man, a mouse no more, but still suffering the scars of those memories.
I could feel your distress within each word. I hope you find the strength...
I love the idea of the story coming from the road itself. I think if old roads could speak, what a story they'd have to tell, of the history behind how it started out and what it then became is like an autobiography, which you described so well...
had to look up on the internet about the Old Man of Coniston, never having heard of it before. Your description gave a sense of understanding about the natural beauty and the wildness which was so inviting.
The similarity of the longing
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015
The similarity of the longing for love and the willing expression given to the little bird, comes across perfectly in this poem Tina.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Supplication
This is a stunning piece of
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
This is a stunning piece of writing Rhiannon, it has all the portrayals of the season.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in November
Very funny, put a smile on my
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
Very funny, put a smile on my face.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Audacious Auditions
There's a haunting quality to
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
There's a haunting quality to this poem that I really enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Home
Those feelings of emotional
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
Those feelings of emotional torcher, that menacing danger. One day you would grow up to be a man, a mouse no more, but still suffering the scars of those memories.
I could feel your distress within each word. I hope you find the strength...
Read full commentPosted in One Day The Mouse Will Roar
Hi Tina,
Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015
Hi Tina,
your skill at explaining going back to rekindle that spark in a relationship, is spot on in this poem.
The emotional feelings of someone getting old, the fear of loosing memory is so sad and is precisely how you explain...
Read full commentPosted in 'Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World'
Meadows of poppies are such a
Posted on Sun, 08 Nov 2015
Meadows of poppies are such a rare thing to see, so when they appear in your garden, it's such a joy, as is your poem Tina.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Blithe Spirit
I love the idea of the story
Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2015
I love the idea of the story coming from the road itself. I think if old roads could speak, what a story they'd have to tell, of the history behind how it started out and what it then became is like an autobiography, which you described so well...
Read full commentPosted in My Rise and Fall (I am a road) (Poetry Monthly)
Hi ray,
Posted on Fri, 18 Sep 2015
Hi ray,
Very dramatic and full of mystery. I thought this was great and definitely one to read out loud.
Congrats on the well deserved cherries.
Jenny.
Posted in We Will
Hi Tina,
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
Hi Tina,
had to look up on the internet about the Old Man of Coniston, never having heard of it before. Your description gave a sense of understanding about the natural beauty and the wildness which was so inviting.
One part puzzled...
Read full commentPosted in 'The Old Man of Coniston'
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